Swaron FF:U & Me..Back to Us.Prt-10 pg-135 - Page 55

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Friends ...thanx a lot for liking my work...i am really very sorry for updating late... also m really sorry for not replying to your lovely comments...will do that soon...please continue commenting as they are my sole inspiration for writing ...will be waiting for ur comments and feedback(positive and negative all are welcomed)


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Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Hey guys...This is the 9th chapter of this FF...hope you all will like it ...sorry for being late...i am really busy these days...i thought of updating after 3rd Nov...but got few PMs and scraps ...demanding for an update...so tried to write this ... thank you so much for these lovely comments ...they are really very encouraging...they inspire me to continue writing...didn't get time for proof reading...please bear me with mistakes...😊

Thanks Nehal...for ur help and feedback...it was so sweet of you ...really...😊


Recap :

Pari-Tanya feeling a strange bond with each other…swayam getting signs from his heart of sharon being alive….


Chapter – 9

SHE MET SHARON'S LOOK ALIKE…LOOK ALIKE??HOW IS IT POSSIBLE?I DOUBT …IF SHE REALLY REMEMBERS HER MOM'S FACE…..BUT….

But …I can't take any chance…I am getting this strange feeling of someone really close to my heart being close to me…being around me…is it possible that she is here…in Shimla……is it really possible…??


Tanya:Daddyyy….m hungry…she gestured moving her right hand on her tiny tummy…

Swayam came out of his thoughts….

Yess…yes princess…lets go & have lunch..its Tanya & daddy time….he picked her up in the air and rubbed his face on her tummy …she giggled …


They went back to the farm house and started having lunch…all the time Tanya kept repeating about her new friend …her ANGEL…..Swayam was surprised to see her connecting so well with an unknown person….

Tanya:u know Daddy…my angel….


Swayam(he smiled…he didn't know why…..but he was feeling really happy to hear about this girl from Tanya…as if…he was having some connection with her …he was feeling a strange kind of pleasure hearing the word "ANGEL" from Tanya…his heart was running in a faster pace whenever Tanya mentioned about HER…he was very familiar with this feeling…only one Girl…in this world was able to have such effect on HIS HEART….HIS SHARON…then why his heart is reacting in same manner to this girl…THIS GIRL…)


My angel is having the most beautiful pair of eyes …just like mine…she batted her eyelashes…looking adorable…


Her lips are just like rose petals ….so soft and pink…u know daddy…she kissed me here & here….she kept her tiny finger on her cheeks….one by one….swayam smiled at his princess…he was lost in her cuteness & innocence…normally he reacts in a different manner when Tanya meets or talks to any stranger…but…today he was feeling something different…he was not being possessive about his little angel…when she was mentioning her ANGEL….he cuddled her cutely & gave a small peck on her cheek…


Angel kissed me there…sometimes back….she said smiling at him…pointing towards her soft cheek…


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He entered their house…loosened his tie with one hand and carrying a briefcase on the other hand…. It was a really tiring day for him …back to back meetings with company board of directors…clients…


Sharon…Sharoonn…where are you? he called her name…while entering the hall…

Koi ghar pe nehi he kya?he asked himself…

Suddenly light went…it was all dark…

Bhagwan Kaka…light kyu chala gaya….jara check kisjiye na….he shouted…

Nobody answred….

Sharon…kahan hooo?

Chhhunnn…chunnn…chunn…chunnn

He heard a sweet sound…he recognized the sound…it's the sweet melody of her anklets…

He tried to know the direction..the sound is coming from….

Chhhunnn…chunnn…chunn…chunnn

The sound moved towards upstairs…..he followed the sound…whole house was in dark…only the moonlight coming from the windows was helping him …showing him the path and HER ANKLETS…leading him …he reached their bedroom…

Where are you sharon….tadpa kyu rahi ho…samne kyu nehi aati…he pleaded…

Chhhunnn…chunnn…

He smiled at her innocence ….

Ohk my princess…you want to play the game…THE GAME… u want me to search for you……no problem…but Swayam Shekhawat always plays fair game…….i can hear the sweet melody of your anklets….

Ooopss….she bite her lips…& tried to take out her anklets….

Don't bite your lips baby…that's my job…leave it to me…he teased her …


She blushed …to the deepest shed of red…gosh…swayam why do you have this effect on me….i can't think straight when you are around…u work like my personal drug……she whispered to herself…

She felt a strong pair of arms around her tiny waist ….


Ahhh…meri jaan...i can hear your heart beats and you are whispering here…and you think I can't search you…he whispered softly…in her ears…he hugged her from back…and moved his fingers on her creamy and soft skin of her waist….her heart started beating harder…as if it would jump out of her chest any time…he kissed moved her hair from her back …she was wearing a backless blouse ….he moved his hand towards her neck…..up & down…her breaths became heavy with the movement of his fingers…she was loosing her senses…he planted a trail of wet kisses on her creamy back…moved toward her nape…kissed it…played with her ear lobes…with his tongue…continued moving the other hand fingers on her navel….


Swayammm…she moaned his name..she was helpless…. that very moment…she just wanted to be HIS…HIS SHARON….


I love youuu..swayammm…she somehow managed say this line…


I love you too my love…HAPPY CONFESSION DAY ANNIVERSARY…..he said huskily near her ears…


You..you remembered…this day….she asked…


Of course baby.. today was the day you made your way to my house..my life..my heart…forever…how can I forget this day…he said...still rubbing his lips on her neck...


Ohh…swayam..she turned around…now she was standing in front him..facing him…her hands were rested on his chest…..which was beating loudly..chanting her name…..he saw her angelic face…in the moonlight coming from the bedroom window….her eyes…her lips…her cheeks…her hair…perfect creation of the creator…HIS SHARON….he was lost in her beauty …


Swayam…


Ummm…he replied ..still lost in her beautiful angelic face…


Make me urs….she said in a seductive tone..…blushing and feeling shy at the same time…


He smiled at his angel…


But you are already mine baby…he chuckled ...


Umm….she was trying hard to find words….she was playing with his shirt buttons…simultaneously …she had opened almost all the buttons…by now…her fingers were moving on his bare chest…


Swayammm…she said in fake anger…


Next moment she felt his soft lips on hers…...he kissed her gently with all his love and affection...she responded to the kiss in no time...she parted her lips and gave him a better access...his tongue entered her mouth and their tongues danced in unison..to the beautiful melody of love...their pure love...he picked her in his arms…. and walked towards their bed…without breaking the kiss…


They were lost in their world of love and passion…moon was peeping through the window...he was the witness of this beautiful scene...two angels...deeply in love...lost in each other...making love to each other ...two soul mates...


They were moaning each others name...their voices full of passion & love were creating a beautiful melody along with the wind-charm hanging near the window...


Swayamm…she said while adjusting her head on his bare chest ….in to a comfortable position…


hmmm…he replied…still lost in her addictive scent …her hair was covering his face…he was enjoying her weight on him …..


How did u know?…I was here…even after I removed my anklets…she asked innocently...

He smiled ….and pressed his lips on hers…

I can feel your presence sweetheart…my heartbeats give the sign that you are around…he said against her lips….

He kissed her again with all his love and affection.. she was feeling blessed to be in the arms of her love…the love of her life...


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I CAN FEEL YOUR PRESENCE SHARON….MY HEARTBEATS GIVE ME SIGNS WHEN YOU ARE AROUND…


He wiped his tears…and looked around…he was holding a picture of his Sharon …Tanya's sweet talks gave him a new hope…HOPE…


he decided….


mujhe usse milna hoga…ek baar toh dekhna hoga …kya Tanya sach bol rahi he ..…ya usse koi galti huyi he …..


Ramu kaka…he shouted…

Haan swayam baba…

Tanya kahan he?

Tanya baby bahar khel rahi thi…he answred …


Acha me bahar dekhta hu…use akele bahar kyu chhoda…


He ran outside ..he couldn't see Tanya anywhere…..


He checked all the places…he couldn't find Tanya…his heart started sinking…he can't even think being away from his little angel…it was impossible for him...


Tanya..Tanya…Tanya….he was running around the farm house …. looking for her …calling her name...


Tears started forming in his angelic eyes…he was already going through the pain of being away from his life...HIS SHARON…NOW…he just couldn't think further…where is Tanya…his little princess…


IF SHARON IS HIS HEART…TANYA IS HIS HEART BEAT….


She is their dream…the symbol of their love…


He was running around …searching for her …he was looking scared…pale….the fear of loosing his little angel was evident on his face…his eyes…..


He was getting restless ….. impatient….he was loosing his senses…


He was just checking random places…he didn't know..where to go…what to do….


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Kya hua Ramu kaka….she asked the old man….

aap pareshan kyu dikh rahe he…ghar pe sab thik toh he na…..she continued…

Pari beta….woo Tanya baby kahin mil nehi rahi……he answered…..with tension written on his wrinkle filled face….

TANYA….matlab wo farm house wali bachchi ….kahan gayi wo…she was in utter shock….it was hard grasp the fact for her….

Wo bahar khel rahi thi…abhi mil nehi rahi he…swayam baba aur me... hum usiko dhund rahe he….he continued…


Nehi….ye nehi ho sakta…TANYA…nehi kho sakti….NEHI KHO SAKTI…..she almost cried out loud the last line…


Tanya…her little angel…who gave her a new HOPE…..to live her LIFE...who made her feel special with her cute & innocent smile….who gave her the feeling of completeness…. that she belongs to someone…she is not alone….in this world….she couldn't resist the news of Tanya being missing ….


She was loosing her senses…becoming numb….

No…No…...I can't be weak now…I need to find her…I NEED TO FIND TANYA….she told to herself and ran towards the ground where she & Tanya met…


Somehow she felt …she will meet Tanya there …AGAIN…a strange power led her to that place….she was running towards that place …like a thirsty man runs in search of water…she didn't know why…but just after a brief meeting…TANYA has become her lifeline….

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He found himself near a big ground…..he saw a bunch of kids…playing there…..


He went closer….his heart started running faster …..he saw some HOPE….TANYA CAN BE HERE….he consoled himself….

He went closer….and he saw the most beautiful view of his life….

Few kids…standing beside a chair….they were playing the court members…two girls and two boys were dancing in front of them….all were clapping and enacting in their characters…


And he saw HER…with a small but beautiful tiara on her tiny head…her beautiful curls…her big greenish eyes…her rosy lips…her soft cheeks….her out of the world smile…which has the power to give a dead man the gift of life….HIS LITTLE PRINCESS….she was enacting a princess role in the play enacted by the group of kids….he smiled at his cute princess...he was relieved to see her safe...


Suddenly ...he felt something…someone close to his heart …being very close to him….he could hear the person's heart beats….he recognized the heart beats….he can recognize those heart beats…even in the crowd of thousands of people…


He turned back….he saw HER…his heart skipped a beat...then it started beating harder and harder…any moment it would jump out of his chest…out of joy….tears rolled on his cheeks….TEARS OF JOY….HIS EYES….WERE FILLED WITH TEARS OF JOY….THEY WERE CONVEYING THOUSANDS OF EMOTIONS AT ONCE…FOR HER ….


EMOTIONS OF PURE LOVE,CARE,PROTECTION,AFFECTION…


She saw THOSE EYES….the same pair eyes…which were very familiar to her ...SHE HAS SEEN THEM IN HER DREAMS…every night…..for last three years….


Those EYES were full of tears….all she could see in those deep dark chocolate brown orbs….was her reflection….she went numb….she was loosing her senses….her heart started beating harder and harder…THOSE eyes were controlling her heart beats…her breath…her senses….HER LIFE….


She looked into THOSE EYES…...tears rolled down from her eyes….she trembled …& passed out there ….


Before she could touch the ground…she felt a strong pair of arms….holding her …protectively…. SHE FELT SECURE IN THOSE ARMS…AS IF…SHE BELONGED THERE ….


She saw those deep dark chocolate brown eyes close to her...staring at her...they were full of love...for her...she looked into THOSE EYES...…. before loosing her senses completely…



Precap:

"Daddy ...do u know my Angel"

"I can see love in your eyes...love for me..."



So how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment... i will wait for your comments and feedback


I know the update was veryyy long...u can read it in two three days...i am not in a hurry to update the next part... 😉

I am not very good at writing romantic parts...just tried...hope its not very bad..

Next update will be on page- 130...(i know we are quite far from pg-130..take your time...)😊


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Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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RES for nisha

unres
awesome update dipu di
loved it to the core ❤️
the swaron scene in flashback was so well penned down,that i could picturise the whole thing going on in front of my eyes
Swaron romance☺️
awiee swayam can hear her heartbeats and feel her presence😳
the alteration between past and present was amazingly done👍🏼
finally swayam and sharon saw each other😃
eagerly waiting for the next updart
pls update soon.
pretty pls😳
Thanks for the pm

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AWESOME di...👏luv every bit of it...
tanya is so adorable...really an angel
...her cute expressions while describing PARI was so cuteee...
Swayum feeling some strange attraction towards pari...
why not after all she is his life...the flash back was hawt!!!...

"Ahhh…meri jaan...
i can hear your heart beats and you are whispering here…
and you think I can't search you…he whispered softly…in her ears…
"

I CAN FEEL YOUR PRESENCE SHARON….MY HEARTBEATS GIVE ME SIGNS WHEN YOU ARE AROUND…
i loved these lines...swayum will be swayum ...and the biigg surprise came...swaron met...yippie...i was so waiting for this...as always the update was amazing...awesome...great work di...loved it...nd love you for giving such a nice update...😊
ab to update kar hi dena...😆


Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Deepu di 🤗You updated
res
unres
Amazing update !!
beautifully written 👏
Tanya explaining abt her angel to swayam was adorable .
it was really nice to read abt the connection all three of them are feeling with each other .😊
the flashback was hot and romantic
finally sharon and swayam meet each other , sharon passes out in swayams arms .
why did u stop there di ???😭 i so wanted to read more .
now u say the next update is nowhere near , not fair .
eagerly waiting for the next part , update ASAP...
Edited by Tanuka_TanHa - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanuka_TanHa

Deepu di u updated

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hey swthrt ...yeah..finally updated...hope u will like the update 😊
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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha



hey swthrt ...yeah..finally updated...hope u will like the update 😊

I didn't like the update , I loved it 👍🏼
aur yeh update ekdum lamba nahi tha , humesha itne length ka ya phir isse zyada ke updated dena 😊
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Originally posted by: Tanuka_TanHa

I didn't like the update , I loved it 👍🏼
aur yeh update ekdum lamba nahi tha , humesha itne length ka ya phir isse zyada ke updated dena 😊




hehe...isse lamba updatee..me mar jaungi ..likhte likhte😆


Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Yayyy!!!!! i loved it...tanya missing..i loves swayam's love towards tanya...i mean he is soo damn protective about her...just love this swayam..and fikar not jaani 130 tak lejana hamra kaam hai...😉

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