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sarra0

@sarra0

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#521

I thou she had been subjected to everything possible there cudnt b anything else now but how wrong I was, so it was his picture she had a cut out of and it was him she considered her prince and look he turned her fairytale into a nightmare. she is frozen in limbo wud she even want to come out of it, cud she ever trust him.

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sree89

@sree89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#522

well i don't know what new words are there in my dictionary to tell you how good a writer you are😆😆...

even if i know better i couldn't cause the lump in my throat clouds my thinking process...i loved all your ss and oses...but this one ...i felt like connecting to this as i had connected to the old ipk..where i would dream of the next day...

you describe their emotions so well...

well Arnav wouln't be able to bring the old khushi back ...but if he can bring about a smile on her face then that's something...dunno what'll happen ...

but i wish she will overcome the trauma and realize tht although xtremel late,😭 her rajkumar undrstood his cinderella's worth...

wow...i have posted more than two lines...wht a surprise...well u r the one who induced me to post a comment first in this forum... i din't realise but it seems i have graduated from newbie..all thanx to u..😆😆

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tasneemtangle

@tasneemtangle

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Realllyyy goooddd pleaseee updateee sooon!!!

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anupama

@ak_maggi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

he was her raajkumar...😊 hmmm hadnt guess tht one...

liking d pattern of writing... flashbacks n present..

. its really effective...

she is atleast changed 0.1 % i suppose!

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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#525

Great Update!!😃

Feel Khushis pain!
Love the POV!

Arnavs really trying hard!
Really nice how hes taking care of her!
And also that he keeps reminders that he just deatroyed her life completely!

Hamare Rajkumar! Bechari Khushi...all her beautiful dreams shattered just cuz of an MU!😡

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Sanj

@-Sanj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Awsome Update...Loved It...Khushi ka dreame bahut scary tha...poor khushi usne Rajkumar ke sapne dekhe the...sab tut gaye...but Arnavya hua heart me uski bahut care kar raha hai...usne khushi ko ready kiya...usko payal pahnayi jiske khushi ko chahiye tha...Arnav khushi ne paper pe jogph heart shape me uska aur Arnav ka pic lagaya tha dekh liya...wating for next update...

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Isha

@gilmore

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

sry for thanking u for posting such a faboulas update

i hate tooo be busy in exams ahahhah but thx and waiting for her responce :d

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polly_mk

@polly_mk

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#528

Thanks for sending me the link to thread#2. Great updates (chap 4 & 5). Started feeling bad for Arnav... he is now realizing all the pain he gave her. He is in a lot of pain now!!

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#529

Superb update. Loved the chapter very very much

And love the way you write Khushi's POV, it feels right and flows with the story.

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asdfjkl

@asdfjkl

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#530

When you explained the dream it was so emotional, especially that last bit :(

I'm glad Arnav is trying, and he's attempting to bring back the old Khushi, but I don't think he will be able to do it. Even if he somehow gets her to start responding and everything there is no way she can forget the three months and all that torture!

The last part hurt the most. Arnav literally destroyed a naive 18-year old and crushed all her dreams.