KR FF ||Destiny Binds The Love|| chap 6 (page 13)* - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyy ur work is realy awsm..
plz do pm me whn u update next..😊
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pls pm me...
awsome yaar...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowie flight me bhi saath2...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing part 👏...
Kriyansh saath saath bethe hain 👍🏼...
Waiting to know what happens further in their journey 😉...
Continue soon 😊.
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Destiny...!!
I jus loved d update :)
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Awsome update ..!
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Jst nw read it. . . . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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woow..amazing start..pm me too😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hiii guys here the next chapter; I tried to write the long enough in a way to impress you''..so plz give the reviews and like'''.and Enjoy'''.


Chapter 3

Pin drop silence is what we can feel in between them''''except the twirling their head in the disappointment''...behaving like the child; they fought and now expecting each other to say Sorry''''but as child they was stubborn''''for the long time the silence was continue''but no one makes the start''.. always the bubble thinker came across them and says, " Why should I start''..I'm not starting'''..huhhh "

Meanwhile they didn't realize that they are thinking the same'''..but they were both right at their place'''.What will be they talk about''.." Wow what the new year's party we have?? "

Sigh Sigh Sigh

Rey was feeling bad for his friends behavior''..he felt regretted about that from the last night ''''but he just can't express it or just don't want to explore her for what his friends did was wrong''''.all the time he just want to''''but her disguising look makes him to Shut up'''.poor guy'''

Kria was no less than stubborn child'''''' she manage to plaster the disguising look on her face'''''' but she was really bored with the silence''''''who can be moan for such long time; and Kria was definitely not among them''''''but she can't deny that she was moan from the time the flight had started''''' she was only looking out of the window and admiring the sky, the birds freely flying'''''

Then it breaks''''' the silence breaks'''''

" S'.s'..sorry'."

She turned'''''.and looking at him''''Rey was actually in the guilt and saying sorry'''''

" What the crap''''' I warned you, don't, don't say it''''' but actually I said it'''Look Rey be cool'''.she is not going to bombard on you'''''look she is not looking like devil'''.." almost his mind was covering his unconsciousness ; he was in his seat not even looking at her''''' and he control over his mind and says again''''

" Sorry'''..what my friends did''''they didn't want to tease you for the dancing'''"

Kria is looking at him''''and now she doesn't feel the pride what the rich and brat boys had''''he was actually saying sorry'''.and more than that for his friends'''..that was not his fault'''..definitely not''''

" ohh c'mon Kria ab kya adalat me jake case karne wali ho?? Sorry bol raha hai na wo'''to to''.." and she speak''''.

" that's ok''.."

" huh'''" Rey turned at her '''' to face her''.to listen what she actually said''

" I said it's fine'''."

" ohh '''.thanks''.."

" Don't be''''.I said na It's Ok''.."

" That's why I'm saying thanks na''''"

Now she was irritated with this sorry and thanks session'.." ohhk'''.ab bas hua'''u said sorry'..I said Fine''..; U said thanks '''..I said Ok''''let's finish it'''."

" yah'''.that's right'''cool'''.now no arguments'''..!! " he paused and take a breath''''" finally'''. Happy Rey'?"

And he was bored with the silence mode so he just cursed himself to being the dumb'''..

" So heading to Mumbai'..??"'..questioned unexpected for answer''.

" Ohhh'..actually this flight only goes to Mumbai'.!! ", she giggled'. She don' want to realize him for what the foolish question he asked'''cause she can sense the uncomforted situation between them after that night'''..she want to ease out that tension'''.

" Yaah''right''." , and he also giggled for his stupid question'''.." Rey of course to Mumbai''.stupid'''." he was tapping his fingers on the seat rod'''..

" so new in Dehradun?? " Kria was as expected '.used to talk''''

" Yahh'..I came for the new year's eve''.for my friends''''."

" that's why Club me sab tod fod kardi'''' Dehradun ko nahi ho isliye?? " she is pulling his leg'''..how master she was in that''.

" No''not like that'''." He answered it like he didn't do that intentionally''..

" I'm just joking''''please don't take it seriously'''.. wo to actually tumhare friends ke wajah se mai gussa ho gai thi''''I really didn't complain to police intentionally''''."

" okk''' chill'''..let's just forget about that incident''.. but from yesterday's scene I found U'r Mom really loves u'''she is not coming with u'''??"

Kria remembered how much her Mom, hates the dancing and Kria going to Mumbai only for that dancing'''..and she was in her thoughts and answered'''.

" Haa''Maa ko mera sapna''' "

But before she complete her sentence'''..Rey interrupted,

" Hey'''.Meri Sapna right''''' Slip of toungue''''.yaah that's'''..?"

Kria was yawning at him''''..he found her miserable''''..but she can't control her laughter after seeing his confusing look''''...and she laughed''''.

" hey'''.what's wrong ?? Why are U laughing?? " '''''.his confusing look turned to more confusing look'''''

Controlling her laugh, " U'r hindi is weak''''Sapna means Dream''''.so it's mera sapna not'''''."

" not meri sapna''..right??" and both laughed''''..

That was enough for them to chat and laugh over''''.he again leaned his head and she was amazing at watching over the window''''.the time flied out and flight landed to the Mumbai''''.

Rey while adjusting himself from the seat to get up; he looked over her'''' oomph she looks too adorable when she cursed herself for not able to unlock the belt'''..

" ye belt bhi kya chiz hai''''bas pakdne ka hi kam dhang se karta hai'''..jab isse Khulna hota hai''''pata nahi kya ho jata hai'''." She murmured on the belt'''.

Rey finally get up and'''." May I?? "

" Yahh for sure'''.please''..", as she was pleadingly waiting for the help''..

Rey bent over and unlock the belt in seconds''''she twitched her for being foolish to open the belt from wrong side'''.

" Thanks''." And she gets up''''

" that's ok'''" and star walking manage to give her space to walk beside her'''..

" So '''best of luck for u=U'r life'''..nd thanks for the very different New Year's eve''..", he was bid=nding a bye to her'''..and she too greet him the same'''and they laughed'''.and after getting over from the stares''..they looked and each other and says bye'''.and headed to their perspective ways'''.no hopes in mind to meet each other in future as they are in the same city''''

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P.S. Sorry guys for not giving the PM I tried but it's not responding; I'll try again. And from the next time the title will be change; Actually I had no clue what should be the title for this FF, but I have decided to titled as " Destiny Binds the Love ". Please review u'r comments, I badly need it. And one more thing I failed to hyperlinked the chapters; so please help me with that too. Thank for responding.

Edited by Ray135 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnks for liking...yes I posted some chapters before...Bt I edited it...hope u will like it

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