FF - The Mistake#1-Chapter Five *COMPLETED*

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Noni

@sweetnoni

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#601

Fabulous update:)
So nothing happend right:p This is going 2 be so much fun lolz.
Cant w8 4 more.

Keep it up!!

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#602

wow!! it just doesnt look like all the parts are written by different people!!

and nothing happened???😲😲😲😲😲😆😆😆😆😆

then I fully expect Mr Arnav Sexy-Zada to take full advantage of khushi's obliviousness!!

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#603

Oh thats why he said that is not you said yesterday... Now he know her background and her character a bit. And he is gonna play with her emotion? Not fair Arnav. Slept with professkr this thought is might be killing ... Waiting for next update.

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Crinklez.

@Crinklez.

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#604

I like the turn of events. They didn't actually do anything but she thinks they did. It was cute though her crying saying he will leave her and then in the morning telling him to get out😆

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TabbyJ.

@TabbyJ.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#605

hahahaha omg!!! im actually glad khushi doesnt remember!

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thechaigirl

@thechaigirl

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#606

All u girls r suberb...its so much fun reading this.

Jessica fab update...kind of a shocker. I thgt they had sex the first night but they dint...

LOL arnav is going to have field day with her isnt it...

waiting for next part

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#607

part 4
nice part...
so Khushi thinks she spent the night with Arnav...
Arnav is gonna take this chance for sure...
cont soon dear...

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#608

superb update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

flash back was so uumm...wat shud i say nw😆

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umama shahid

@umamashahid

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#609

u all r such awesome writers dearies..m liking the way this story is going

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Jessica

@jessicad

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#610

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp
Jess loved the way you took the story forward.

Great that you didn't take it to the cliched route and instead didn't make them do anything.

Let's see how Ridz continues this story with Khushi's ignorance.

But you guys have to answer a few questions... 😡

What Saiyeda? 😳