FF - The Mistake#1-Chapter Five *COMPLETED*

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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

Haha they didn't do it.. dammit.. but still it was pretty hot..until her breakdown... 😆

Ohh arnav you naughty boy, I wonder what thoughts are running through his brain.. Brill update!!

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gowri1712

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

how many writers do we have out there?

loved it in the first place

and yeah no making out?

I had that in my mind from Zehra's chapter

and thanks to jessicad you made it how I thought it would be

and let me know why was Arnav smirking...!!!

Edited by luvbarunsanaya6 - 13 years ago

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Chandana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#553

Nice twist...

Lovely update..Very well written

Arnav had a naughty smirk..Gonna be fun...

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rusticreet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#554

loved loved loved the twist...i somehow dont like love stories which begin with a one night stand...glad u changed everything 👏

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#555

loved the update Jessica... 👏
Now lets see what the idea of fun is with
Mr. Arnav *I'm-so-cool...not* Raizada.. 😆

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soniachammu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#556

Its going to be fun watching arnav trouble khushi

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rkapoor1382

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Posted: 13 years ago

#557

tht was an awesome part dear..

i tht they did make out..

the smirk ufff he has sure planned something bt wat..

he is gonna tease her thts sure bt wont hurt her bec he knws abt her emotional side..

superb one

continue soon..

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Farah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#558

OOHH!!!The fourth part changed the rules of the game & turned the story around big time!!!!!I am seriously looking forward to the next part to see what 'fun' Arnav has at Khushi's expense!😃