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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it...👏
So arnav and Nk are cousins...😉
wil be greta towatch if khushi tell anything abt arnav to Nk...😆
Liked the flashbacks and their present conversations...😃
Thanks for the pm😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was awesome! Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update. should have continued it. THe way u clubbed the past and the present was nice. update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW great twist..🤗
NK knows Arnav... In this chapt i liked Arnva the most...😳
His signature smirk i can imagine it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

This update goes out to my marvelous "shower" that gives me ideas as such. They may be pathetic even. 😆

Chapter 4



She opened her eyes again.

And looked up.

Her eyes connected with his- molten brown, soft chocolate orbs. They ran so deep, that she was afraid she might get lost in them, never to arise again, holding her gaze captivated for what seemed a long, long time.

She suddenly felt a sharp tug at her hand, successfully bringing her out of her reverie.

"I'd like to have that, thank you very much", he snarled, pulling the grey towel off her hand and wrapping it across his waist. "First you vomit all over me, and then you barge into the shower without notice, and if that's not all you grab the towel off my waist!"

She looked at him, feigning astonishment and hurt.

"You Mr. ... Mr. whatever your name is. You have absolutely no manners as such! I said I'm sorry! How much more will you torture a... lonely...helpless woman", she dawdled, her mind still wandering in a confused muddle after what she had seen. She tried to clog the thoughts from her head, wanting to mentally shut up.

"I have no manners eh? Who walked in on me in the shower? And don't you start bout torture..."

Khushi scoffed as though she hadn't heard a word, the tequila taking control again, successfully blocking out those images, and was about to walk off when he suddenly grabbed her shoulders. "Look at me when I'm talking to you!"

Khushi suddenly lost her grip, and tripped only to be caught by a strong pair of arms, that fastened themselves securely around her waist.

"That's the second time I've saved you. You owe me, lady", he flashed one of his infectious smirks, which sent Khushi into frenzy.

"Oh great!" Khushi said suddenly.

She realized that while a pathetically clichd Bollywood scene was being played out in that very shower; she was simultaneously getting drenched too.

"Look I'm all wet now!" she pouted threateningly at him.

Her mind was suddenly tipsy, and she blacked out.

When she opened her eyes, she was being plopped into a chair in a sitting position and she had a large towel wrapped around her.

She was suddenly irritated at being treated as a child.

"I can help myself, thank you very much", she got up and went to the corner of the room, her back facing him.

Arnav looked on, and to his horror, she suddenly began undressing.

"Lady, lady, wait...What's your name? Stop it."

And before he could get another word out, she stood in front of him, bereft of any clothes.

For what seemed like a million years, Arnav stared at this flawless beauty. To say she was perfect would be an understatement. She was lean, with miles of that shiny milky skin covering every inch of her body. She had long lean legs, which looked like they'd never end. She had her back turned to him, and he was fighting an uncontrollable urge to turn her around and pull her flush to himself. Her arse was perfect. It was so unfortunate that her clothing usually covered that fine piece of art. He mentally scoffed at himself for being such a pervert, but he couldn't help himself. She was driving him crazy suddenly. Her long black hair was open with a few strands flying as she stood near the open window, with the soft breeze caressing her as it passed, almost inviting him.

He was suddenly jealous of the wind.

He had no idea what he was doing, but followed his instinct. He walked behind her and stopped inches before her. She seemed to be lost in a daze, looking out of the window towards the city lights.

In the lights, her creamy complexion suddenly glowed. Arnav found it impossible to rein in his emotions. Lurching forward, he clasped her waist in his arms. Her body suddenly arched, but then took its comfortable stance, like she was made for him.

He kissed into her shoulder, and trailed kisses up towards her neck, and below again. He didn't care about right or wrong, although his brain was sending him warning signals, one after another, he just followed his heart's advice.

Khushi suddenly shuddered, and turned to face him. Her gaze lingered over his lips; those full lips that suddenly quivered. Following her urge, she leaned over and kissed them, tequila taking over again. She pushed their bodies behind with all her power, till they fell over the bed, their lips not leaving each other.

Arnav traced her outer edges of her mouth with his lips, kissing her with newfound passion. Their minds were getting disoriented by the minute, each of them trying to desperately concentrate on the only thing that their vision offered them - Lips.

Arnav started to kiss her exposed back and she arched back in pleasure. He trailed his hands over her back, and brought it to her face, when suddenly -

It was wet.

Wet? He thought to himself. Surely he was not that bad a kisser.

"Hey, what's wrong?" he asked her, genuinely concerned.

"I don't know" she blurted, not knowing what caused her to cry suddenly.

And then without notice, she started to wail loudly.

If Arnav was baffled before, it was nothing compared to the expression his face bore now.

"He left her. He ditched her. He never loved her. He was such a scoundrel." She kept ranting, leaving a thoroughly confused Arnav.

"What are you on about?" he asked her, checking her forehead to see if she'd developed a temperature that was causing her to have seizures.

"My father, he was a bas***d. He never loved my mother. He used her, and then left her like she was a piece of crap. You're going to do the same thing with me, aren't you?" she said suddenly aware that this was the reason that caused her to cry in the first place.

Arnav was taken aback. He didn't know why but he couldn't bear to see tears on her face. He took her in his arms, whispering sweet nothings to her, all the while consoling and cradling her that he would never do anything that would hurt her.

He pulled her back to see that she had stopped crying, and had fallen asleep. He swept the hair strands off her face, held her head and gently laid her down on the bed, pulling the covers over her body, as if shielding her from external forces that might harm her.

He felt possessive.

He was about to take his shirt and get off the bed, when he had a splitting ache in his head, and the immediate aftereffects of tequila brought him down, sending him into a deep slumber, right beside the her.

Nothing had happened.

***

"I have a few things I'd like to talk to you about", he pressed, wanting to ask her about yesterday's breakdown, as they stood in front of the ladies restroom

Listen, you Mr. Arnav *I'm-so-cool...not* Raizada. What happened yesterday was a huge mistake, and I think it IS actually better if we forgot about it. I regret ever doing it with an arrogant man like you who is so full of hubris. I don't know why I did it, but I did. I cannot change things, nor can you. So please make this less uncomfortable for you and me, and just SPARE ME THE TORTURE", she spat at him and walked off, swishing her hair as she did.

Arnav was left, standing there, musing to himself.

So she didn't know.

She has no idea what happened last night.

A mischievous smirk started to form on his face.

This was going to be fun.

***



Don't glare at me like I'm so evil. 😆 I hope you all liked this update. I don't know if I matched the standards of all you marvelous guys, but I loved doing this! Rafa I hope I used your gift well. 😆

Tell me what you thought of it.

love, jessica :)

Edited by jessicad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OH NO YOU DIDN'T!!!!!😲

JESSICA!!!!

W*F!!!!

You turned the story 360 degrees 😡... They were meant to have sex the first night!!!

Mere saari mehnat pe paani daal di tumne😭

You made her cry and talk about her parents during make out session🤣... that is such a turn off for Arnav😆


Wait till it's my turn again... I'll make sure they have sex and lots of it😆

BTW fab update dear... I loved it ❤️... though a little pissed that you made them NOT have sex the first night😆

Loved Arnav smirking... oh he's going to play games with her😃... but he should try and avoid her like plague...if the authorities get a whiff of it he'll get fired and she'll lose her scholarship

ps... actually I'm not pissed... great job hun🤗
Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
You smart woman! Loved you muah. Thank you for not letting them do the bing-bing 😉


You write so well and here you were whining all about not able match blah blah standards.


Superb.


I loved it dammit!


*Kisses*



Let us see how Ridz takes the story forward :D
Edited by lazyleaves - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG ! Jessica...
Thats a great twist there... SO they actually didn't do anything !

OMG I love you for this ! This is going to be so much more fun ! He knows and she doesn't...

I can't wait for the next update !! :) :)

Loved this update :)
Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hot sexy Awesome part...I loved the confusion that is now created ..They didn't do IT but she thinks they did IT...nice..lets see what is in store for us in the next update...Superb part... Brilliant writing :) Loved it.
Edited by debby_11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
So nothing happened!!😆 Aww, Khushi actually cried and asked him whether he would leave her like her Dad did to her mother!!!
Arnav is gonna play games with Khushi now!! Am sure his smirk was to die for!!!😳 Fun ahead!!!😃
Awesome update :)

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