*Completed* TH#1 ArHi SS:Unconditional

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Kamala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

You really have the talent to write. I read many OS posted in IF, but your OS is exceptional . In fact it is more interesting than IPKKND . Keep it up...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Congrats for the new thread... I luv Destroyed and yur writing... Well done!!

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OLGNES

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

lovely update!!!!
awesome sequel!!!!!!!
arnav should redeem sincerely until khushi forgives him...
khushi should play hard to forgive him...

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

This was heartbreaking and made me angry and want to hurl something at ASR. What he has done to Khushi is unforgivable and none of these kind acts or whatever they are make me change my mind.

I am sorry I did not comment on Destroyed too much but I wanted for it to get over before posting a comment. However with this sequel up now, I shall post my full comment here, keeping chapter 1 of Unconditional in mind.

In Destroyed, Arnav destroyed the spirit and soul of a woman and it was a frickin mistaken identity?! My main problem is not what he did to Khushi or how he is repenting now but the fact that does he regret his actions regardless of everything?! Had Khushi been the 'right' girl, would he have had the same change of character? Does he realize that he is a monster irrespective of any mistaken identity etc?

In this chapter, Aman's 'apology' also makes me want to slap him because he still idolizes the ass and was going to resign but not raise his voice.

And Arnav's question about abortion to Khushi was the only time I didnt feel like hitting him because Khushi so gets to make that choice and I am glad he asked her.

It is a testament to your writing that I feel so strongly against Arnav so for that all credit to you. Great job with the writing, so starkly different from your other works. The short crisp chapters were like little horror doses and you left it where you knew it would hurt the reader the most.

Very well written. Lets see what happens next.

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago

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Areeba

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Ohh !! Omg Did i just read the sequel?

Ohh !! Finally , He deserves this but i guess more than this. Huh

Update soon !! 😃

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xXShriyaXx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Loved it...do continue to send me pms:-)

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N0306

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Wow this going to b the hardest redemption ever because khushi was not even in love with him.. Didn't even know him.. But I m glad that the child was not killed..

Awesome start.. Thanks to all who nagged you in writing the sequel soon.

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kooltoad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

I refreshed my pg and got the updTe... Wonder what's in store for us in this... But knowing u I know it will be a real treat... Loved the first chap... lifeless khushi and broken arnav... Wud love to know more about Khushi and Arnav ki New life...