#2 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 4-11 - Page 38

Originally posted by: rhu90

hate that shivam...loved swaron's part...update nxt part asap...

Originally posted by: dildostidance01

Will wait fr the update

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

tune asma di ko kis cheez ki permission di hai rey???

Originally posted by: damonelena

Awesome update.

Swayuu...<3 <3 <3 Just love him <3

And Sharon is okay with all of it 😊 And also the team 😊

Kria 😔 I loved the way she said that Rey is not like her dad 😃

URGhhh...SHIVAM...I hate that guy!!!!!!! WHY DOES HE WANT TO DO THISS????????????? 😳

Originally posted by: senoritashweta

nt able 2 lyk..so take dis as a lyk..!!

an again shivam..!!! i so much hate him...

an ya awesome update !!

Originally posted by: siliyachah

loved ur FF ...

i really loved it

kash D3 mein aise hote toh ...

i hate shivam ...but sumtym i love him ...

loved all ur works...

hats off 2 u

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Khushiii...!! 🤗

Tumhara ye update dekhkar mujhye hui bahut Khushi! :P 🤣

OKay Sorry. [Hit myself hard on the head!] LOL first, you have NO IDEA how good your comment makes my day!!!

Hey Khushi!! :D Hola XD

Anyways! 😳 Amazing update and I must say you have worked really well on the characterization. 👏 Aw thank you so much!!

I really liked the beginning where Swayam caught Sharon hiding her problem even before she knew and gave her those OPTIMISTIC advice of his! :D I just love those advises. Just hope I did well in putting my dialogues in for him..

Really, I mean I really love those advice Swayam gives to any body on the show and they work really GOOD also. They DO!

So, therefore I am glad Sharon took it and is adhering to it! Glad to know :D

The new Sharon with confidence attracts me to read more! xP Haha that's a good thing!

Good sign! ^_*

Well, I am eagerly going to wait for the next update tomorrow! :D Updating now!!

And it better be longer please! :[ Aww Im sorry.. I have it typed out already... I think it's about the same length..

Also, I really hope Shivam gives those letters to somebody. Somebody? Wait to see...

I don't want any misunderstanding in between them! :( Lol neither do I. There's an interesting plot coming up 😉

Please!!

All-in-all a SUPERRRB update! :D Thanks again dear!

Really wish something like this could happen in the show instead whatever is happening now!

Also, I think I did not comment on PART FIVE.

So here it is,

It was amazing as always! Thanks :D You really didn't have to 😳

I really liked the way Smriti confronted Kria with the truth [though it was only the half-truth.. I guess!] and urged her to write letters to Rey and Swayam! Yes.. kinda truth and yet, she played her motherly role.

I really hope it reaches them sooner or later! :D I like how you said 'sooner or later' 😆

Really, if Shivam turns out to be the same as in the show, I might just KILL him! If by that you mean negative.. then you might as well kill him now [:p]

And, just a question! Is Taani also there in this FF? Yes.. read the disclaimer on page 1 😳 But with a twist again 😉

Is she going to come later or not? Later on... like in part 15? I have her entry written down.. I jsut don't know what part it comes in...

Anyways.. You are doing a BEAUTIFUL job in giving justice to all characters with apt monologues and emotions.. Thank you !!!

And that to flawlessly! :D It does mean a lot to me! 😳

Hat's OFF to you Khushi!

Keep it UP!

And I also may add, you are doing a great job with the regular updates! :D Haha thanks again! Badly needed to hear that from someone XD

Keep that also UP! =P

Thank you so much for the PMs and please Continue Soon! Np and doing right now!

I am eagerly waiting for tomorrow to come!! :D It has came 😉

Much Love <3

_Nivriti

P.S: Thoda zyaada lamba ho gaya na? xP hahah nope. A comment is never too long for me. i LOVE reading lamba lamba comments. Keep them coming 🤗