#2 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 4-11

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Araina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

maine kab guess maara tha????😲

thread 1 pe tha ya 2 pe????

main dhundh ke stry predict koshish karungi...😃

Sorry casper.. mere ko yaad nai hai kaha kiya tha.. 😳

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Araina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#362

Note:

I only have 10 minutes before I have to leave for the day. I cannot update in that time. Thus, I will update as soon as I get home. I promise, you will get the update tonight pakka 😃 Till then, it'll give some readers time to read as well, seeing that only about 30 out of 100 pmz have read it... 😛

-Khushi.

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dancersqueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#363

hate that shivam...loved swaron's part...update nxt part asap...

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sapnaarsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#364

Will wait fr the update

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vaishali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#365

tune asma di ko kis cheez ki permission di hai rey???

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Sneha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#366

Awesome update.

Swayuu...<3 <3 <3 Just love him <3

And Sharon is okay with all of it 😊 And also the team 😊

Kria 😔 I loved the way she said that Rey is not like her dad 😃

URGhhh...SHIVAM...I hate that guy!!!!!!! WHY DOES HE WANT TO DO THISS????????????? 😳

Edited by damonelena - 12 years ago

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senoritashweta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#367

nt able 2 lyk..so take dis as a lyk..!!

an again shivam..!!! i so much hate him...

an ya awesome update !!

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siliya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#368

loved ur FF ...

i really loved it

kash D3 mein aise hote toh ...

i hate shivam ...but sumtym i love him ...

loved all ur works...

hats off 2 u

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#369

Khushiii...!! 🤗

Tumhara ye update dekhkar mujhye hui bahut Khushi! :P 🤣

OKay Sorry. [Hit myself hard on the head!]

Hey Khushi!! :D

Anyways! 😳 Amazing update and I must say you have worked really well on the characterization. 👏

I really liked the beginning where Swayam caught Sharon hiding her problem even before she knew and gave her those OPTIMISTIC advice of his! :D

Really, I mean I really love those advice Swayam gives to any body on the show and they work really GOOD also.

So, therefore I am glad Sharon took it and is adhering to it!

The new Sharon with confidence attracts me to read more! xP

Good sign! ^_*

Well, I am eagerly going to wait for the next update tomorrow! :D

And it better be longer please! :[

Also, I really hope Shivam gives those letters to somebody.

I don't want any misunderstanding in between them! :(

Please!!

All-in-all a SUPERRRB update! :D

Really wish something like this could happen in the show instead whatever is happening now!

Also, I think I did not comment on PART FIVE.

So here it is,

It was amazing as always!

I really liked the way Smriti confronted Kria with the truth [though it was only the half-truth.. I guess!] and urged her to write letters to Rey and Swayam!

I really hope it reaches them sooner or later! :D

Really, if Shivam turns out to be the same as in the show, I might just KILL him!

And, just a question! Is Taani also there in this FF?

Is she going to come later or not?

Anyways.. You are doing a BEAUTIFUL job in giving justice to all characters with apt monologues and emotions..

And that to flawlessly! :D

Hat's OFF to you Khushi!

Keep it UP!

And I also may add, you are doing a great job with the regular updates! :D

Keep that also UP! =P

Thank you so much for the PMs and please Continue Soon!

I am eagerly waiting for tomorrow to come!! :D

Much Love <3

_Nivriti

P.S: Thoda zyaada lamba ho gaya na? xP

Edited by NocturnalBeing - 12 years ago

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shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#370

Awsome update khushi as usual
hmm thank god u didn't showed dat drama of sharon low down coz i personally feel da sharon rai prakash wo b aise nahhh!!!! coz she is da diva n waise dikha kr aur bore ho jata

n now wht wht he is planning to do wid those letters...i serioisly want to kill him...😡

cvs are useless seiously 😆
coz dey dnt hv a brain n i m again saying you khushi thoda sa apna brain daan mai de do unhe...hehe

love da update
n waiting 4 nxt

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