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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
congrats for new FF
it was superb start
i loved it...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
nice concept dear
but plz no sad ending
love mayur
mayur rocks
thanx for the pm
u r a awesome writer
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur beautiful response and commentsMeans a lot to me. 🤗
keep reading the story.i hope u ll liked the coming parts.🤗🤗
P.S...welcome to new readers who are joining me with this FFPlz add me in ur buddy list so it would be easy for me to send PMs.
Maria...remember me in ur prayers

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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

A dark Love

"I know you'll come"A victorious smile touched the corner of his lips as as he lifted his gaze at her,she was standing in the doorway like a scared,helpless creature.she let out a fear filled gasp and her lips twisted with a sarcastic smile, "you didn't leave any way for us or you??"His face tightened and she understood he'd taken her remark as his insult, "I don't have habit to listen reply,keep in mind always"his icy voice was edged with implacable stiffness and she gulps of air seeing the blood rushed in his eyes and she gathered her all courage to compose herself as she didn't let him think she was too weak to protest, "why are you doing all this?why do you want to destroy us?" She allowed her tone to fall just short of insolence and felt him stiffen at her words,his eyes dropped on her face regarding her with a cold look, "why do you want to throw yourself in trouble?" he twisted his lips in a meaningful smile approaching her and she kept her hand on a chair to keep herself compose, "don't forget'you can save your father to lose his all money"she felt his gaze touched her naked flesh peering through her dress and she swallowed, unable to hide her disgust,his lips curled into grin as he studied her face for a moment and found him succeeded ,he touched her flesh with his finger and then dropped her hand leaning forward, "don't worry I won't use you for one night,I will give you the tag of *my wife* as I don't want people call you*a post**** '''.. "

"Mr.Sharma"she snorted,her body was shivering badly and he saw great rage in those pools of eyes who were regarding him with disgust, "Now I can understand why my father didn't accept defeat in front of you?why he gets agreed to give you everything as you are not just a heartless person but you're a disgusted creature"

She huffed letting out the gasp,the muscles of his face tightened,.The fine hairs on the back of her neck spiked as she saw him proceeding towards her,she stepped back holding her dress in her fist tightly,the anger,the stiffness in his face made her realize she'd hit the right spot and she was ready to accept the result.

Mayank grabbed her wrist and she winced as he twisted her ankle, "what did you say I am a disgusted Creature" he said in a terrible voice trying his face close to her and she moved away her face and tried to freed her hand but her futile efforts to free herself only made his grip tighten painfully,tears spilled on her cheek and a painful gasp escaped her lips, "you don't know Nupur Bhushan who I am and it would be better for you if you keep your mouth shut infront of me and do what I want you to do"he jerked her away letting out a breath and she winced in pain, "if you want to save your father to loose everything,you'll have to do what I want.Did you listen"

He snorted regarding him with implacable anger,her body shivered badly and she gasped for breath, "I won't let you destroy my father"She let out a shaking breath and Mayank spun around dropping his eyes at her face which was wetted with tears, "if you want me to stop the game here then do what I want" Mayank garbled her words. She gathered her all courage lifting up her gaze at him, "I am ready"her voice choked and a fresh tears made their way towards her cheeks, "I must say you've taken a good decision"He spoke in his usual stiff voice suppressing a victorious smile on his lips and Nupur wished to smash his face with something heavy.

"But how will I know you've fulfilled your promise as I don't trust you"

He regarded her with a quick surprise glance to hear her words ,her voice was flat but showing confidence, he stepped towards her,taking shaking breaths, she gathered her scattered thoughts and stared back at him, "its' not in my blood to break a promise"He braced his one hand on the wall at her side and she gulps of air. "But I've doubts about your decision"he leaned forwards staring into her eyes and sucking in a deep breath to ease the tight knot in her belly she spoke starring back at him , "I won't"

He smiled and then moved away, "but I don't trust you and you can't help your father until we get married" whispering close to her ear he moved away and she breathed deeply, "then we shouldn't waste our time as a bride is ready"

She spoke meeting with his gaze while her hand grabbed the wall for support.her body was shivering,her knees were feeling too weak to keep her balance but she wouldn't let him think she was helpless creature.

Mayank studied her face for a moment and then taking out his cell phone he dialed his lawyer number, "Mr.Rajesh,I just call you to inform you,I agree to sign the contract with Mr.Bhushan,I am willingly giving him time to pay back my amount so there is no need to transfer his property to my name"

He cut the call and turned his gaze at her, "I've fulfilled my promise now its your turn".

"where we've to go"holding her breath she spoke looking at him.

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here is second part,i really hope you'll like it,i'll wait for your comments.😳

Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Wow..
Maria Sis It's Awsome
part..
loved the confrontation of Myank And Nupur...
You know I am quite liking this bad boy image of Mayank...

I mean Like Other ff's This Image or character of mayank *AS A Bad Boy*..
I am actually liking it...😊
i just hope that the other characters of mayank on other ffs..
Do not get jealous of this Mayank*Sigh*...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
o yes..
yes yes...
i am first one to comment..
that too in this ff..
oooh..
I am so haapy😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
wow ..interesting update Maria..
cont. soon..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Loved the update. Really amazing. Gosh Mayank is so rude. But I'm loving the character : p. thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Beautiful update mari.Feel bad 4 nupur.Why mayu is behaving like a jerk?Whts d reason?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
it was an amazing update dear
you are an amazing writer
Mayur covo was so intense you portrayed it beautifully
loved it
continue soon

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