ARSHI FF: BONDED 4 D WombII (cr) THREAD THREE - Page 48

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ShraddRajyaguru thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Di,don't you give a Damm to those who take out your mistakes here instead of pming you. . .
i toh tell just un-buddy them,ek baar un-buddy karoge,aur jab unhe aapka pm nai milega na,phir hei line pe they will come. . .and if anyone sincerely likes your work,they will read and enjoy,not find faults. . .😕 am i right?😳

P.S.-am not spamming this thread,i know i could have told this via pm too,but i guess you too you have understood why i am posting it here. .😉
Edited by trivedishraddha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
see,am so glad that i reserved my my earlier post to comment later,or else i would have been so back!
well,thanks for listening to me and not liking my reserved comments. .😆
well,you can see it now,have edited my reserved comment on page 65. .😳
P.S.-will edit my earlier reserved comments soon,i have that in my mind. .will tell you when i edit. .😉
will try my best to keep it short. .🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb!!!!!!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
LOVED IT TOO MUCH 🤗
the last part was very touching❤️, love Arnav's commitment, he truly love her, but he doesn't realised it yet.
Thank a lot for the PM and for the update.
Keep writing.

Edited by HK90 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: HK90

<font color="#ff0099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="6">superb!!!!!!!!!!!⭐️</font>

<font color="#ff0099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="6">LOVED IT TOO MUCH🤗</font>
<font color="#ff0099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="6">the last part was very touching❤️, love Arnav's commitment, he truly love her, but he doesn't realised it yet.</font>
<font color="#ff0099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="6">Thank a lot for the PM and</font><font size="6" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff0099">for the update.</font>
<font size="6" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff0099">Keep writing.</font>
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your absolutely right,i knew i missed to mention something in my comment. . .this is it. . .Arnav has fell in love but has not realised it yet. . .waiting for that now. . .
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey!

I think for me, this shows the wonderful bond shared between two friends. When one is troubled, the other can feel it and vice versa.

Arnav's possessive nature kicks in a little bit more in this chapter I guess. Khushi is pretty amusing as she is thinking that when she falls pregnant, she won't be able to satisfy her physical desires. Meaning she thinks she won't be able to have sex. Poor thing! Lol! Then we have Arnav who I think maybe hinting that although he doesn't want her to have sex with anyone else whilst pregnant, he is one person that she may have it with.

Thanks for the PM. The flashbacks have been great!

Please PM me when the next chapter is ready to be read.

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Posted: 13 years ago
well..i almost 4got dt dis was d flashback goin on..:Dnw i got evrythin..:)d chptr was ossum..
d prev.chptrs shwd Khushi's attrctn n lov 4 Arnav..
n here..a slight hope came..
dt he has fallen 4 her..
n finally his promise must hav srprisd n shckd Khushi..
dt spoke all..:)
i bet she 2 wont hav it wid ne1 else..:)wll she shud hav infrmd Arnav abt wteva Dr.told her..bt c whr she headed..:(
do pm me wen u update more..😛😛😛😛😛thnxxx😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was amazing...loved it!!

How do you manage to write such awesome updates?

I loved their talk...it was very sweet...

They both love each other but they haven't realized it yet!! I hope they realizes soon!!

I loved the last few lines from the Arnav,He promised that he will never have child with anyone...He is very sweet!!

Do continue soon...thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh wow this is interesting really nice dear...oh man arnav's promise was wonderful...that should be enough for khushi to know he is in love with her...awsuuum n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Flashback end but i m still lost on his word

Very amazing update n last Part was touchy dear
Love the way how he was promising her about his n her baby

Love the way how he shared his feeling for her

I dont know what to say... He made me out of word

Eagerly waiting for next
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update appy
last part was really emotional and touching
can't digest the fact that khushi had a miscarriage again
update soon

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