ARSHI FF: BONDED 4 D WombII (cr) THREAD THREE - Page 33

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Buddy...
I read this two days ago but couldn't get myself to write anything...
I will tell you why...
Hmmm Let's see - I loved how you described Khushi's uneasiness and how Arnav did everything to make her comfortable...
What got me really upset was after doing all this...everything was perfect...he was perfect...she was perfect...he took her on a date...he booked the suite just like she wanted...even got her a gift...made love to her...with a promise to be able to make love to her again...anytime...
BUT
what got to me was the fact that they did all this...and she had a miscarriage...I mean miscarriages are not good regardless but having a miscarriage after they tried to make a baby like that...
You know - like the date and then the room and the hesitation - the fact that she was worried about their freindship...you put all that on risk and that happens...
Sorry for the late reply...I have been just thinking about what happened afterwards...
I loved the updates BOTH PARTS. and your extra work for the pics...
All in all - it was really good update - it's just that it got me thinking about what happened to her/them afterwards...
I know I must have killed your mood but I couldnt stop thinking about the after math...
Sorry for this depressing response...
I will stop now...before you kick me out for this weird response to this wonderful update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi Appy_Indy:)
i really like yours writing!
i have read all your story!!
and can't wait 2 read more:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh this was all the flashback?Ehh wow they sounded like lovers lol Not bad :)

Loved Khusis uneasiness, and the comfort that aranv tried to provide!
Edited by Crazy_1001 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very passionate update. They love each other. Hope at the end they will be together forever.
Very beautifully written updates. Thanks for the pm.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow..super HOTTT update...
update soon the nxt part.
n thnx fr d PM BUDDY
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Posted: 13 years ago
FInally they did it; idk about Arnav-Khushi but I have waited long for them to do it 😆 Arnav is so cute... like how he fulfills everything she wants 😳 I guess its gonna be awkward the morning after lol Great update!! thank you for the PM 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg they finally do it...
am waitin for their mornin reaction,...
awsum double update...
tanx 4 d pm...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Searing Hot Appy! Wow...m sweating here! lol😳
Loved the update...glad you finally wrote about their night together and I'm so glad that it was pleasurable for both of them and not awkward!😃
Looking forward to the next one!😊
xoxo
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Posted: 13 years ago
😊I just started reading this FF and I am loving it. I am just in the first thread. I will comment as soon as i finish few parts 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
☺️ reserved for my comment

Edited..

Sorry sorry sorry for late..

My comment for Part A'

Phew,finally am able to comment after reading this almost 6th to 7th time'😳

Plz bear with my late comment'

Kya karu,mera dimag he bandh hojata tha'.😛 aur baki k time,I dint have my lappy!!altought I comment using my mobile always,I loved this part,and wanted to give u my every take on it,so with out much bla-baring,here I go'😃

It was obvious for her to get scared, her relation was going to change'no matter how much they both would say, but they both knew somewhere inside them,that things are changing'

And WOW,her dress,which her Arnav presented her'she must be looking way 2 hott 4 Arnav to keep her hands off her'I am sweating her,imagining his situation'.☺️

And then started their journey to the hotel!!

I have always read these few lines of their drive from home to the hotel,with utmost patience'with a sweet smile,I continued..

And when they reached the hotel,and he looked at her,not only khushi, I was getting nervous too'but still,the smile covering my lips dint move'

And when he asked why aren't u talking 2 me,I was like'awww..she is taking,she is just nervous yar'😳

And the way he asked her permit to kiss her,mai toh wahi pe marr gayi di'kash mujhe bhi aisa koi mill jaaye'haay'

but then she questioned him bout him being all lovey dovey,and the very next moment he called her "moti"'.🤣

and then their first "actual passionate kiss"☺️

and then he picked her in his arms!!!so perfect beginning'.wow'

so romantic,so touchy!!

She is dating her best friend.

This very line was so known to me,yet,vey much more came to me while reding it'😊

Well,I cant see,but definately imagine the look on her face when they both enteredred the presidential suite of the hotel!!

Arnav so much understands her,well, least he realized,loves her too'.

And then,another Awww moment for me when Arnav said-

I know I am not your husband but I am going to be your baby's father. I couldn't have chosen a better place than this to gift you our baby.

And then when he said "tumne pyar toh kiya hai na.."

I was just speechless'.although I was lost in this chapter from the very beginning,I lost my words for commenting over here!!

"loving me unconditionally"

This surely means a lot'.andthese words would be cherished later for sure..

And then came the kiss!!the perfect kiss'that dint make my mind go gutter,but made me feel how much friends can do for each other's happiness'😊

Her fear was obvious when she stopped him'but he assured her bout their future'it was really touchin'

she was looking pretty, very pretty, just like a new bride who has never been kissed".

Di,aap aise dailogs laate kaaha se ho??

And then again his proposal to capture her lips,that made me say-

Aa,aaja,mujhe he kiss karle..☺️

And when I read this-

If there was any chance of getting pregnant just by kissing then she would have surely got pregnant tonight just by the way he was kissing her.

I was☺️ and 🤣 too'sorry'but had to share my all thoughts with u'😛😳

And then,this PART A came to end'😊

**Sigh**..my heart beat is still clear to my,making me aware,that its still beating to read more'and fianally am able to comment'I have covered my all feeling which I got from this part'.hope my views dint bore u..thnks so much for taking ur time and reading my views'

The title itself always gave me butterflies in my tummy'I have read this chapter over and over so many times!!loved it as many times I read it'

Keep up with ur work..i have always adored u,and always will'.love u loads di'🤗

Edited by trivedishraddha - 12 years ago

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