FF- Sparkling Dreams (NEW CH8 pg 22)

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hararnav

@hararnav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

beautiful.. glad tht they decided to talk.. hope they talksoon

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

i love u

u update it soon

So both ready to give a chance

what happen with naina

i want to know

arnav wanted his best with him when he's in pain

that's not selfish thing btu sometime situation doesn't work in ur favour

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Megha

@MarriedLove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

very nice...

and thx for evryday updates...

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SARUN.fangirl18

@SARUN.fangirl18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

ThanKs A Lot For ThE Pm😳

Loved It😃

Already WaIting For The Next ParT 😆

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Awesome update
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

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fatousha

@angel_prachi

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

beautiffull update very nice superbbb..

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Sanjana1679

@Sanjana1679

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

hi,

We are enjoying the pace at which the story is going...and I am happy that Arnav and Kushi are not stuck in their misunderstanding...

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

I could have sworn I commented in the last update, but I guess not.

Well anyways, I am loving how the story is coming along. Arnav can be ruthless, but we have always seen that side of him, and it's no surprise that he blamed Khushi for no being there. But what surprised me is that he stepped back and realize that it's the same Khushi that he once knew. And he is eager to find out what changed.

I do no blame Khushi for leaving, and I don't blame her to try to talk to Arnav about his well being, especially after knowing he lost his mother. But I can't wait for them to meet. :0

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-Reader-

@-Reader-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Just came across this FF - What a beautiful title - Sparkling Dreams.

There is a calmness about this FF, the characters are realistic not loud. Like the concept and you doing a brilliant job of not rushing the story and maintaining the right amount of pace. I like the fact you took time to introduce the lead characters their past, present and they come face to face only in chapter 6. This is going in my favorites. 👏👏

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Hey! I like your story telling style. It is a fine balance of angst and romance (not a fan of too much angst).

Well, if Arnav didn't know that Khushi was in love with him, then he can't know her actual reasons for leaving, thus justifying his anger towards Khushi. Khushi on the otherhand cannot be blames as well. I wouldn't want to watch the man I love romance someone else. Both right in their place.

They need to talk before anything happens and they were friends first. So, let the fraaandship begin... again 😛