Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116

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allzwell

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

speechless for now...
a much awaited update though.. and thank you for giving this :)

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BSRaizada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

So wonderful. U have really written it so well the whole. Amel fatival is like in front of eyes..
Arnie's pain n his loneliness n khushi touch must hav eg tied the things.. A real journey has began!!

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lovelyangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

unravelling hairs from braid,arnav licking gol gappas juice, camel ride,taking care of injured khushi and finally making love.This chapter is thoroughly romantic and praiseworthy.But I am worried what would be arnav's rnx after knowing khushi's motive to travel with him.I am also keen to know khushi's reaction after sex.I loved the update.

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

I just love this story... Loved how he found comfort with her and " in" her but dread how he will react once he realises as he will knowing him be angry with himself for not being able to control himself... But he will soon realise he is human!

Loved loved it...waiting for the next part...thanks for the pm.

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Cetronia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Seriously loved this update...finally Khushi was the desert Rose and analogy for this was just perfect..

Arnav POV made sense for his behavior and now I am very interested how the rest of the ride is going to be...thanks for the PM..

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Simran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Res

Will edit once im back from school!!:/

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roshaan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

loved it fab update love braid sence n than way he make her wear bangles love that than pani puri yumm u make me wish to have sum lol their camel ride hehe i think arnav too hhave dhak dhak pro like khushi lol n yes arnav n lavanya past ong she was cheating n using him bad tooo bad n not to forget ending man blush blush cant wait to read more

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N0306

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Awesome super awesome update.. I loved the way they spent their evening.. First desert festival and then dinner near the camp fire.. You have described it so beautifully..

Then their realization of meeting at the memorial.. Arnav story and how justified he is about not accepting Payal.. For him the history was repeating..

And their love making.. It was really love making in all sense.. Passionate and full of love.. Pleas please update soon.. Can't wait to see the aftermath...

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angeldream14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

LOVED IT

AWESOME

HE DOESNT WANT AKASH T GO THROUGH THE PAIN HE WENT

HE IS JUST BEING A PROTECTIVE BRO

LIKE KHUSHI IS BEING A PROTECTIVE SIS

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Sarah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

I'm scared thinking of his reaction.

If he comes to know the truth, then that's it. He will not accept her. But then he knew she was a virgin and if at all she is going to be pregnent he will acept her. But the heart break and pain she is going to suffer god!!!!! i'm teribly scared for her... Hope he accepts her and loves her