FF: Paper Roses [Chp 17, Pg 76] 10/07

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...Penknife...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

oh ever the devil arent...u just had to leave ti there...oh god...thsi is tooo good to be ture...wait mayeb thts why its a story...dramatic twist, although i did expect them to be childhood sweet hearts but this is much too much comprehend

fantastic work

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aeyshaalim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Oh no cliffhanger
Can't wait for more
Loved it

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: khusiarnav
Oh yes you are evil... how can u stop there?!?!?! 😡
cliffhanger... hate it!!!

amazing update but wanted more...

u better update soon hun!! please... pretty please!!😃

😆 sorryyy but it was getting so long and I had to leave you guys biting your nails 😛. But I will try to get the update up really soon!

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: -Suchi.P
OMG!!! How can you stop there!!! You are super evil!!! But I am happy that you updated in small time, really appreciated that!!
OMG I thought Khushi will find out how he is related to her but I guess not!! I am happy that Arnav found out, he is smarter than her you see! 😉
Shyam's wife Diya looks like Khushi!! Please don't tell me it was Khushi who got married to her! That is what the last line sound like!! I don't want any interference in ArShi's story!! but I trust you, will wait for your next chapter(s) to know what have you planned!!
Thanks for the PM and please, please please update soon!!! [:)[

Lol that I am! 😆

Yes he is indeed 😛. I mean Khushi is smart too but ya know got a little soft spot for this Arnav so yeh he had to catch onto it before her 😆. And that's not the end of it 😉.

Aww 🤗 you trust me! Don't worry for now I'm sure the Arshi story will continue perfectly 😉 (a little wink wink nudge nudge from my part).

I will try to update as soon as. Was going to update When Truth Prevails first but think this ones update might be up before that 😊.

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: Nici0306
oh i know who angelica is..she is anji.. arnav's sister.. and now they are not in good terms.. this is just an assumption.. finally Arnav knows who khushi is.. if she is nayak then does that mean she was married to Shyam? that would be weird.. she would be so young.. man this is so interesting..

Angelica hmmm... not going to answer 😛. Yes she would have been very young if that is the case. You'll find out probably in the next chapter what the real deal is 😉.

Glad you like it!

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: flowers4u
OMG arnavs figurd out who kushi is...fantastic update...absolutely loved it...keep on writing... ps were diya and kushi sisters

Thank you!

And omg! You may be onto something 😉

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: sonia_92
either she is arnavs chutki or shyam's diya, she just cannot be both, absolutely bit

Yes it would be difficult for her to be both now wouldn't it? You'll find out what's actually the case in the next chapter 😉

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khusiarnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Please update soon...

M absolutely loving this FF by each update...

suspense and romance... awww my favs!!!😳😉😃

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: shagun05
OMG how could you end it at the cliffhanger!!! grrr...
but as this was a fabulous update so i wont mind (much)

but amazing chapter as arnav now knows the truth looking forward to his reaction now

heyyy !!! u are scaring me by hinting that khushi might have been shyam's wife
do update soon... please... pretty please

Omg omg omg!!! I love love your lil monkey emoticons! Aaah they are so freaking adorable! I want to like go into the screen and hug them!

Anyways so now that I have finally got over the cuteness of those lil monkeys 😆.

Thank you! And sorry :( I was trying to be evil 😛.

😆 all will be revealed 😉.

And sure will try. 🤗

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: the_breeze
Awww dear, I was so touched by your response to my comment!!! Made me feel very happy!! Hmmm, ok I'll let you keep the Angelica suspense for longer. Terrorism eh??? Hadn't gone down that road. 😕

The interaction on the car was simply adorable, less of words, more of emotions and I gotta say I love it when these two are left alone... Their feelings are much more prominent and strong at that time... He unconsciously knows it's his duty to protect her, she has realized that he is the one from her past... they both feel a connection but both are reluctant to act on it, both have their insecurities and problems, both are under immense danger, both are in it together yet they are apart... Aahhh, I am a goner!!!

Oh my, Shyam is gonna bust a vein.. Man he seems totally deranged here.. Oh I hope Arnav is able to keep Khushi away from the psycho pervert 🤢 😡 🤬

OMG dint see that one coming' Damnit HE WAS MARRIED??????????????????????????? Aiyyo, this aint good at all. She resembles his WIFE??? Oh why did this have to be sooo twisted. This is not good. 😵

Go AMAN. I salute the man for being so quick on his toes and finding out such valuable info in time👏

Ah he is disarming her eh??? Oh I like his moves!!!!

HE BROUGHT JALEBIES FOR HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That flashback was so damn adorable yaar! I mean even as kids, he was protective of her, trying to keep her happy, telling others off for hurting her, bringing the smile back on her face.Oh my, that was a good clarification dear, that she dint have a proper name while growing up, that's why there aint no record of her till age 12, coz that's when she was adopted leading her to get a new name and a new identity 😊

WHAT THE HELL?????? I just make the connection that Chutki is Khushi, Arnav thinks Khushi cant be Dia, Khushi and Arnav share a past, Shyam's wife was a Nayak, Nayak was Chutki's surname, that just leads me to two conclusions:

1. Chutki is Khushi, Khushi is Dia, Memory loss in the accident and etc etc

2. Khushi had an elder sister/twin who looked exactly like her, whose name was Dia, who married Shyam and our Khushi hasn't been tainted by his shadow till date

So it's either of the two, it's up to you to tell me which one Is true! Oh my that rhymed!!!! Great story dear, just update soon soon soon 😆
Thnx for the PM sweetie! lotsa love ❤️

Aww I absolutely love your analysis of Arshi together alone in the car. See this is why I could forever write FFs on Arshi, there are just such prominent layers to their characters that I can mould and re-mould them in all sorts of ways in stories. I also love writing about them when they are alone, it's just always easier to bring about the stronger aspects of their emotions without outside interference, you know whilst their in their own little Arshi bubble.

😆 Shyam's demented, now that there is one right psycho. 😆 I'm sure our boy will give his best 😉.

Because my own twisted mind is working on overdrive 😆. But I'm sure it won't turn out too bad 😉.

I love Aman! Lol I think if I wasn't so in love with Arnav (well Barun Sobti's looks) I'd have made Aman the lead 😛. He's just too cool man 😆.

Oh dear lord! Aah I do love your brainstorming sessions on these comments! Yes yes yes! I wanted to include the name part in somewhere where it wouldn't be that clearly obvious and you've got it spot on! She wasn't given a name and then people just stuck to just calling her Chutki and hence why he doesn't know who Khushi is. The rest of it and his revelation will obviously be wrapped up in the next chapter, so wait for it 😉.

And I'm glad you like the flashback, I really wanted to show how strong their bond had been, especially from his side and you'll see why with future updates 😊.

Hahahahahaa! That revelation sentence of yours actually takes the cake! 😆

Okay so lemme give you a hint, an Arnav sort of hint 😉;

She was twelve when she was adopted in by the Guptas who were the ones that changed her name to Khushi. They adopted her in straight after all that happened in the past, so at the age of twelve again. If she had been called Diya before that then that would have sent alarm bells ringing in Arnav's ears. Payal knows of Shyam and that he is Aakash's boss and yet took Khushi to that event when she knew he would be there. Khushi has been living in the same city for eleven years.

Wink wink nudge nudge, that was Arnav's little message to you to sort of put you out of this dilemma.

I like the second option *wink wink nudge nudge* again.

Thank you so much for the lovely comment again! I get so excited on seeing your comments, I've told you that already though right? 😛

And I love your assumptions which always tend to flow in the right track! Damn it, it's difficult to catch you out! 😆

Take care hun, lotsa love! 🤗 ❤️