Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3

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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Very nice update...
Beautifully writtn...
Finally they confessd...

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Loved it. Fabulous update.
The confession scene was beautifully written.
I am really liking the way shashi is helping anjali maybe not directly but still helping.

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#473

Arnav and Khushi admitting their feelings was very realistically done and so in character.

Shashi and Anjali part had me wondering at Shashi's motivation andAnjali's perception.

Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Thank you, DE, your update was worth a million times the minutes I waited for it to come.

I have no words to describe how wonderful your update was, I just feel the words I have are but a pathetic echo of my admiration for your writing. I so, so loved your description of the oasis of peace that Anjali found herself in, I was literally transported to that place of tranquility.

Every metpahor, every image, every similie you have used in this update is just so, so apt in conveying and recreating the emotions of your characters and the situations they find themselves in.
It was perfect piece of writing, what a joy it was to read, thank you once again, DE

Edited by Japonica - 12 years ago

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s2612

@s2612

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

finallt the words are out and its is also reached the arnav's ears...i m loving this redeemed arnav, he literally worships khushi!!
this is totally an amazing update...you are just awesome!!

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Nafisa, you have a knack of updating when I'm not in town!

I loved loved loved this part! You are the queen of detailing and ArHi confession scenes. Really! I have read this part a hundred times by now and each time I enjoy it more.

'I love you, Arnavji. I love you so, so much.'

From a quintessentially Khushilicious confession to the nervous fumbling to the sure and certain declaration of love, wonderful! And this Arnav is one of my favorites, I adore him.

Lovely update Nafisa, totally worth the wait!

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#477

Ohhh that confession was wonderful!!! The way you described what each of them was feeling was perfect!!!

I guess the Raizada siblings are both discovering thier true peace that day!!!

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#478

Absolutely amazing, loved it! Arnav and Khushi are just meant to be!

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#479

Hey!

Thanks for the PM!

😃😃😃

Hope you are doing well ...

For me, here I see two important conversations or perhaps the lack of conversation ... perhaps the peace and the feeling of being at ease here with both Arnav-Khushi and Anjali-Shashi. Though there isn't much talking going on with one another, the thoughts are enough to convey what each person is feeling. Words sometimes aren't needed to tell the other about how we feel in regards with certain things. Instead its just the comfort of knowing that you know how the other feels without it being spoken. At peace. Feeling more upbeat about the future.

Beautifully written 👏👏👏

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#480

Thank you so much for updating. This is one of gym favorite FF - it is what the show should have showed. I loved it. Please don't end it any time soon!