Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3

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shagun05

@shagun05

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

You are just fantastic!!!

I mean you actually made pearls symbolize Khushi !!! It was just

marvelous and each and every symbol that you wrote was just

awesome.

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

AWESOME!!!!

This part was so so so brilliant...the way Arnav was talking to her and their first kiss!...it was so sweet.

The way you were writing about their emotions is so real...and I always wonder, "how do you do it?" And I always answer saying, "I don't know how but I am so happy that I am able to read such a wonderful story!"

I cannot wait to see the conversation between Anjali and Shashi, and I really wonder how Khushi will say "I love you"!

Keep up the great work!

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sri_ffn

@sri_ffn

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

I'm really sorry, I'm reading a few stories with similar plots so I'm a little confused, Shashi Gupta in this story can speak? Well that's kinda great. He's a much better person for Anjali to confide in than Khushi, makes Khushi's life easy. Though I doubt she trusts him enough to confide in him. But he's a definitely a better choice when it comes to the matters of Shyam.

Also, thank god they kissed already! long overdue!! ((No, i'm not saying it wasn't timed well, I'm re-emphasising I'm a perv when it comes to Arshi))

Loved the chapter sweetheart!

~sri

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

the hug, Arnav and Khushi's emotions and the turmoil going on in

Anjali's mind... awesome1😊

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sri_ffn

@sri_ffn

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: damonzlady
the hug, Arnav and Khushi's emotions and the turmoil going on in
Anjali's mind... awesome1😊

Hi! I just wanna kiss your avi, maybe use some tongue while i'm at it *winks*

~sri

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Jennifer

@Jennymyola

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

i had goosebumps on my arms when i read chapter 43. Extremely soulful. Perfect!

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

excellent excellent excellent update - luved it to the bits - wonderful and super awesome update - that was a double treat for us - thx for ur pms

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

i loved the update..👏the way he said what that ring means to him...every single thing he said..nothing could have described someone s love..someone s pain...😊u were marvelous👏am eagerly waiting for the next one😊