Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Awesome update.

You described every emotion, every scene so well.

The way you described arnav's happiness on realising that khushi was hugging him for the first time was too good.

So anjali wants to disclose her secret to khushi. Why do i think that she may not be pregnant?

Thanks for the pm

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Awesome update.. loved them both actually all three.Thanks for the pm.

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tina

@cpervaiz

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

to be honest, the last part was a cutie and also the part when she impulsively hugged him, i'm not criticizing or maybe i am, but it's friendly one that sometimes it's gets really hard to find the story line and what's going on in middle of all the jumbled emotion from all-over, i mean there's just too much detailing about random things or too many emotions at the same time and i get lost what was going.

pplz don't take this in a bad way, i do love your story

can't wait to read more

thanx for the pm:)

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

I really love their love and how they are getting closer

Also I like how Anjali trusts Khushi a lot

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shagun05

@shagun05

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

This was awesome!!!

loved it and please dont call it Rubbishy coz it was just beautiful!!! 😊

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TheFictionFreak

@TheFictionFreak

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Awesome update 👏
Thanks for the pm..

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

wow that was a beautiful display of emotions just loved it and the mutual hug wow i just loved it

amazing work

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

amazing update👏eagerly waiting for the next one😊

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lovelyangel

@lovelyangel

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Girl,youare absolutely talented.You wrote thoughts and emotions of Arnav and Khushi brilliantly and beautifully.I absolutely adored whole update(and I more than sure that no matter how many times I read it my thirst is not gonna satiate)

And no matter how many times he apologised, and how many times she forgave him, he could not forget that.Although I badly wanted redemption track in the show but this is way too much burden on our Arnav and I want him to be free of it.He should try to forget it as his tears and guilt hits the heart of Khushi and ours.

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#250

that was amazing! seriously wow! every emotion! every feeling! I feel like i was seeing and witnessing that hug! written so damn beautifully!

you expressed everything! I feel like they have sooo much bursting in them and that I wish they would just say it all!!! they are sooo in love with each other!

I LOVE IT!!

God i am going to go back and re-read it!!!