Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3

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Peppy

@darkangel93

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

i was waiting for this update!!! loved it, as always!!!!!

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Such powerful prose ...always ...I am stunned ...

Loved it ! thanks for the pm sweetie.

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

No matter whatever you say about your writing, I loved it :)

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Awesmoe update...loved it...Anjali is going through a myriad of emotions...Thanks for the PM

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Oh god you call this rubbishy??? That was beautiful!
Loved it!!!
Everything...great balance of both arhi and Anjali...:D
Anjali is willing to confide in khushi...greT step...only if she knew...
She hugged him 😳
the whole part she in his arms...was spot on! Very well written:)
The ending...god...will he become sad...again?:/

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rashgirl000

@rashgirl000

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

awesome part.

cant wait for the next part.

update soon.

and thanks for the pm

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sri_ffn

@sri_ffn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Really? THAT is a cliffhanger??

You're way too humble for being such a good writer...

Okay!

So I liked a lot of things, the fact that Anjali wants to confide in Khushi is tricky...its a wonderful depiction of Anjali's unique bond with Khushi but its tricky because it puts Khushi in a Rock and Hard place...

I love Anjali's description of Arnav's anger...

And I loved Arnav's insecurity even after all that, that has happened between these two, I love that he's not lost that part of his character that will always question emotions and I love that he's constantly trying to learn and re-learn all that he's learnt about emotions...

~big hugs for you~

all my love

~sri

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UV_Arshi

@UV_Arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Awww...i think it's become quite a tradition for me to start my comment with 'aww'...lol. but that's what i was doing throughout..feeling overjoyed, ecstatic, just melting...feeling their love and intimacy and slight hesitation...you've depicted all the emotions beautifully! i absolutely love it..! you're awesome! 👏 hope you find time soon to continue...waiting for the next part..😆

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un.complicated

@un.complicated

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

Awesome chapter!!! Loved it. Thank you for PM-ing me.

At first, because I read so many different fics, I was confused about which one I was reading, so I had to go back to the previous chapter and re-read to catch up lol!

But wonderful as always, I love how Arnav's repenting in this story and how his and Khushi's relationship is slowly blooming. You know what I find amazing? ... the fact that in this story, Khushi and Arnav haven't even had their first kiss yet, but yet, the chemistry between them is out of this world and you have managed to keep readers enthralled without the use of a physical relationship between the protagonists. Kudos to you for that!

Looking forward to the next update already :)