Fate-Mate Thread FOUR Chapter 31

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DANCHU

@DANCHU

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

I am a huge fan if this story i wish i could say how beautiful it is or shud i say """pperfect"""" loved i just hope dey start realizin their love atleast a bit

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adi.bi

@adi.bi

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

So its Saturday morning. I was browsing IF and wondering when will Fate Mate be updated and VOILA, I get a PM for it. 😊

Lovely update as usual! I just know ASR is going to be sneaky on that one promise. Oh well! Thats why we love him 😉

Thanks for the PM and I really do appreciate the long updates 👏

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Mira

@kyunki_iloveu

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

loved ittt..
for two people that are soo comfortable with each other..
they surely tip toe around a lot..
lol
cant wait to see wht he will ask of her..

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

First of all: I'M BACK!!!!!!! Yes I love you more then you're husband because on your anniversary day I decided to come back for you! 😆

LOL Your welcome! And I must tell you that todays update was awesome!

😳It was cute how he thinks she's perfect and the way he felt about the word so romantic.

🤣 Poor grandma, she's probably dying at the spa right now! LOL it was so funny what he did to his grandma...women, we're great!

😎YOU'RE IN LOVE WITH HER YOU IDIOT! I really want to scream that at him. When will he find out!?!

☺️ Can I marry him? He is too cute! Going to the mehndi just because of her...awww! I loved that part!

😲omg that's a really big promise...gutter mind alert...I can't wait to see how you use it!

Loved the update! Can't wait to see how this promise will affect them! 😃

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LIONHEART

@LIONHEART

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

First Many Many happy Returns of the day on your anniversary! That is really very kind and thoughtful of you to write an update to this fabulous story of yours. Its flowing beautifully and keeping us hooked.

By the way I am eagerly awaiting your update on It started with 300Rs, as it was this story which got me in touch with you. Pls after enjoying the anniversary celebrations, i hope you can find the time for that soon.

Take care! n thx once again for the updates.

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soaringskies

@soaringskies

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

it was awesome...u r my fav writer...coz u give long updates...😆😆😆

i was so involved in d sory...dat when did i finish reading J i couldn't gather...😃😃

thanx 4 d p.m...😃😃

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Barunz4ever

@Barunz4ever

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Hi dear Wish u a very Happy n refreshing anniversary

Thanks for the update just luvd it n u knw wat nowadays enjoying n waiting for ur updates more than Ipkknd just luv ur work the way u potray the characters n their emotions n the way u unfold the story it's really amazing great talent u hav must say dear

Keep it up😛

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Ayesha

@stunning.ayesha

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

AAwesome awesome awesome

Bucket full coffee 🤣

He kept that stain shirt with himself without washing it 👍🏼

Aww khushi gift was awesome

Lovely update
Nd well happy anniversary 😃

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

That was one amazing update..loved it absolutely...liking the characterization and flow of the story

Cant wait to read more...thanks for the PM

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Happy Anniversarry KC. God bless u and ur family with all the cherishness and happiness in this world.

Thnx for gifting us such a long and a very very very nice update on ur big day.

Hope ur daughter is doing well. Take care of ur angel. Am expecting my angel this Christhmas. Reallly tensed.

Now to the update.

Only 3 things came to my mind wen I thought of commenting on ur update.

1. Wooowww.

2. Wwwooowww.

3. Wwwooowww.

The delay that u took in updating the next part is forgiven for the lenghty update that u gave, but this will not b accepted in the future. U need to give us a regular update atleast till the Fate part (ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA and ASR r the same) is revealed.

The way u portrayed Nani here is simply superb. Tat was a true suspense, coz u always highlghted the phone call as voice and never gave us any hint who it could b except tat it was a female. I thought it could either b his sister or his ex-girlfriend who r not in a relation, but are frnz yet, but it being Nani was a surprise and the moment I found it was Nani the scene where she danced for Ooh la la ooh la la came in my mind, the naughy, chirpy, and the elegant nani.

Khushi's gift was reallly awesome, has a grt meaning...

The other funniest part was bucket of coffee, I was ROFLing on reading it, just imagining how ASR would consume a bucket of coffee, remembered the scene where he was forced to eat the tasteless, only boiled vegetables for brkfast at Gupta house before the kidnap part in the show.

Once again a very big thnx for the long update along with the PM and expecting it in the future tooo without much delay in the updates.