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Abi

@Abi.Na

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Posted: 13 years ago

#501

wow! an other update 2day... never expected this reaction from Arnav... awesome! eagerly waiting for ur next update. 😊

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#502

Bit impressed wid Arnav's reactions !! Not angry but calm an emotional !

Awesome update

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varshapan

@varshapan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#503

you are on a roll again...! loving to see updates every morning here in india.

oh, arnav's reaction was nothing short of unexpected and yet so natural to his character. his character which is so much in control in every other respect but on his sister.

lovely update... and thank you for writing this lovely FF.

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maya252

@maya252

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Posted: 13 years ago

#504

They both understand each other so well, the loss they both had seems to bind them closer... beautiful update

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Vrushali Naik

@barunlove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#505

U totally outdid me wid Arnav's reaction...n den he wnts to sleep over it??? Y????? I jst cnt predict wt u would write next!!! u r jst too good with imagination...

U would find me stalking ur update smore often now!!!! Do i need to say i LOVED the update???

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nimra21

@nimra21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#506

Oh wow. His reaction, the scream, the tears from both of them. Broke my heart. Powerful and intense update Devi. Please let these tortured souls find some comfort in each other.

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shree99

@shree99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#507

i love this girl
'try not screaming bloody murder'...classic
If he has no control over his basic instincts and is going to scream.. then she has no control over her basic instinct and is going to chk on him regardless of what he has said...
u have put this across beautifully..
his well being has become her basic instinct