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Shamz

@Shamz94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#961

Its was so beautiful writen loved it :)

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Fau Zi

@lazylad8-FauZi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#962

Great ff...read all in a few days...plz keep writing

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namithasmiles

@namithasmiles

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Posted: 12 years ago

#963

read it just now...Awesome story yaaar..Loved it...The transition of Arnav Kadoos to a loving father and husband was written wonderfully...I really really loved this story...

Now wish we could have seen them do all these during the show...

But still they are alive through all these...The best Arnav nd Khushi...❤️

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#964

i just read it in one go today..beautiful story ...if ipk was running we could have seen this story unfolding but never mind we can still imagine it in our hearts

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Khuarv

@Khuarv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#965

I am just glad I read your ff 😃 . I liked the khushi of
this ff. The way you have expressed the emotions of Arnav
and khushi is just amazing. The chapter where he promises
his di to give his child and later seeing khushi's reaction feels
so torn and rectifies his mistake was just awesome. In chapter
19 the reunion of Arnav and khushi was so beautifully expressed
, the pent up emotions and the angst between them the way they
end up being miserable when they are away from each other was
just beautiful. Kudos to you on your amazing work 👏 .

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neha

@neag

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#966

well the last para of part 16 make me happy...WOW he is goggling it and now he already finfing the pre school for his baby...he is truely going to be the best father who cares for everyone

Edited by neag - 12 years ago

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#967

I just read ur ss cause it was farah who wrote

it was as good as ur other work I loved the journey of khushi n arnav towards their life line

their kiddo I was surprised its just sound like I was watching IPPKND like it was not like I was reading something it was like watching each n everything

love u dear u r amazing