SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 - Page 95

Aww that was amazing
so sweet
brilliant

Thank you for this wonderful story. Loved it. Beautifully written.

Amazing FF... Loved it!!!
Beautifully written with just the right amount of emotions in each place!!

it was so awesome..great and beautiful...

a gr8 story! arnav becoming a dad... from her child... to kiddo... to my kiddo... to arshi... lovely! and him caring soo much during the pregnancy... taking care of an extra-cranky, extra-crazy KKGSR... so adorable! the best was "aman do you know an 11 weeks child is as big as a fig?" or running around showing the usg pic to everyone...awww

dadi and ppl like her are so not worth even being called humans!! such a manipulative, judgmental, arrogant lady... inspite of being a woman and a mother herself she wanted to use another woman as a baby-making-machine and take away their daughter-in-law's child and give it to her daughter, such hypocritical and biased behaviour... god knows how many women suffer the indignities of being someone's daughter-in-law... how many sacrifices are expected of them... how much they are abused... daughter-in-laws the second-class family members...

i didn't know if i should be angry at or pity anjali... how could she even try justifying to take the child bcoz of the dad?? what about the mother? and how could she not trust the most responsible person ever, her brother to not to take care of the well-being of his child? well she got her head sorted in the end...

and kudos kudos kudos to khushi for taking a strong stand right from the beginning! awesome!! self-sacrifice is outdated and the ppl who demand the sacrifice will only exploit further... well done khushi! her craziness and arhi's lovey dovey moments made the story even better! awesome arhi story along with a social message 😊👏

Oh my God!! I read this in one sweep. Such a beautiful story. You captured Arnav perfectly. Angry and yet fiercely loving when it comes to Khushi. and their little Arshi, perfect. Great story.

Farah!!

I read the whole ss in one go. such a beautiful story, what we couldn,t see on the show you gave us. You have written it beautifully. thanks

A beautiful and wonderful story. It was emotional but perfect. 😉