SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 - Page 93

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...read d whole story...wonderful...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved this ff...read it all at one go...that was a wonderful journey
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: inajnar

This was stupendous !! I read this in one go and it was a wonderful journey indeed.

You have so rightly brought out the little nuances that make up Arnav and Khushi.
This story is worth seeing onscreen .
Beautiful !!



Aww!!Thank you!You think it's so good that it's worth seeing onscreen??😃

Thank you!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: farah53



Aww!!Thank you!You think it's so good that it's worth seeing onscreen??😃

Thank you!🤗


Yes...Most Stories of the Future depict everything as hunky dory which is nice but sounds a bit too good to be true..
Your Story seems to perfectly capture the changes in ASR - as he he prepares to take on his role as a father. And i think it would look great on screen !!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
chalo ji.. read it all in one go ..loved it too much..

i loved how you did not made khushi all sacrificing and
loved more to make her fight for her and her kiddo..

loved Arnav .. you have kept his character and ohh i love you so much for that, you know i first read the epilogue and then the whole SS and i enjoyed every bit.. 👏


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Posted: 12 years ago
Stumbled upon your SS earlier today and just read it all in one ago.
The scenario of Arnav learning about fatherhood was brilliant. The pregnancy journey was well described.
You write really well.
All in all, I loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Samiya has suggested me this story. I will read it and drop in my comments soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

Samiya has suggested me this story. I will read it and drop in my comments soon :)



Lucky you!!She never suggests me any stories to read!😭

All she ever suggested me was to write another part for some stupid random OS!😭😭(Just kidding Samiya😆🤗)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: farah53



Lucky you!!She never suggests me any stories to read!😭

All she ever suggested me was to write another part for some stupid random OS!😭😭(Just kidding Samiya😆🤗)


Okay fine now here is my BIG list of suggestions

MUST MUST READs

Destroyed by Lazyleaves [awarded]

Unconditional by again Lazyleaves [probably has the highest no of readers in this forum]

Of lemons and limes by Omoraboti

About last night/ Khushi by Inked

Arranged marriage by Krani

Finding solace by Rasgulla_sp

Unnamed by Rasgulla_sp

Indecent proposal by Yuks

Finish all these I'll suggest some more 😆

ps your thread reached 150 pages... mods will probably close it... open another one


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SamiyaIPKKND


Okay fine now here is my BIG list of suggestions

MUST MUST READs

Destroyed by Lazyleaves [awarded]

Unconditional by again Lazyleaves [probably has the highest no of readers in this forum]

Of lemons and limes by Omoraboti

About last night/ Khushi by Inked

Arranged marriage by Krani

Finding solace by Rasgulla_sp

Unnamed by Rasgulla_sp

Indecent proposal by Yuks

Finish all these I'll suggest some more 😆

ps your thread reached 150 pages... mods will probably close it... open another one



Umm..I am a regular reader of ALN/Khushi..Reading/read Indecent Proposal & Arranged Marriage..Will start on 'Of Lemons & Limes' then..

About the new thread, I feel strangely reluctant😳It's like printing out a second part for a book with no new story to tell!

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