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segad

@segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#901

very nicely done. looking forward to the next one

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#902

a beautiful conclusion to a beautiful yet highly realistic story... loved seeing arnav being a hands-on dad and how engrossed he's is in his daughter... also loved the moments of togetherness and contentment embodied in their last words to each other!

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Pooja

@pooja_shineStar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#903

cute cute cute cute!!!!

it was just lovely...one of my fav SS on if!!!!!1

really...fab story...fab writting sence...and everything perfect!!!

superb!

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 12 years ago

#904

A perfect ending...but i cannot stop my self from saying that i wish you would have considered continuing with the fanfic further.

i have enjoyed reading all the part..and the end was a treat to see khushi and arnav having a perfect family in their arshi. Indeed if this is not heaven then what is.

thanks for sharing this story with all of us. Do let me know if you decide to write a new FF.

Take care

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#905

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take bow dear!!!

gr8 work and nicely wrapped!!!

i was sad that it had to end...but loved to be a part of it!

one request...whenever you write again do make me a part of it!!!

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essess

@essess

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Posted: 12 years ago

#906

soft sweet wonderful!

your story made me smile after a long hard day, and a sad episode on tv. thx!

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chemistry9

@chemistry9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#907

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cute ending

wil surely mis it

ur amazng writer

thnx fr d pm

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Spriha

@KaranShilpa:)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#908

Very beautiful! I read all your parts.. and simply loved it when Khushi calls her, 'meri Jalebi!'! how adorable :D

thanks for writing such a meethi-meethi story! :)

keep writing more!

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priyaganesan

@priyalovely

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Posted: 12 years ago

#909

👏👏wow fanastic start and lovely and beautiful end...thanks such beautiful story...thanks for all PMs...if u write any new plss let me no and pm me k...

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fatprincess

@fatprincess

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Posted: 12 years ago

#910

Awwwh that was so beautiful. Arshiya was just the perfect name 😃 our little arshi 😳 !!! But damn this masterpiece just ended . .. U know what you made me fall more in love with Arnav and Khushi which i didnt think was even possible . Thank you Farah ! Thanx you so much for such an amazing piece of work . Now a well deserved standing ovation :

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