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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#891

OMGGG, This Has Been An Amazing Journey :)

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#892

That was amazing!!!!
I loved it!!!! So perfect!!!
This is heaven :)
Sad that it has come to an end...I'm gonna miss it!

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neha2005

@neha2005

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#893

amazing ending to the story!

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duncanelise

@duncanelise

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#894

That was a beautiful ending! Loved the story!

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preetika

@baRunmYlove21

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#895

wow dear such a cute and amazing ending ...really awesome !!! 👏👏👏
I want you to write more and more ...😊😊
loved your updates 😳😳😳

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#896

Loved it!!

What an ending!! That was beautiful; a perfect family, a perfect ending..

TO say I loved would be an understatement!!

Finally we have Arnav at peace with himself and he's such a loving, doting, caring father and so is Khushi. I love that banter b/w them. Arshi, she's one lucky girl to have such a family!!

Against all odds, they fought and they retained...and now a complete bliss in the form of a daughter and life goes on for them!! A memorable ending, that 'forever and always' was just too good!! I read tht line again and again!!

I'll definitely miss this story a lot, a lot!! I do really hope that you come up with many more stories :)

And not to forget, thanks a lot for those pm's :)

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#897

It was a beautiful ending ... and awesome ss

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#898

That was just beautiful 🤗

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#899

awesomee updateee,...

happy endinggg...

thnx 4 pm😃

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#900

OMG Farah this was sooo adorable and beautifully written <333 Arnav being all daddy sounds more hotter...😉..these were my favourite lines of awl update...😳...I love it when a baby grips ur finger tight...❤️...

she started watching her father's garden in the night time, turning her little head this way & that way, with her small button like brown eyes. Arnav inserted his index finger in one of her hands & she gripped it tightly. His eyes twinkled with pride

Ufff Jalebi is sucha cute nick for their doll...awww I cant believe Khushi calling her jalebi actually sounds super cute and adorableee...it gives the idea of her being chubby lil sweet dolll...
Faraahhh PLEASEEE do write an epilogueee...where jalebi is a tad bit older..may be walking...please pleaseee...