SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139

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ArnavKiKhushi

@ArnavKiKhushi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#401

So cute. All of the characters are so true to how they behave in the show. Nice idea! :)

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bungeejump

@bungeejump

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

Really interesting! Like the way you have characterized everyone, particularly the strong Khushi!

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Farah

@farah53

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: Kiely
u updating??

In the next 15 minutes!!Hold your horses!!😆

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Farah

@farah53

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Posted: 13 years ago

#404

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

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Posted: 13 years ago

#405

Hell!! I res'd first😆

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Loved the update dear... it was awesome... me likes... the saree is very stunning...I'm sure if khushi wore it she'd look ravishing... shocking Arnav didn't take her right there right at that moment

btw I dont want the story to end I want it to go on and on😃

Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 13 years ago

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priyaganesan

@priyalovely

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Posted: 13 years ago

#406

amazing yaar...thanks for PM...continue and update nxt part soon...

Edited by priyalovely - 13 years ago

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#407

oh man i got second...

anyways awsuuum update dear...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm...

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#408

beautiful update sweetheart !!!

simply loved it !!!!

i love the way khushi makes arnav realise his own qualities !!!

loved it !!!!!!! 😊

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#409

just read parts 10 and 11 together! love your writing style where every word and gesture is apt and not over the top! the maturity shown by the characters is amazing and I especially love the sensible yet heartfelt conversations between khushi and arnav... yet their passion and desire doesn't take a backseat but is ever-present to scorch the page!