SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139

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Posted: 13 years ago

#411

Awesome update

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luvraj4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#412

loved the update...

One night, she thought, one night I had hoped to look more striking than my husband, Devi Maiyya. But that was just too much to ask, wasn't it, when the name of your husband was Arnav Singh Raizada

hahahaha..this is my favourite line from this update...

waiting for the next update...pleaseee don't end the story anytime soon...its too good to be ended soo early..

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Deeksha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#413

I like that you have used Mamaji..otherwise he is such a passive character. Wonderful update😊

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SunshineGirl6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#414

WOWWW I so loved Khushiz Sari..it was stunning and gorgeousss !!!

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shagun05

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Posted: 13 years ago

#415

gorgeous sari and scandalous blouse...😳

fab chapter

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Thrishna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#416

Loved the update...I don't want the story to end that fast... Take your time and give us such amazing updates as you give now...

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 13 years ago

#417

Love this story! Please don't rush to finish it. The pace is perfect.

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Nisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#418

update was too good

khushi would look stunning in that saree and surely it would have the desired effect on Arnav. But poor girl..he husband is too dashing.

Loved the bonding between khushi and mamaji. His is a character which has been neglected too much.

waiting for the next part

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snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#419

Great update loved how she wore the white sari and red blouse surprised that he left her at the stairs. Hopefully Arnav will listen to Khushi because Mama sounds like a great role model.

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crazy4ArnavSR

@crazy4ArnavSR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#420

wow like i told u earlier..👏 i really loved the concept of ur ss evn before i read a single word about it...now after reading it i even loved it more...i know this journey of us witnessing arnav becoming a father is gonna be a much cherised one...all gr thnx to u for so far and in advance... just keep updating faster n faster...can't help... greediness speaking..😉

hey, i was hoping u r not anywhere close to completion of ur ss already? ... because i m really loving it and do not want it to end anytime soon... i think and m hoping tht i m on right track... thinking tht the ride had just begun and have a long way to go...? am i right?😲

please add me to ur PM list too!

about part 11-

well... i m really loving arshi relationship... but i hope anjali z not hving some evil and selfish ideas going on in her mind ... i really do fear that! i m glad... u r carrying the story so beautifully...!

i cud imagine khushi looking really stunning... but like khushi... even i m a li'l distressed tht droolover hottie..😛outdid her yet again...(*now i will be drooling for even more longer time over him*)😉😳😆!