It all started with 300 rupees Thread 3 Ch. 29 - Page 47

Fantabulous ... Loved it...

👏👏thnaks.great job...awesome👏👏

This was possibly my favourite update for this fF! I was relieved when it came to light that Aashna was not Khushi's biological daughter and this she hadn't cheated on Arnav (technically) but then I was thrown by her admitting she was pregnant! Wow what a roller coaster!!! That was crazy! And what a long update! Thank you!!!

Now I'll try to be patient and await your next update!! ;)

hello..❤️

where to start from..?😕okay starting from the start..mahn!!!!silence..silence..!!! silence n silence..how long was the silence for?you know right..?but lemme elaborate..the silence between them was for..part A..n 108-109 lines of part B.yes!!!😲laughin?dont!!1yes i counted,,i was so happy after reading this story that i could stop being silly..

so i did,,

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wen she spoke..wonders happened..

starting from..

i loved the mother here..more than a wife..

more than Khushi..

the way she was concerned about her li'l angel..

mast..:)

her story was yet again heart breakin..i mean she has already suffered so much in life before..n yet again she was suffering..seeing her dear one once again going far from her..

the way she told her story..her life without him..since the time she left his house..met her.. the 1 who gave her house to live..motto to live for..and a daughter later,,

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hell..then started the kid story stuff..ya he hated kids..but there's something called opinion..she blabbered about him hating kids and ol...

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that sounded n made me yell..that Khushi please let him speak his part..:P

she gave the baby a new life..and she couldnt think of living without her..

how did she remembr that Arnav hated kids?

Khushi herself was a kid sometimes..😆

how could he hate her..i mean kids..:D

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talking about Arnav..Arnav being Arnav surprised cum shocked me since the beginning till the end,,

so much of patience?

where did he get that from..he spoke a line on patience..am getting that scene but not exactly d line..

so would leave that part..:P

hell mahn!!!

this would be 1 day he would never forget through out his life..

seriously so much of shocks..

*Khushi having a daughter,,

him being a father..

she not being his daughter..

she not beingh Khushi's biological daughter..

Khushi being pregnant..

their baby..'*

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n huh

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my God.!!

what did he actually had in the meeting in breakfast i wonder..:D

loved Arnav throughout..

..Naina for aalways being by Khushi's side..

and Khushi..no words.. to her own conclusions..

she thought he would leave her..wont accept her daughter..

and she thought he left ..

hell..

she needed to give him time..and needed some herself..

..Arnav again went angry..but that was the real Arnav..how could he leave her..

after knowing what he had done 2 her in the past...

am sure..Aashna would being lots of happiness in their life..

and he would love her..the way he would love his..their biological daughtr/son/babies..:D

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now ending my comment..

1 thing more to add..

you said no cliffhanger(s) not exactly..but things to think over till the next update..:D

.. i found..1 or 2..:D

1.she fainted..i can relate it with the previous chpater..she had some problem..right?

she was ill/weak or so..

i think it has something related to that..:P

not the stress and ol which you mentioned..

2.d media fiasco,,:P

3.how did she establish herself.?i mean that wasnt req here..but that zz yet to be thought over..

here..the story revolved around their daughter..

and what am i thinkin?

lol

forget it..

beautiful chapter..

I LOVE YOU DAMNIT!!!!

update soon n do pm me..😛😛😛😛😛thnxxx😊😊😊😊😊

OMG!! This update was one of the most amazing updates of yours. I loved it and I think I will be in love with it till the nest time you update. I just loved how Arnav said "Our Anchana" sorry if I got the name wrong but it's just too cute and sweet. I just loved it. :D

brilliant updates

wow beautiful n brilliant updates loved it very much thanks for the pm

Dear KC...
I dont know where to start with...Brilliant update, completely engrossing n emotional and very matured ..Loved your Nayee Soch for Adoption as a Single Mother...As Motherhood is Not only giving birth to a child..Its a Perception..The bonding is always special...I just remember one of interview by Sushmita Sen about Reene( her adopted elder daughter), that She is born from her heart ( not womb)...

I am just captivated by how you conveyed Arnav, ( and US) about Khushi's Journey from Songs of Innocence to the songs of Experience.. Alone.The cause of Changed Khushi.. Who is not the same Khushi At all..The changes caused by the hardship, the cruelity of worldly things and obstacles she faced and very wel defined..

Now I come to Part by part what I loved the most

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Part A

One silence, two people, different pains, much confusion, and no words.

She wanted to go somewhere and hide. All of her. Somewhere safe with her daughter.She needs her coocoon back.All of it. And remain in it, forever. The outside world was terrifying.

But she couldn't find anyone who would take that burden off of her.

PartB

The Most Significant Question of the hour "are you related to the patient?"

He was just a married man when he woke up this morning and a husband in the office. But by noon he thought he was a father.

And by afternoon, he wasn't even sure if he was a father.

Every single time when he thought his life was back on track – BOOM – another thing waiting.Why was his life so complicated?

According to his little or not so little male ego – Khushi couldn't be physically involved with anyone other than him...

"are we going to talk about what you just said?""there is no other option than to talk about it." she still has to talk to him, tell him everything. Everything.

"please don't leave me alone here, I am scared. Please stay." "I wasn't leaving."

He let her hand go, he wiped her tears, dried her face, and then gently pulled her in. Holding her shaking body, trying to calm her. She had found her cocoon again...

Part C

"you need to see her, let's go."

Mom's concern for neglecting her daughter: very touchy..

I was too preoccupied about going to work and……..meeting him.. I was in my own little world

For how long are you going to feel guilty about everything around you? It's NOT your fault. Not everything is your fault. Stop taking the blame for everything.

"Now I am actually getting frustrated with your patience. Where did you get this much patience from?" "I have lost so much because of my anger, I thought I will try patience this time."..The realization of hard hitting facts...and the repentance redeemed almost all man who have the conscience..

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I just wanted to go……somewhere…….I didn't know where……..I just wanted to get away from everyone…..everything…….just……from all the shit……..I just wanted to leave……I had packed my stuff before leaving……but I don't know why………I didn't even bring anything with me…….I just left……you…..your house……your everything……."

Part D
"I didn't know who I hated more that time, you or him."..

"I still feel disgusted, not because of you, but just because of me that I ever let anyone treat me like that. I just hated being one of those women who just let men mistreat them anyway they chose to.": The Real Nayee Soch..Voicing for much needed Woman Emancipation

I hated myself for ever loving you.

"don't say sorry, you have already said that enough times,... But I still can't forget how my life is the way it is."

"Why do bad things happen to good people?" "bad things happen to bad people too, look at me, I am a perfect example of that."

I love you and you love me but………she is my daughter…….not your daughter………and I can't leave her……..I don't want to leave you either..

I just can't choose between her and you………I don't know what else to say……….she is my daughter……..I love her more than anything else……..I can't leave her……..well……..I won't leave her……..and I can't force you to accept her…I just can't give her false hopes of having a father. Sometimes I wonder if people really need both parents.

"I think you have forgotten Khushi, I am an orphan too."

"Khushi? Please tell me what's going on? What happened?" "I did get pregnant after that night."

Part E

One shock after another.

First – she had a daughter.

Second – the daughter could have been his.

Third – the daughter wasn't his.

Fourth – the daughter wasn't hers either, biologically at least.

Fifth – she did get pregnant after that night.

Just when he thought he had recovered from the first shock, BOOM – there were four more to deal with.

In that same damn day

OMG

He finally understood everything. Why she wasn't Khushi at all. His every 'why', his every 'what', his every 'how', his every 'when' had been just answered. So easily and so horribly.Her Pain, Emotional and physical. All what she had been through. All alone.

"you can't feel guilty about everything."

Part F

My life has changed, a lot. I am not that old Khushi anymore. I have lost so much that I am too afraid to even smile. I lost you. I lost my family. I lost my love. I lost my identity. I lost my entire life. And when that wasn't enough, I lost my baby. I lost our baby.".

I wanted to kill myself, I wanted to die. I had nothing to live for. Everything was gone.

And Then Destiny wanted me to have a baby, just not by birth.

"Giving birth is not the only way to become a mother, right?"

She gave me happiness in my miserable life. She gave me a reason to stand up for myself again. She gave me a reason to live.

I will not judge you. Loving me and wanting me is one thing, accepting my daughter is whole another thing. And I certainly don't want you to feel pressurized into accepting her. That's the last thing I would want."

"I will never forget these past few weeks with you. These were the happiest days of my life. Thank you for making me feel loved again. For taking all my pain away. For treating me like a wife. For enduring all my tantrums. For just loving me. For just being with me."

She was done talking, done explaining, done apologizing, just done.

I will be fine with whatever you decide..Is it really so!!NO

but she still didn't like him leaving. She wanted to tell him that she needed him, ..she wanted him to stay there for her but she just couldn't…She just stared at that door, hoping that it would open again and he would somehow come back to her. Again...

"He hasn't left Khushi, he is outside……he is just sitting there…….alone……"…

Part G

"You are still here?"

"Where else would I be?"...

BINGO

you to think that I am just so inhuman. A cold-hearted person who will make you choose between her and I?"

And saw her face apologetic face……..And saw the pool of tears forming in her eyes……

All over again……..

She saw his face again……

Final culmination..

They were both quiet now.

Too much had been said.

Too much had been explained.

Too many apologies.

Too many questions.

Too many answers.

They were done talking. About everything.

He was there for her, she was there with him.

Together.

"you still haven't told me something……""what's her name?"

"Aashna"( I Adore this name..the meaning..Beloved)

"My Aashna" Corrected Khushi.

"Our Aashna" Confirmed Arnav.

The largest Post ever I made. MAha review..synopsis..Sorry dear..but cant resist myself...

Omg i have no words to explain wat i felt while reading...this update made my cry,smile, di but am happy that arnie never left her side...hope aashu gets well in next update...ya i loved ur nayi soch...have u seen we all told u to write it in you way and see now how beautiful it came out...really awesome...HATS OF YOU di...thanks for pm...take cr...now time starts for FM...