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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Cute update !!!! Interesting concept loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Amazing updates
loved it
NK seriously deserve a tight slap..
continue soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
interesting concept nadz
i missed it
nk's prank is not funny
arnav slapped khushi😭
hmm i can see sparks flying
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Very happy that there is no Shyam in it.nice update.thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
wow new concept
dis s so amazing
thanx for the pm👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

Arnav drive back home" it is must to say sorry , & i can do it " he parked car ,"she got a deep cut i hope so her vein is not hurt "he look at his shirt ,he ran up stairs ,placed his hand on the bell , when some one didn't opened he knocked he saw the big lock " what the , i hope buaji had not taken her to hospital" he taken out his cell to call to buaji .bell was going but no one was picking from other end "if she is seriously injured "he opened his flat & walk in, he was trying & walking like crazy in his room




Buaji: friend was sick she plan to give her a visit , she asked Khushi to accompany her but she refused .

Khushi: Buaji hum kuch galat kar daga, aap jai " ( i will do something wrong , you go your self)

Buaji: did asked her what she did that made Arnav so angry but she didnot told her ,buaji didn't forced her " yeh phone rako agar daar laga tou call karna"

Khushi shake her head in yes

Buaji: Arnav.Akash, nk aur gia sub ka number hain.

Khushi thek

Buaji: lock kar lo

Khushi nahi aap kara it from out

Buaji: ok andar se dekhe lana ,she asked her to see from the she went



As buaji left Khushi walk to the room she removed her duppata & look at her face ,his fingers marks has turn blue , a smile appear at her face "bauji or amma ki tarah " she closed her eyes FB of village

Khushi was Garima & Shashi daughter ,she always thought she was their step daughter ,as they always treat her badly, she was right in thinking so ,Garima & Shashi didnot had child ,they have adopted her when they were financially strong , Khushi was just 2 years when Shashi became bankrupt ,since then they starting thinking she came with a bad luck.

FB end as she heard door bell , she at first got frighten but then she got courage & walk to the door , she try to see from the peephole , as she saw Arnav she placed her hand on her cheek"DM yeh" she ran to the room and close the door , the door bell stopped ,but the cell started ring she look at the caller number with she felt some one strangling her ,she sat on bed wrapping her arm around her knee . let the it ring , she look at the window she saw him walking like crazy in room ,at first she thought some one else but then she look at closely she saw him , he was walking in room and calling talking to him self , she quickly close the curtain peep from side .


Arnav " i am dam sure i have hurt her and she is in trouble" he look at the counter he saw the tray , a smile appear at his lips " all is my fault" he picked up the napkin " aloo puri buaji na bani " he kept the cell and started eating

Khushi:" oh bhook lagi hai ,"she giggle as she saw him eating

Arnav:"buaji make my favorite on Wednesday ,today it is Monday" he look at the window as he felt someone looking at him

Khushi uff she hide behind the curtain "yeh dekhe kyun raha hain"

Arnav " no one there"he started eating again "yeh buaji na nahi banaya hain"he saw he had finished everything ,he was surprised , he made his coffee ,he received call from office "i am not coming to office ,i will join you all from home"he sat with his lappy

Khushi was peeping ,when she saw he was working she sat with her embroidery on bed ,off and on she was looking at him sewing .time flies .


Arnav stretch his arm as the meeting was over ,he walk out to check buaji but he found a big lock " i am not going to office "he walk in and drop on bed as he was having headache .when he slept he dont know .



Khushi cooked their dinner as Buaji called her and instructed her ,she walk back to room" oh kahan chal gai "she try to search him she saw him sleeping as his bed was visible .she smiled and started watching tv . time passed she got bored and slept


Arnav woke up as he was suffocated ,he look at the ac it was off"What the " he look out it was dark . " not a breakdown " he freshen up and walk down everyone was standing down.Akash had came back from office

Arnav "kya huwa hain"

Akash" breakdown some fault in wires it will take at least 3 to 4 hours"

Arnav oh

nk: i am sorry

Arnav: Akash ask him to stay away from me or i will break his jaw

Akash: yar leave it

nk:break it as this is haunting me

Bauji: yeh kya

Arnav look around her

Akash kya huwa buaji

Buaji woh titiyla upper hai iss ko andhara se daar lagta hai

Arnav: what

Buaji : iss na bola nahi jana tou mein uss ko

Arnav :give me keys i will get her

Buaji : look around" oh woh taxi mein ,phone karo iss ko"

Arnav: phone per aap ka bag tou taxi mein choot gaya

Buaji: mobile iss ka paas hai

Arnav: why she had not picked my ?

Akash: it is switched off

Arnav : you go & get key maker i am going up

Bauji : Kaise jao ga

Arnav i will managed .


Khushi woke us as she was too suffocated ,she look around it was too dark ,she on the lamp but it didnot open ,she was scared as it was a new place, she hold her pillow and sat ..time was not passing , she was silently praying .


Nk what you are up to ?

Arnav:" shut up show me light" he climb the edge of his balcony railing from there he moved to the window and then he was in her balcony as he jump in it make noise

Khushi chor she ran and hide her self in closet

Arnav knocked at the window ,when he didnot got response he open the lock and walked in , he try to search her but she was no where ,he called NK"she is not here"nk told buaji

Buaji ask him to see closet

NK check closet

Arnav "what" he open the closet

Khushi held her breath and hide more behind the clothes," humara paas kuch nahi hai" she was crying and scared ,a smile appear on his lips he became relaxed

Arnav "mein hoon" he caress her hairs

Khushi open her eyes she look at him as he had torch in his hand she suddenly hug him , it was so sudden he had no option he drop the torch from his hand and hug her tight


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Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
obviously u shud continue di..it ws awsmmm..i just read in one go..it ws superb..hat's off...itne mast idea's aate kahan se aapko m amazed...mwaaahh..thnks
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Woweee this is super awesome di……aww bless ArHi - bless the cotton socks of Khushi- she is sooo nave and sweet - and out Arnav- hes her protector - her hero - you should defo continue this…..i dnt knw how to go about the story though - because you have the mastermind before SS and FF but I would defo say - give this little baby your precious time too - and when you feel -NOTE that when YOU feel that is not worth carrying on- then ONLY do you consider ending it….theek hai??? Samjhe???ya Samjhaoon - oops hehehe sorry - I'm kinda hooked to watching Arjun too - n I love his line…..ciao xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
First of all you should continue this one naddiya =) =) This story is getting interesting chap by chap. =) =) =)

Love the update =) =) written it very well =) =)

Awesome =) =) Love it =) =)

And i think no one should joke like that =) i think NK gone little bit over with the joke =) =) but anyways =) =) I think Arnav should punish NK little more =) =) for it =) =).

And you have reveal that Khushi's parents are not treating her well =( feel so bad about Khushi =) =)
Wish arnav gets to know about that fact too =) =)

Continue soon =) =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60

awesome

w8ing 4 the next update

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