Jaane dil mein kbse hai tu...- Maaneet Ff - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update ..👏
Continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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name is changed but it is beautiful...

please update parts soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
lovely start...add me in your pm list 😊
update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
nice...
cont soon...

PS - can u edit the title too whenever u update?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
hum sirf aap ke hai ...or ...dil hai tumhara...lovely ff ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Character sketch

Geet Handa





Maan singh Khurana

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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
lovely start
congrats for new ff
lovely banner
continue soon
thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1


One girl sitting alone on the big stone at the edge, as a thundering wave came and hit the shore, splashing the droplets on her body.

One boy came and placed hand on her shoulder.

Boy: tum yha kya kr rhi ho

Girl: kuch nhi, bs in lehro ki nakayamb koshish dekh rhi ho

Boy: kya matlab

G: yhi hr ek lehar uthti hai''.aur sahil se milne se phle hi pathar se tkra jati hai

B: tumhe is waqt yha nhi balki apni behan ke sath hona chahiye

Ushe tumhari jaroorat hai

G: janti hu

Pr mein wha rhi to

B: to kya

Apne pyaar ko kissi aur ka hote huye nhi dekh payungi

G (angry tone): rishuuu

Rishu: madhu ye to tum bhi janti ho

Aur mein bhi

Tum bhi usi se pyar krti ho

She laughed.

Madhu : tumhe bhi yhi lagta hai

Aur ushe bhi

Pr na jane mujhe nhi lagta

Aur lagna bhi nhi chahiye

Wo bs meri behan ka hai

Wo us se bhut pyaar karti hai

Na jane kb se''..

Na jaane uske dil mein kbse hai wo'..

Jiska ehsaas us se bhi nhi tha

Rishu: pr tera kya madhu

Madhu: mera

Mera to sb kuch meri geet hai

Rishu: tu teen zindigiyo se khel rhi hai madhu

Madhu: mein ..

Nhi rishu'' khela to us upar wale ne hai

Rishu: madhu maan tujhse pyaar krta hai geet se nhi

Geet uske sath kbhi khush nhi rh payengi

Madhu: geet ki khushi sirf maan hai

Uski har saas maan hai

Uski dadkan maan hai

Jeene ki wajh maan hai

Aur tu khta hai

Wo khush nhi rhengi maan ke sath

Rishu give blank expression.

Madhu: geet kissi ke sath khush rh sakti hai to wo bs maan hai

Rishu: aur tera kya

Madhu : tu hai na mere liye

Khte hai na " khuda ne sbhi ke liye kissi na kissi ko bnaya hai"

Waise hi maan ko bnaya hai geet ke liye

Aur geet ko maan ke liye

Smjha Buddu

Rishu : mein to smjh gya

Na jane tu kb smjhengi

Khi der na ho jaye''..

Madhu(Mummer) : der to ho chuki hai

Kash mein phle smjh jati'''..

Rishu: tune kuch kha

Madhu : nhi''..

Tujhe pta hai rishu

Ye place mujhe bhut pasand hai

Yha aake mann ko bhut relief milta hai

Rishu (Monologue)

How simply this place has managed to fill that empty place in her heart, she herself could never make out.

What in this god damn place that makes her feel home, may be loneliness.

She tried enough but still couldn't forget the fact that "she somewhere likes or loves Maan".

I don't know what truth is'' she really loves him or not' or its only infatuation.

Pr job hi hai''.usse meri madhu dukhi hai.

Ye chahe koi aur dekh paye ya nhi

Usse koi smjh paye ya nhi

Pr main janta hu

Madhu: kha kho gya tu

I am here and you think about someone else.

Jha tujhse baat nhi karti

Mein jar hi hu

Rishu : he held her wrist and pulled her towards self.

"Yu na jayo chodke'''."

Madhu : fir shuru ho gya tera filmy bhoot

Rishu: "dil hai ki manta nhi"

Madhu: chl ab yha se

Geet intzaar kr rhi hongi hamara

Rishu: hamara ya sirf tumhara

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maaneet my lovely couple

Edited by maanetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
very gud start i think madhu maan se nahi rishu se pyaar karti he aur maan se usko sirf infatuation hoga...plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Love it madhu sahu me theen jidgiyo se khel rahi hai

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