FF-i hate u like i luv u 'Book2' lastpart pg13 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: ilove99

juhi,urmita -what made you think meera is that lady?

meera is diff yaar and as i told in this update that mysterious lady is trying to find about meera

Okay...Now i am confused😕...when did i say meera was the lady...i know meera is NOT the lady...i think u misunderstood my cmnt somehow...i was just wondering who that lady was... 😊
nyway u can give nxt update real quick nd clear all confusion, right...😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
hmm lovely update n who is the lady ? n u khud toh sunti nahin ho saath ein Simi ko bhi lapet liya 😆 listen 2 ur bro he knows what is good for u n Pia abhi tak kitna attentively class mein thi Abhay ke naam aate hi class bunk 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
nice update meera...but who is that lady??? why someone keeping eye on abhay and all...poor piya cant even say anything to abhay...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: urmita

nice update...so u is that lady ?...poor pia...abhay is making her go to prom with ron...hope he gets info abt the lady...continue soon...😊


see urmi...here u said😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Lovely update... I hope abhay stop being cold 2 hr...
Cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

nice update!!! plz add me in ur pm list😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shria

chalo atlast i read😆 pheww... it was a big one😛
first of all selina and abheer just cracked me up🤣🤣 ye idea kaha se aaya??😉
nw coming to abhiya😳 uff they were so wonderful to read
uff now waiting to know what will u do now😆
continu soon😳


thnx 😳 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

hmm lovely update n who is the lady ? n u khud toh sunti nahin ho saath ein Simi ko bhi lapet liya 😆 listen 2 ur bro he knows what is good for u n Pia abhi tak kitna attentively class mein thi Abhay ke naam aate hi class bunk 😆


aree i can't rest until i know what's cooking 😆 yupz abhay pia ko bigad raha hai 😛 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: bellaaa

nice update meera...but who is that lady??? why someone keeping eye on abhay and all...poor piya cant even say anything to abhay...cont soon


thnx 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70


Hallo!!look who's here 😃
After so much of waiting am back 😛
Oye now don't frown...i thot u'd be happy 😆
hehe...

I know what you'r looking for...you have your abhiya here 😃 and burning one i tell you!


For PMs: Press like on the first page of my first post too!!!!and make sure your name is added there.


LOL here is the update...

26 :. Hide and seek!!!

She sat surrounded by deep thoughts...The sun rays peeping in through the red curtains that
were acting as a barrier for them.But seemed like this ain't effecting her- she was lost in her own world, when a jerk on her shoulder brought her back to reality.Yet the silence in the room remained unmoved until the other it became impossible for the other one to ask " What happened "

" Nothing. "

It was rare scene that you can see...she's never quiet,well be with for a good time of two hours and you will understand.But this was something absurd!
Well, it isn't like the other one didn't understood what happened ...still she pretended to be not knowing...it was best for now.But then a hurrying abhid shouted from stairs-

" Simi m leaving for office ...and btw where's meera? "

Simi glanced at the quiet girl who was still sitting in front of her but with her thoughts ... far away -
"She's here only."

But abhid was in too hurry to notice.And the mansion remained stood in its unusual calmness.


--
Abhid's office-

"Why the hell you are behind my sister!!!" abhid said while banging the table infront of the lady.

" Well,am least interested in it you know " she replied coolly shrugging her shoulders.

"Oh,really?? then for what reason is simi getting those visions as if you are after meera?" abhid asked scornfully.

" A illusion, you can say. " she continued. " I created an illusion in the prety head of hers so that she doesn't get a clue about your father being in India."

Abhid smiled brightly " Good job , i must say...Aarna.I think now my curious sisters will get a rest. " And she smiled back.

"but i am afraid our assumption is wrong.It wasn't Chand Raichand in goa."

"Who else?" abhid asked frowning.

"According to my sources,it was his son...uh, his name was...A...A..." she replied while trying to recall.

" Abhay. " Abhid scowled.

"yeah, abhay. " she said confirming.

"Aarna, i want you to give me every detail of him. Where ever he goes,talks with, his friends, and yeah , especially his every weak point." he said darkly.

"And his parents? "

"They are of no use..." he paused then continued "well...for now at least . "

"Alright... yes, & am leaving for London in an hour."

"London?" this made abhid confused.

"Yes, he is in London...and you'd be glad to know he isn't like any filthy vampires out there, he just killed that old stinky vampire who had his terror in every orphan's mind.And you wanna know for who? " She said laughing wickedly.

"A pretty little girl who is alone in this whole,bechari-dukhiyari. Right?" he winked as Aarna nodded and he continued " Dear, lil raichand has old habit of faking to be superman " he smirked.

"Gotta leave now Abhid."

" Have a safe and successful journey " he wished her and she turned to exit.

"Well...Lil Raichand...Hope we don't meet again!!!!I bet...its the best for you." Abhid said to himself.


----
Selina's home
" Meeru, kya?" seli asked for the sixth time.

" For.The.Last.Time.bhabz! she was quiet for whole 2 hours " And seli started laughing .

"what's happening?" meera asked casually , entering the room with a tired abhid behind.

"nothing." both girls sealed their lips in a jiffy as abhid hugged seli.

"AWWW what a jodi!" the gals teased them while abhid hit simi in head playfully.

"Chup!and now leave us alone."

---

London

Prom Night

"Are you alright?" Ron asked pia.

"Hmm..." Pia reluctantly replied as he swayed her around.

"Ron,everyone is looking at us like we did a crime." She finally spoke but ron ignored it.Even he knew the reason, everyone in the university knew that Alisia and Ron are together and a few faces like misha were expecting to see Abhay and Pia together at the prom.But vice versa happened. Abhay and Als are no where to be seen and here a very shy Pia is dancing with a less jovial than usual Ron. When Abhay asked pia to come with Ron she was angry and sad as she didn't expect him to ask this.
But atlast when Ron himself came and asked pia she couldn't say no as he was a very good friend of hers.Yet she was afraid what will Als feel about it but it seemed like she wants its too...so without much thought Pia had to agree.
Still,he eyes was looking for Abhay,hovering all over the place in search of him...to get a glance of him,a lump rising in her throat and her baby brown orbs trying to hide the overwhelming tears.But he wasn't there...
Pia asked Ron for a drink and slowly started moving away from dance floor to get a breath from this busy place,she didn't realize when she came out of the hall to the garden area from the back door - shivering and sat on the bench sighing, closing her tired eyelids she rested on the bench when she felt a tear drop from her eyes but didn't open it.
Unexpectedly, a coat coiled around her which made her eyes open.And she say the man whom she least expected. "Abhay..." She whispered more to herself.
He silently sat beside her... "Shouldn't you be in?"

She rested her head on the bench " I don't feel like. "

He again asked. " Not having fun in dancing?"

"Not really... i guess."

But to her surprise just then held out his hand and asked in a word whispering only for her "Dance?" And she slipped hers in his hand and they stood for the dance,alone in the cold night under the shine of the moon...in the soft music coming from the dance hall.

She kept looking at him,her eyes not leaving his for even a moment and gently she rested her head on his broad chest and he smelled the beautiful fragrance of her hair as her played with her hair with his nose engulfing her petty waist more closely almost hugging her.


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London
2:49 am
Woods

"So you found out who was keeping a eye on us?" asked a quiet tensed Ron who was leaning on a tree.
"yes,he was someone from India,luckily we killed him." answered Als.
"before he could tell anything!" abhay glared at Als.
"Sowie"
Abhay sighed "From this photo of mom dad and me, I guess he had something to do with mom and dad.I''ve told dad to be careful.But...he was pretty tensed when i told him that this guy was from India. "
"Any wild guess ..why so?" als asked abhay raising her brows.

"Nope!"

"anyways lets get going...am tired from the prom thing" Ron announced.

"Nah!you went alone!so are gonna pay for it" Als smirked.

"Nothing new...always i have to the paying" Ron cried . "Abhay...good you are alone!nahi toh these girls make you a poor lamb" To this Abhay smiled and decided to leave the love birds alone for good...but this doesn't means that he didn't sense a lady who was here five minutes before.
On the way to his house he passed by Girls Hostel and saw Pia sitting on a bench in the meadow behind the hostel.
"Pretty connection with these benches huh!?" Pia held her head up only to see Abhay.
'what?" she asked chuckling.
"Whenever i saw you ..you are mostly sitting in a garden on a bench in deep thoughts..."
"A coincidence maybe." She smiled as he sat beside her.

"But what are you doing here at this time?"

'Was just passing by,when i saw you...what r u doing here btw"

"headache...i guess i took alcoholic punch rather than non alcoholic. anyways, tumhara ghar pass mein hai?" pia slowly asked.

"Yeah,just beside boyz hostel...used to be princi's house but then i bought it,you know know the college authorities gave him the one beside mine." she replied.
'princi's house??and you bought it??'' she asked surprised.
"yeah...so?never so any princi's home?"

"No.." she said embarrassed.
"well,even they r humans n live normally in a warm home...wanna see?" he chuckled .
"mm...hmm" she grinned and he took her with him...

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So?How was it?crap...right?
Isliye you guys are so lazy to comment!last chappy was in page 6 n now this ones in page 10!
just diff of 4 pages?
I want atleast 7-8 pg difference!Between chapters...and plz no spamming for that!
I kindly want comments not spamming...
So esp silent readers...comment n press like!
m going hard headed you know!

😃 😆


Edited by ilove99 - 12 years ago

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