FF: Arhi: The way IPK should've been[Ch9/Sc3 pg99]

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soniachammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#501

Hey itnis not fair u stopped at a crucial point
But jave to say awesome

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Annie12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#502

Babe that was sadistic.. The whole day is going to be full of distraction ...spent waiting for your next update.

This one was beautifully written... Very precisely described emotions... Well done.

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Newbiesoapfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#503

Fast update dear! So no one blames Khushi for the fiasco? That's nice to know! They as usual want Arnav to take the decision?

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shagun05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#504

the chapters are just superb... thanks

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Jahnvi Mehra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#505

hey frnd...came across ur ff recently and cant stop myself from reading it in one go...just loved it...the way you described it all...its just amazingly written...i cant help but think about it all the time...that what you are going to update in next part...you are unpredictable...that is what i appreciate a lot...plzz update soonish :)

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Frigate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#506

Your story sounds a lot more interesting than the stuff the CVs have been showing lately... Now that LM is back, let's hope for the best!

Liked your plot and writing style.👍🏼

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Tinu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#507

ohh superbb
loved the way u have taken the story in a more mature way

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#508

To all my readers, thank you so much for your comments (and for the shocked reactions at the cliffhanger 😆)

Next update will be tonight

cheers!

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adddhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#509

Good updates! Its a bit surprising that Khushi herself returns the shagun ka saman. Shouldn't she at least be accompanied by the elders from Guptas? Obviously as Khushi khud apne sare kaam kar sakti hai but still...maybe surely some more interesting has to come.