FF: Arhi: The way IPK should've been[Ch9/Sc3 pg99]

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#491

If this actually happened on the show and it ended just as Khushi walked into his room I would have freaked out! Now reading it and it ended right when she walked into his room...I started shouting at my laptop!! I hate cliffhangers! Who invented the cliffhanger! It's stupid! I hope you update soon 😒

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Amy

@mz.brar

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#492

we'll its nice to know i was missed!🤗just to let you know; i write my reactions as i read...so sometimes they might not make sense.😆

Chapter 8 Scene 1:
Didn't the papers say that the property was at LN(yup back in chapter7 scene1)??? shouldn't that be a clue to Arnav that they papers his Dadis wants him to sign have something to do with khushi [WHO SHE HATES!!!]-that alone should send up red flags and warning bells in his brain!

Chapter 8 Scene 2:

Uggg Anjali is so eager to get khushi and her things out of the house; cuz that makes way for her creep to come back.🤢🤢🤢🤢

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-sanika-

@-sanika-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#493

I think this has been your best work so far!
No complaints :D
Perfect!
This is It
Blockbuster !

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#494

i love nani she still treats khushi the same and i like how she was like but khushi u just came like saying dont go

it must be really hard for khushi to give all the shagun stuff back

and arnav going frantic about losing the ring i loved as it does show his true emotions, he just lets his anger and dadis words get to him

im glad the lawyer pointed out that random paper they put into the file and he kept it out

shyaam is a dog generally and dadi is ten times worse

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#495

oh wow nice...he is going crazy just because he lost the ring...for god sake arnav just swallow the damn pride and apologise to khushi...god dammit...wow waiting eagerly for their encounter...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...

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VasantiLad

@VasantiLad

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#496

CHAPTER 8 SCENE 1

Loved it but I have a complaint - its just too short😭 I love your portrayal of Buaji- I love her character on screen & you have done total justice to her as well- well done👏 AS on screen we await those Arshi moments when they share the screen & so I wanted you to bring them together but alas it did not happen😭

CHAPTER 8 SCENE 2

Arhhh - no -no - you stopped that at a crucial part just like they do on the show- please update soon.

Edited by VasantiLad - 12 years ago

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Frances

@Punkin22

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Loved this chapter. All of Khushi's pain is there to see. Her heart has been broken and she seems older in a matter of days. You could at least not stop the story at such an important place!!!!! Look forward to your update soon.