FF: Arhi: The way IPK should've been[Ch9/Sc3 pg99] - Page 44

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asr13

hmm its getting damn interesting now ...love Khushi's spirit ...youve captured the emotions and reiterated them beautifully ...could actually visualize Khushi and Buaji wala scene ...and no, I was not stalking your story ...or was I ;)


thank you thank you.. being stalkerish is the true sign of being a FAN so I'm actually thrilled 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kbtr

OK, so Shyam is back in the picture. Is Anjali going to sprout some brains? Does Dadi know that Arnav is her blood relative and Shyam is a stranger? I'm not sure why she would believe Shyam over Arnav (same as reel life.) Having lived a full life, surely she can't be so gullible? (Just musing about reel life, too!) Now, I'm impatient for Kushi and Buaji to go to RM. I hope when they go to RM, she throws (gently, of course!) the shagun and the ring at his face!! (Ooo! I'm mean! But I'm sooo mad at him.) I hope she can remain strong when she comes face-to-face with him. OK won't mention anything about the length of the scene. You know my feelings about that!!

Thanks for the update, Anxiously awaiting the next scene.😃


So many questions kbtr 😆

ans1. Yes she will. But not right away. abhi abhi to uska hubby wapis aya hai, let her have some quality time (in the background obviously). 😉
ans2. Dadi likes anyone who sucks up to her.. Arnav doesn't give any bhaav to Dadi but damadji more than makes up for it. But ya in the due course of time unko bhi akal aa jayegi
ans3. Gullible no. Selfish yes. Anjali gets her selfish genes from Dadi
ans4. ring action... ruko balike.. abhi action sequence ko time hai! 😆

and you can mention about the length of the scene as much as you like dear. I did say, comments and critiques are equally welcome. FYI, I write on MS word georgia font size 10 for minimum of 2 and a half pages for each scene. you tell me how long you'd prefer and I'll see if I can do the needful 😛

Fans ki baat sunna writer's ka dharm hai! 😉

cheers!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smitzy


thank you thank you.. being stalkerish is the true sign of being a FAN so I'm actually thrilled 😃

Love being in your universe of IPKKND smitzy, you've created it so damn well ! ...FANwa toh baneka padii 👏👏👏
And i second you being the CV of the reel life IPKKND, you are bloody good at it !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update..I loved the way u have described khushi's turmoil and how she deals with her grief,never showing it to her family lest they become sad!!

Beautifully written... Well done as always.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smitzy


Sadist Sanika ki jai ho 😆

aayega angst, thoda build up to hone do dear hahaha



hehe ...with a backdrop song also...like Tanhaayee :D
Toh majaa aa jaye ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asr13

Love being in your universe of IPKKND smitzy, you've created it so damn well ! ...FANwa toh baneka padii 👏👏👏
And i second you being the CV of the reel life IPKKND, you are bloody good at it !!!!


😳

BADA WALA HUG to you!!! 😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -sanika-


hehe ...with a backdrop song also...like Tanhaayee :D
Toh majaa aa jaye ;)


Haye re nandkishore!! aaj kal ke demands to dekho 😛

abhi inna sad ho jayega to redemption mein kya karega ASR.. you'll want him to drown in his own tears then? oh wait, that is what we all want too

😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smitzy


Haye re nandkishore!! aaj kal ke demands to dekho 😛

abhi inna sad ho jayega to redemption mein kya karega ASR.. you'll want him to drown in his own tears then? oh wait, that is what we all want too

😆



No no...I am ASR phankha
I will save him :P
I will not let him drown
See I have plan

If Khushi se shaadi nahi hui, no matter, I will marry him instead :D

I will tackle all the weirdos in his mansion and protect him !

Dadi, Di, Shyaam , everyone!

I will deal with them in a very violent way

Shyaam ki toh Lash bhi nahi milegi kisiko
Hydrofluric acid main dissolve kardoongi 😈

And will flush it down the toilet.

Di ko mental hospital and Dadi ko Ashram I will personally go and will drop and come.

Di will be kept in isolation and given electric shocks everytime she says "Shyaamji" to treat her brain

And Dadi ko i will find a kutiya on an isolated island, surrounded by hungry alligators...

Edited by -sanika- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smitzy


So many questions kbtr 😆

ans1. Yes she will. But not right away. abhi abhi to uska hubby wapis aya hai, let her have some quality time (in the background obviously). 😉
ans2. Dadi likes anyone who sucks up to her.. Arnav doesn't give any bhaav to Dadi but damadji more than makes up for it. But ya in the due course of time unko bhi akal aa jayegi
ans3. Gullible no. Selfish yes. Anjali gets her selfish genes from Dadi
ans4. ring action... ruko balike.. abhi action sequence ko time hai! 😆

and you can mention about the length of the scene as much as you like dear. I did say, comments and critiques are equally welcome. FYI, I write on MS word georgia font size 10 for minimum of 2 and a half pages for each scene. you tell me how long you'd prefer and I'll see if I can do the needful 😛

Fans ki baat sunna writer's ka dharm hai! 😉

cheers!

Kash CVs bhi aisa hi sochath rai! (Excuse if not correct, help from Google as I do not speak or understand Hindi [learning now due to IPKKND+Forum.]) OK now I'm really awaiting the confrontation scene between ArShi! Are you seriously asking me how long a scene should be? I'll tell you not to stop until the end! Haha!😆 But seriously, yaar, I don't want to hold you back by my demands (I've been told I'm very demanding!!) so please write as much as the scene requires. And only you know that. I'm just greedy to want it all now! But know this, I always wait for your scenes.😃
Thanks.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: segad

Please please please let him find out about the deeds of the snake's wife. the show seems to have forgotten that actions have reactions. Please make Mr and Mrs Snake pay like hell at least here.


We can at least feel a bit better.

How come his harvard brain didn't kick in that NK did not mention that dadi was in and not with anjali/


I was waiting to see if anyone would notice that.. sharp eyes segad 😊

every thing evil will always find itself alone on the judgement day... you'll have to be a little patient because that part is yet to happen.. for now, let's get this headache of Arshi been separated over and done with, what say? 😊

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