FF: Arhi: The way IPK should've been[Ch9/Sc3 pg99]

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#291

oh thank god arnav found out the truth about the papres...hopefully now he will investigate everything about it...so khushi is back to her dabba services...shyma is starting to creep me out...awsuuum update dear n thnx 4da pm...👏

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

Wow...Fantastic update...Khushi is trying to solve problems in her own way...Thanks for the PM

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Annie12

@Annie12

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#293

Superb with no abla Naari khushi portrayal... In fact even arnav has a little more brains

Last part wasn't too scary but plz limit shyamali scenes :) if ur writers mind allows it ... Ur story as always - brilliant

Edited by Annie12 - 12 years ago

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Frances

@Punkin22

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

So, Arnav has his first clue that something is fishy with Dadi, lets hope that ASR's Harvard brain will begin working and connect the dots. I would love to see Arnav one step ahead of Dadi. Is the lone man in a dark room with pictures of people from GH and RM scary?? After Dadi and her forbidding and bloodcurdlings personality, no way!!!

Thank you for update and pm dear.

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tigertiger

@tigertiger

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#295

I absolutely love this story!!! Read it all in one go and it is really interesting and brilliantly written. Looking forward to more updates soon! :)

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#296

lmfao khushi has some quick thinking lol making excuses as to why she is at GH and not RM

anyways im guessing the freak at the end is shyaam with his sickly sweet voice, i see Dadi is still a number one b**** she snuck them papers there so carefully luckily arnav got his lawyer to look at them rather than himself

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asr13

@asr13

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Exciting !! What s he Snakewa upto now ? You've captured the characters so well ... Khushi being typically Khushi, trying to keep her head above the water and help everyone sail trough as well ... Loved the return of KKGSR Rabba service ...

Love your ASR more then the serial I have to say ...yahan uska shatir dimag abhi bhi uske paas hai aur kaam bhi karat hai ...serial mein toh shayad kidnap hua pada hai lol

Lovin it !!!

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#298

Thank-you, thank-you, thank-you! A million times! Thank God, you didn't make Kushi go begging to Arnav for the $! He needs to see that she can survive financially without him. (Although $6 lakh is not much, it's at least a start that she did not have to go to Arnav. But I'm hoping he finds out that she's started working again, so he realizes that she's in need of $ and also that she can be independent. Maybe the office workers will start raving about their food again, and he'll overhear?) The bit about Kushi's house seems to be a twist in the story? I didn't know about that. How did Dadi/Shyam know about that? Does Kushi know about that? I hope Arnav becomes suspicious of Dadi now, or at least doesn't trust her.

tfs😃 Update quickly!!😃