Taarey SS 'Our First Dates?' Part 8 up! - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
☺️ ossom ossom ossom!!! cant wait 4 ball room dance!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Recap:
Rey: *chuckles and stretches his hand out to her* shall we?
Taani: *giggles and puts her hand in his* we shall!
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Heeey guys!!!!!!!!!!
Yay! I updated! I love u guys a looot! thanks for ur paitences!


PART 5


Rey: *puts his hands on her waist*


Taani: *wraps her arms around his neck and places her head on his shoulder*


Rey: Taani, u look beautiful in this dress


Taani: *starts giggling* Rey, u look handsome in ur tux


Rey: *chuckles and smiles* well, thanks my lady


Taani: hm, I have got to say...u r doing an excellent with our first date, but I feel bad


Rey: y princess?


Taani: *giggles and looks* princess?


Rey: well, if I m ur prince charming, then it would make sense if ur my princess *winks at her*


Taani: *kisses his cheek*


Rey: *smiles* now, tell me y r u feeling bad?


Taani: ur doing so much for our first date, and I haven't even planned a single thing *looks down*


Rey: *makes her look up by placing one finger under her chin* Taani, ur presence is what makes EVERYTHING special for me *smiles and places a kiss on her forehead*


Taani: *smiles*


They continue dancing and attempting to keep up a conversation


An hour later...


Rey: u ready for our last destination?


Taani: *looks up and nods her head indicating yes*


Rey: great! u see that awkward looking pink door upstairs? *points towards the door*


Taani: *nods her head*


Rey: go inside that door, I placed a black dress for u there...change into that dress and meet me in the car


Taani: okay *smiles and goes to change*


After a couple of mins...


Taani is ready and goes to join Rey in the car, then after half an hour the arrive at a beach...


Taani: *gets out of the car and starts running towards the sea* Omg! Yay! I love the beach!


Rey: *smiles and starts walking towards her*


Taani has her back towards him, she is looking at the beautiful sea shining under the moonlight


Rey: *goes and wraps his arms around her waist*


Taani: *turns her head slightly and looks at him* thanks Rey, u made this day EXTREMELY special for me *smiles*


Rey: for us *smiles and starts kissing her neck*


Just then, Rey's cell phone starts ringing


Taani: Rey? *she turns around*


Rey: *still kissing her neck* hmm?


Taani: ur phone is ringing


Rey: *starts kissing her jaw* let...it...ri...ng


Taani: *slightly pushes him away* Rey...,pick it up na? It might be important


Rey: no! And y is this stupid thing ringing??? I thought I had turned it off!


Taani: Rey, just pick it up


Rey: Taaani


Taani: Reeey


Rey: I won't pick it up...but y don't u answer it?


Taani: arey! Main kaise appke call answer karun?


Rey: arey! Tumhe to poora haq hai! Ur my girlfriend!


Phone stops ringing


Taani: *surprised* kya?


Rey: *realizes what he said and smiles, then he takes hold of Taani's hands* Taani, I m srry...I completely forgot to ask you if u wanted to be my girlfriend...it's just I already consider u to be my girlfriend, because your the only one I go to for help, comfort, advice, and most importantly some attention...Ms.Taani Shikawant...will u be my girlfriend?


Taani: *has tears in her eyes and gives a cute smile* yes Rey...*blushes and looks down*


Rey: *pulls her face up by placing a finger under her chin*


Taarey look into each other's eyes and get lost


Rey: *starts moving his face closer to Taani's*


Rey's cell phone starts ringing again


Rey: ufff! Yeh stupid cell phone ko ab hi bajna tha?


Taani: *starts giggling*


Rey: *takes his phone out of his pocket and hands it to Taani* tum baat karo!


Taani: *takes the phone and looks at the caller ID* Rey, it's Sharon bha...um Sharon is calling


Rey: Sharon bhabi is calling? Then don't answer!


Taani: *confused* r u in a fight with her? And y r u calling her bhabi?


Phone stops ringing


Rey: no, we rnt in a fight...and I m calling her bhabi because she is ur hone wali bhabi so-


Taani: omg! Bhai proposed?


Rey: nahi...,par eventually he will...and then Sharon bhabi will become ur bhabi...and mine...


Taani: *confused* wat?


Rey: ufff...um ur my girlfriend and Swayam's younger sister...l and Swayam is like my older brother...so Sharon will become my bhabi also


Taani: Rey...if Bhai is like ur older brother than that kind of makes me like ur sister...


Rey: ummm...then Swayam is like my brother in law! That's better right?


Taani: *blushes and looks down*


Rey: *places a finger under her chin and makes her look up, then he kisses her*


Taani: *kisses back*


Rey: *wraps his arms around her waist and deepens the kiss*


Taani: *about to wrap her arms around his neck, but Rey's phone starts ringing, so she pulls away and answers the call* *breathing heavy* hell...ll...llo?


Swayam: Taani! U okay?


Taani: *breathing normally again* yes bhai I m fine, so um is there a reason as to y u decided to call right now?


Swayam: wat time r u planning on coming back home? And how come u haven't been answering my calls but answer when I call from Sharon's phone?


Taani: bhai, woh um my phone is off


Swayam: pata hai, that's y I tried calling Rey...I thought his was off to, but apparently not when the call is coming from Sharon's phone...


Taani: I guess...um bhai we r on our way home right now...


Rey: *looks at her confused*


Taani: *glares at him*


Rey: *more confused*


Swayam: good, come soon...bye


Taani: bye *cuts the call and gives the phone back to Rey, then she starts walking towards the car*


Rey: *follows her, then pulls her hand and jerks her body towards his*


Taani: let go of me!


Rey: *still confused* kya hua Taani?


Taani: nothing...just leave me!


Rey: *turns her around to make her face him*


Taani: *turns her head away*


Rey: Taani...batao na...meri princess itni naraz kyun hain?


Taani: *looks at him* remember...today u promised me that u will spend our time only with me? And that u won't ignore me for one of ur friends?


Rey: *rubbing her arms* of course I remember jaan...lekin tell me y r u mad now?


Taani: when ur phone is off, anyone who tries to call u can't reach u right?


Rey: *nods his head indicating yes*


Taani: then how come Sharon's calls can be reached even if ur phone is off!?!


Rey: Taani, it may be that my phone isn't off...


Taani: hmmm, then y don't we test it? I'll try calling u right now!


Rey: okay...


Taani: *turns her phone on and calls Rey*


Rey's cell phone doesn't ring, she tries calling two more times...but still no rings


Rey: Taani-


Taani: *humorlessly chuckles* so I m the first person u will go to if u need anything...but Sharon is the person who can come to u whenever, not me...


Rey: Taani-


Taani: Rey just take me home


Rey: Taani...we can't end our date like this! Plz Taani...i m sorry...I swear, I didn't even know that my phone was set up like this


Taani: Rey...plz don't lie to me...


Rey: I m not lying damn it!


Taani: Rey, plz take me home...


Rey: fine! *grabs Taani's hand and drags her towards the car*


Inside the car...


Rey is frustrated and is driving EXTREMELY fast


Rey: *calls Swayam* where is Sharon?


Swayam: madam is at my apartment right now, y? Wanna talk to her?


Rey: no! Just make sure that she remains there until Taani and I get there


Swayam: um, I don't think I can tolerate her that long, she-


Rey: just do as I say! *cuts the call*


Within 15 minutes, Taarey reach Taayam's apartment


Rey bangs on the door, and Swayam opens the door


Swayam: *blocking the way inside* u r late! Where were u guys!?! It's-


Rey: *shoves Swayam aside and enters, he goes towards Sharon and glares at her*


Swayam: *confused, looks towards sharey* wats going on? *looks at Taani* Taani? Will you te- *notices her teary eyes* Taani...kya hua?


Rey: Sharon!!! Wat is wrong with u!?!


Sharon: *confused, and slightly scared* wa...a..at did i do now?


Rey: u ruined Taani and my date! AGAIN!!!


Taani: *comes inside and slams the door behind her* Rey! Y r u blaming Sharon!?! It's not like she set ur phone that way!


Rey: She DID!!!


Swayam: someone tell me wats going on?


Sharon: ummm...I think they found out that I kind of...um I tampered with Rey's cell phone


Swayam: *a bit alert* wat do u mean?
Part 5 complete!
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Posted: 13 years ago
unres!

haha too funny! whts up with this hacking tampering business?! 😆
Nevertheless it was an awesome update can't wait for more! 😃
Edited by ABCDesiGirl93 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow Part 4 was damn good.. Taani dressed like an angel and naughty Rey kissed her ☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
jiya🤗 you made my day with this update😳 it was totally TaaReylicious.☺️,,.angry taani😎 awesum update.,🤗 keep rocking 🤗 update soon🤗 cant wait🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow jiya it was awesome, I love the way u write, it has everything fun, romance and drama lol. Rey is such a romantic guy he plan everything so perfectly. I love everything but the ending is sad. Plz continue soon dying to know what Rey do to Sharon next and why she hack his phone
Edited by Natasha. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
its so good
thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey...wow!!!
really wanna knw how swayam reacts to sharons confession...
thanks for the pm...
do update soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome as always
thanks for the PM.
can't wait for the next part.
Pls. update fast.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowww !! Jiya I loved it ... The romance and the drama :D it was amazing m curiously waiting fr the next part now . Beg u to pm me :D

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