OS [ARHI] : I Give Up - Page 2

Originally posted by: OnlyHope

I'm.in.tears.

Until the end I was like Jotty don't kill her. Khushi please don't die. My heart was literally skipping its beats as gravity pulled her towards death and bam! Ahhh... :(Sucha sad piece of writing..but VERY nice written!! *Now I gotta go read something else to cheer up* Sighhh..

HAHA. I was trying to make it as descriptive as possible and i'm glad it worked. Thank youu for readingg. <3 I'm happy you liked my writing. 😃

Originally posted by: -Ishana-

Aww :(
Poor Khushi raped and preggers cuz of that Monster !
Atleast she died alongside her true love

Yeah, that's sad. Well, are you sure about that? 🤣 What if Arnav is alive? 😲 😆

Originally posted by: --Divzfan--

reserved! your first OS me going to read! dont you dare throw something at me! 😳..🤣

-Edited-

Suicide..😵..it was very good my Cookie! 🤗🤗..Me impressed! 😎..thanks goes to my bacchi who did atyachaar to you to write! 🤣..write more..will read! pakka! <3

I'm not throwing anything at you. hmph. YOU IS IMPRESSED? 😲 ME IS HAPPY. <3 🤣

Originally posted by: -Stutz-

Jottt!!! Thank you SO much!
I loved it!! Something i always wanted to read! *huggg*
shyams such a -_-
(nvm..u moderate this forum right! Hahahaha)
I really really love you for this!!!

P.s i got tears! Haha told u na? Its not that difficult. And awww u heard sad songs to write this...ur such a rabbit :D

you're welcome. hmph. Aww, i'm glad you liked it so much and yes, mind your language. 😳 🤣
Yeahh, i'm serious. 7 SAD SONGS. 🤣

Originally posted by: -Ridzzi-

omg! res

unres..

Jottieee 😃
Amazing OS, It was a really emotional one! I really love the way u write hun! Keep it up! Well done! Looking forward to more from u. So yeah, ending was perfect. Really really loved reading it. Enjoyed it to the full! :$

Thanks for the PM ;)
-Ridz

RIDZZI. 😃 Aww, i'm glad you loved it. I thought the ending would've pissed you off cuz i kinda left you all hanging. 😲 But i actually intended for you all to choose your own endings. Arnav alive or dead. 😆

Originally posted by: -Mayu-

Jottie🤗Thanks for the Pm first!😳

Now to the OS. Why the heck did you have to get that son of a B**** married to Khushi? Wasn't she happy with Arnav? And that B****** Raped her countless timesAnd why did you have to make her give up her life and commit suicide?

Okay enough of my ranting. The OS was Fab! Just Fab! 👏👏

Beautiful explanation and wonderful writing! The emotions, Khushi's remembrance and the fight she gave up and eventually her death. That was too emotional. I was like what has Jot done, but I guess Khushi would be happy in heaven and will eventually meet Arnav. I guess you can pen down a Epilogue for me wherein Arnav commits suicide after her and they meet in heaven. Wierd thougt😉but I need to know if Arnav committed suicide or not

Keep writing wonderful stuff! You are a rockstar⭐️

Love,

Mayu

You is welcome. 😃 Cuz she was depressed and Shyam is a clever man who got what he wanted. *shakes head sadly*

HAHA. SEE. You're the only one that realizes i left you guys hanging at the end. 😆 Whether Arnav died or not is unknown and i guess i can write you an OS on this OS but on Arnav's POV. 😆 😃

Thank you.

WOW this was well -written <3 and heartbreaking...🥺

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..

Wah! Kya OS likha hai.. 7 songs to write thi 🤣 EPIC I must say. It as touchy.. yes, sad definitely.. nothing much to say but loved the ending!

Ps: I will soon get to sweet dream's comment as well <3

SJ- you rock! How do you make her so such things 🤣

Haha, aww, i'm glad you liked it. <3

Originally posted by: Sunshine Girl

WOW this was well -written <3 and heartbreaking...🥺

Thank you. <3 I know. rofl