New SS: Its Hard To Let You Go Part 5, Page 65 UPD

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Ilovemsk

@Ilovemsk

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#311

this was so cute! x update soon x

thx ofr da pm

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#312

Nahiii!

U made me cry again!!!

U evil evil woman!!!!

I hate youuu

U even made my Ashar cry

Whyyy???? Why do you have to write such intense emotional parts?

I want a humorous one next

Thats it!

My order...n m not talking abt ASR jr update...I want another OS where I shld be crying coz of laughing uncontrollably...u get that sista?

I loved the update...I dont want to go into the details as I know I'll burst out crying

Love you!

P.S: I dun know when I'll come online again...sorry!!!

Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 13 years ago

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Amanda Lim

@Amanda.Lim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#313

Ashar is a really tough guy

waiting for the next update..

Thanks for the PM!!!!XD

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#314

Lovely update and u know u made me cry with this one... While reading it all the time I was just imagining my daughter in Asmara's place and hence the water works... Thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

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priya

@silvia1999

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#315

oh its emotional,,,asmara and ashar's childhood memories are beautiful⭐️👏

i can't imagine arnav and ashar's state during bidaai😭😭

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: Aspirex

WOW! I made one of the longest comment!! Yayyy u made me sooo happy!😆
N ur welcum dear though i m the one who wants t say Thank u sooo many times😃
Yeah Ahsan is way tooolikable😊😊
N u read my comment thrice! wooohooo *faints*😛
N i do not have a single doubt about the "liking" of the next update😛
Im waiting waiting waiting for it😃😊

Awww you're sooo sweet!! 😳 Next part is updated now! Hope you'll enjoy that one too *fingers crossed* 😃

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum
Nahiii!

U made me cry again!!!

U evil evil woman!!!!

I hate youuu

U even made my Ashar cry

Whyyy???? Why do you have to write such intense emotional parts?

I want a humorous one next

Thats it!

My order...n m not talking abt ASR jr update...I want another OS where I shld be crying coz of laughing uncontrollably...u get that sista?

I loved the update...I dont want to go into the details as I know I'll burst out crying

Love you!

P.S: I dun know when I'll come online again...sorry!!!

Hahahaha! You're sooo funny Ashum!! 😆 You cried again during this update?? But you must've cried only a little during the end, right?? The rest of the update was very cute and light 😉

A funny OS?? Hmmm... Will think about it! Aj kal me emotional stuff ki side per aye hue hun tou thora time lagay ga 🤣

Ohhh chalo come online next whenever you get time! It felt so great seeing you here back again!! 🤗 🤗

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Natasha

@tash10

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#318

OMG I missed it 😭 Reserved, will edit by tomorrow!!!

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Fari, it was such an emotional update!!! I am in tears!! 😭

How can you write such scenes so beautifully and in such a realistic way that I feel that I am actually watching them in front of me? You have magic in your hands 🤗

My eyes welled up so much that I don't know what to write!! The reunion moment of the four sitting together and watching childhood memories replaying was so heart-touching!!! I could imagine the expressions on their face, their thoughts, their nostalgia...everything was so just perfect in its place!!!

And Ashar pulling Laxmi's tail and NK calling him naughty naughty babua made my tears fade away for a moment 🤣 But then, you made them come again throughout the uodate 😭 The Tata Daddy was like a blow...it had so much power and such a deep connect to what would happen at the Bidaai!!!

What the: Baba Ranchordas Chanchar 🤣 I love 3 idiots 😃 Again, you beautifuuly mix some funny, teasing moments and interlace them with the emotional quotient!! That makes the beauty of this update!!!😳 And the end with Ashar breaking down and crying was heart-wrenching!!!😭

Next update is on the wedding, right? Aww, I am dreading everyone's plight, but so looking forward to it at the same time!!!😳

I love you Fari 🤗 You are an amazing writer and this SS is one of the most beautiful stories I have read

Edited by tash10 - 13 years ago

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: farheen75
Lovely update and u know u made me cry with this one... While reading it all the time I was just imagining my daughter in Asmara's place and hence the water works... Thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Awww thank you for reading and liking it 😳 Yes, I imagine myself while writing it and get all emotional! You no doubt being mother of 3 daughters Masha'Allah, got emotional! 😳

Edited by SmileyStar - 13 years ago

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#320

It's so so beautiful emotional...u have portrayed their emotions too well...
I had tears in my eyes esp at the video segment n at the end...
Absolutely loved it