ITS ALL CAUSE OF DESTINY part 8 pg 43 chk it - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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New concept ..
Update soon
and Pls pm me

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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Good to see u back 😊...
The concept is Superb 👏...
Do continue soon 👍🏼...
Thanks for the pm 😊...
N do update d3 fun , masti n romance 😳.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...nice concept...
Waiting to see how destiny will bring them together...
Pls update soon 20 likes toh ho gaya...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey aisha

Finally u r back with a new story...

Woww

Amazing concept...Seems interesting

rey and a dance academy, kria a waitress superb...really excited...

plz cont soon...
Its more than 20 likes
plz update part 1

me waiting
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Lovely concept Di...

Can't wait fr d first part...

Update ssoonnn...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i loved the name of ur story... ITS ALL COZ OF DESTINY... Destiny word itself reminds us of Arsha... So dat made me in love even more with the name... N i loved the concept... P.S. - madam... U've got 30+ likes now... Soo plzzz ab aap update karne ki kripa karengi... 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved d concept ..!
Update soon n pm me ..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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looking 4rward 4r it update asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow guys 30 likes i thought this story will never work yaar looks like it has okk umm don't know how 1st part will turn out but please mujhe jhote mat marna...

PART 1

Guy: WHERE THE HELL IS THE DANCER , THE KIDS ARE WAITING FOR HIM AND HE STILL HASNT COME..?😡

GUY 2: WAIT REY WOH AJAYEGA CHILL DUDE( YES THE GUY SCREAMING WAS REY DIFFERENT TO THE NORMAL 1)

REY : SHUT UP VICKY EK TOH MERA MOOD BOHOT KHARAB HAI UPAR SE WOH DANCER NAHI AYA AUR TU MUJHE CHILL HONE KO KEHRAHA HAI! SCREAMING HIS HEAD OFF

JUST THEN A GUY CAME ALL SMILING SMILING , BUT WHEN HE HEARED REY SHOUTING HIS SMILE JUST VANISHED , VICKY SAW HIM HE RAN UP TO HIM

VICKY : SWAYAM YAAR KUCH KAR WARNA YEH POORI ACADEMY KO APNE SAR PAR UTHA LEGA YEH DEKH BICHARE BACHE BHI DARGAYYE HAI

Swayam was scared to but he knew he can control rey he walked to him

Swayam : rey meri baat sun tu thoda khamosh hoja dekh bichare bache dar gayye

Rey : looked at swayam angrily then he saw the poor kids frightened he cooled down a bit

Rey : swayam kuch kar yaar these kids itne motivation ke saath ate hai aur woh dancer abhi tak nahi aya?

Swayam : we will have to look for somebody else ok

Rey : kisse?

Swayam : we will put a poster out saying we need a dancer ok ... lets see if we find someone..

Rey nodded his head , Vicky was praying all that time that rey anger cools down he had his eyes close lookin at the ceiling: please god rey ka gussa thanda karlo😆

Rey and swayam saw him doing that they chuckled, rey walked up to him and tapped his shoulder, Vicky got scared and jumped on swayam arms ( swayam was carrying him )

Rey was laughing : Vicky neeche utar jaa bhagwan ne teri sunli

Vicky: FINALLY !THANKYOU SWAYAM HE STARTED TO PULL SWAYAM CHEEKS, swayam got really frustrated and he left him poor Vicky fell on the floor..😆

Swayam : dude control your self waise guys ive booked us a table in the resturaunt next to us , apparently their food is really good toh aaj raat waha chalet hai what say ?

Ricky: cool

Swayam : theek hai mein neeche intizaar karta hoon tum log mere gari ke paas aajao

Swayam went down he was sitting in his car , then he thought to take car outside so its easier , their was a muddy pool near it ,swayam went over it and by mistake it splashed on a girl walking pass

Girl : WTH! DEKHAYI NAHI DETA TUMHEIN GET OUT THE CAR NOW! POINTING HER FINGER AT SWAYAM

Swayam: oh damn yeh mein ne kya kardiya yaarr 😭swayam came out the car praying to god that nothing happens

Girl : tum andhe ho kya yaha mein khari aur tum ne mujh par yeh keechar uradiya tumhari toh mein😡 she was just about to hit him when she heared another girl calling her

Girl : Sharon ruk yeh tu kya karaahi hai ( obviously guys it has to be her)

Sharon : neha mera haath chod iski toh mein

Swayam : sorry am really sorry Sharon i .. i ne..never meant to do it tum raastein mein agayi ismein meri galti nahi hai

Sharon : wateva aram se toh chalasakte the na gari , next time aankhein khol kar gari chala na get it

Swayam : ENOUGH! Agar itna hi bura lagra ha hai na toh yeh lo paise! laundry mein jakar dho lena samjhi and went off from there

Sharon HOW DARE YOU! She was gonna run behind him when neha stopped her

Neha: chod na Sharon , jane de baad mein dekhle na abhi humein jana hai kriya ke paas

Sharon : woh toh abhi kaam par hai na?

Neha: oh yeh , chal yeh tere kapre padal le baad mein jayenge Sharon gave an irritating look and went off

Rey and Vicky came and sat in the car , rey looked at swayam he wasnt looking right , he looked angry

Rey : swayam tu theek hai?

Swayam : haan chale! And he drove away to the restaurants

Thts it 4 now.. yes i will introduce kriya in next episode till then keep waiting..

Precap chalo de hi deti hoon:

Girl : can i tke your order

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Boy : ha hum order toh denge lekin pehle tumhein toh dekhle

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Girls: SLAP!

Want to know what happened just wait and watch

Please do tell me if you liked it or not please yaar

Give me my comments i love reading it and my likes plz

Aisha sully x

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome concept.waiting for 1st update.

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