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Amit

@Swaronvrushan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Demand completed...nw we want update

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Crazy4AshVik

@Crazy4AshVik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

I have literally fallen in love with this ff!!!😃

pls update soon and do pm me when u update and accept my buddy request!

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Ekta

@HaymurS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Awesum update dear.loved swayam n gunjan bonding.btw i dnt hv any prblm wid shashi.lol.
n about c.s for ff,ur wish bt i thnk 9t required much.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Hey Guys!

I am really surprised to see that within two days, 43 pages have been filled.

And all thanks to Rashi [-Rose-] and Amit [swaronamit].. 🤗

Thank you so much guys! 😳

And on your demand, I am back with another update! 😉

Hope you all like it! 😕

There were a few changes and additions I had to do to this update and therefore refrained from posting the Chapter! 🤢

But since Amit and Rashi have been telling me to update, I am going to fulfill their wishes / orders! 😆

Anyhow, I am back with an update! 😆

Thanks to :

The following 23 member(s) liked the above post:

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AbhiyaMaaneet, amruTa_SWaRon, beeny, Pihu.k11, idiot_box, dips098, rashmi24sya,

sadiyaswaron, gopi06, --Rose--, pratik54000, additive_monaya, lovely7010, spn-abhay, ABBY92, abhiya_pkyek, MoNayaHolicPrag,

Thank you for taking out time and liking my work.

I am appalled to see all of your comments and reactions towards my FF and I am very grateful to all of you! 😳

And as far as alterations in my story line are concerned, since I have typed like till the

Ninth Chapter of this FF, I can't make any cause it will be very difficult for me.

I have tried my best to do justice to all my characters and their roles.

I hope I succeed in it! 🤢

Without any further ado, here I am with the next Chapter! ⭐️

Here We Go :)

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

I hope it is up to the mark and reaches your expectations.

Next update will come mostly on page 96! :)

Spammers make your way!

Hopefully the ninth chapter will be on a second thread! :D

Let's see how soon it happens! =P

I hope you all enjoyed reading it and will also enjoy in future.

Thank you for liking my part and showering your love on me!! :)

And thanks to all those who took out time and commented.

I will try to reply to each comment soon!

Thank you once again !

For PMs add IntricateKnots. in your Buddy List!

Till then Take Care!

Ciao :*

_Nivriti

Edited by NocturnalBeing - 12 years ago

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Once again.. U nailed it.. Wow!!
Has any1 told u tht ur an outstandin writer??
I literally love dis FF of ur's!!
U know.. Whneva I read ur FF.. I always think.. Damn how can someone write so beautifully..
Lik its my hobby to read novels n various books n I wud surely say tht u too r capable of holdin d same interest as big big authors!!
Thrs lik always an eager in me to read ur FF.. I love d way u narrate it n how u continue wid it..
D timings.. They play a vry imp. role I guess... Ua too gud at it!
U really know when their wud b utmost attention of d reader n thn u turn it d way it shud b!!
Cumin bk to update.. I loved it!
So so swayam is sufferin thru blood cancer.. Honestly I guessd it long time bk bt thn thot kya pta..!
Swayam-Gunjan bond.. Commendable!!
D texts.. Which swayam forwarded to louisans n d replies frm them wer so damn touchin.. It brot tears in my eyes!!
D convo btween swayam n his dada.. Was brilliantly written..
It not only gav encouragment to swayam but also showed d immense love of his dada towards him!!

U know whts its still pinching me.. Tht swayam do not trust louisans esp. Kriyaansh!!
But I guess.. Thtz how its supposed to b!!
Whts next on store.. Waitin fr d nxt part :)
M proud to b ur reader.. U write proficiently..!
Loved d whole update..

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abhilasha_dream

@abhilasha_dream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

How do u do it man ? How do u just pen down every emotions so beautifully, every scene was perfect and one could visualize them picture perfectly... The updates were Superb !!

Just a question.. when would Louisans come to know about Swayam's disease ? Would they ever come to know about it and if yes, then how would they confront Swayam as he is will be in NY by then... Would Swayam trust his frnds enuf to tell them or will it by chance that they would come across the truth ??

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Awesome update
Soo finally the truth is out swayam is suffering from blood cancer
Swayam n his mom convo was really sweet n the best part when he kept his head in her lap(aww)
Then again gunjan n swayam phone chat.They r indeed bff(i think i write it in my almost all comments..:p) but i really liked how she support swayam give him confidence that he will be alright...:)
Then louisans message they all loved him too,well i really liked their messages...:D
Sweet little kanav n swayam scene n good to see that gunjan know swayam soo well
Arnav n swayam convo,arnav is really a good brother.He encourage swayam to be independent in his life
waiting for next part