ARSHI FF:It started with a kiss CHP 5 (11/09)

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

hey there. . . 😃
am here to give you my review on all 4 chapters at once,as told you in my pm,due to my slow net,i was not able to comment,but i have my comments ready. . .
plz do read them!
😛
here i go down. . . 😳

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Wow the two under the same roof?? And my my hw arrogant can he get! Hey! Don't bother me itseems! Urgh man ur gonna fall for her n j cant wait for the time nd amazing update sana auntys too sweet n sanjay doesn't lik akash is it?? He was too cold wid him and one whole week til u update this one?? Nooo but neways im sure since its gonna be tat l8 ul b bak wid a bang!!
cheers for the pm :)

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

chapter 1 i just read-
wow,what a dream. . .
description was too well done on the dream girl!
and,what a confession letter. . .if i was Arnav,i would have instantly said yes. . . 😛 😆
actually it was perfect fortune-and-cookies,great combo yar! 😆 😆 😆
wow. . .awesome start. . .so cool yar!
I'm loving it. . .will move to part 2 now. . . 😃

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

Superb... Is it going to b a new begining?? Or Arshi ki dushmani? Looking at Arnav's behavior it's hard to tell they wil be one in future!

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AR_EternalLove

@AR_EternalLove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

loved it ...thank god they are safe...

pls ud soon

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

Just read part 2. . .
so,this chapter introduced Payal and N.K.,great 2 know Khushi has friends. . .😊
hmmm,so N.K. likes Khushi,I thought so. . .😳
OMG,teaches to knows Khushi is rejected . . .great!
and OMG,wow. . .
she bumps intn Arnav,and he cries her in front of the whole school in his cross,and even dresses her wounds. . .so cute. . .
God,you know,i read this chapter in my live 'TAX' Letter,and was noticed by my sir when i was reading,and i so compared my condition to Khushi's. . .😆
Damm you. . .😡 asumasum,what a cliff hanger,i can't think straight now,but as am late,the next chapter is already up. . .so,let me move on!
😃

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#257

yep,am back. . .just read part 3 . . .😃
fanning,again a cliff-hanger. . .😡
what will happen next?
did he or did Arnav not kiss her?😕
I am so emotionally driven right now. . .
after reading this chapter i was thinking,should i too believe in fortune?!?!?!?
😕
i can't wait to read what really happened yar . . .
thanks a lot for the pm . . .

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arnavlover97

@arnavlover97

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Posted: 12 years ago

#258

Really liked it. I wish Arnav was nicer to Khushi. Besides that very well written.

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#259

yay!am up with all the updates. . .
thanks for the last pm . . .
😃
while reading the starting,i was so thinking,that Khushi should be going at Arnav's,it would be so cool!
and yes,bingo. . .she is there!
he is behaving so arrogantly yar,and this small Aakash is so cute. . .
Arnav's parents are also good. . .great update. . .am eager for more. . .😳
so,you do a little mercy on me and your fans,and craftsman and update asap. . .
😊
its a bad thing to keep up all waiting you know?😉😛
thanks for the pm. . .really looking forward for more. . .
😊