OS: Aao Na, Gale Laga Lo Na

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sindhu

@misscrazyfan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

wow that was awesome dear...

i enjoyed it...

loved our khushi drunkard part and arnav controlling her and himself too

wow i lovd it

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iritz

@iritz

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Wow Smita... absolutely loved it !!! I could just visualize it... specially Khushi singing !!! 😆 If Only !!! *sigh*

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Too good.,I wanna see this on Monday..

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

You write such delightful stories, Smitar, i love them all!! This one left me chuckling my head off- how do you solve a problem like KKG ? to misquote the song from The Sound of Music. 😃

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arooshi

@arooshee

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

awsome

totally enjoyed reading it...

it was a treat..

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

That was awesome OS...drunk K is very liberal...

-Sona

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Very cute Smita as usual :)

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Hey Smita, i was actually going to PM u asking why u haven't written anything for so long now.

Absolutely beautiful. It was so sweet, cute and romantic. That last line, when i read it... i couldn't help remember Arnav saying this in his husky tone, the very same thing after Khushi had pushed him against the balustrade in her Buaji's house. I think u remembered it too while putting it there.

Loved it!

"Haq he tumhara, mujh pe!"

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wonderblake

@wonderblake

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

that was too good to read smitar,

How much I wish this to happen in the serial, "sigh"

Good job buddy. 👏

It's 1.15am here and I'm reading your OS.

I should be getting some sleep