IPKKND FF : Falling... [Chapter 5] Updtd 26th Jan - Page 16

Originally posted by: DM1810

Am i on your black list yet??

Nope??...phew...;)

prologue:it was so cute...three best friends...first day of college...*old memories*

loved how they knew each other so well...payal the mature one as usual, khushi the crazy one causing all the trouble and lavanya the one with all the fashion sense!!!great start!!

Originally posted by: DM1810

Chapter 1:

Garima ran into the room, curious to find out whether it was indeed her daughter who had spoken those words or an alien life form which had taken her place.

😆 is line really cracked me up!!!

Just finished reading the chapter and I just loved it!!!it was soo awesome!!

I especially loved how you have described Arnav...it was just perfect!!i swear!!and this whole chapter reminds of Pride and Prejudice so much!!Akash will Be Bingley, his sister is like well like...Bingley's sister(and i cant shake off the feeling that she likes Arnav), and Arnav will be Darcy ofcourse*blush*, Payal is Jane, and Khushi is Liz

Oh this is just perfect!!!

Originally posted by: DM1810

A student of English honors writing about an English lecture...;)

"I know the cake suddenly disappeared but I swear I had nothing to do with it. Please don't cut down my allowance Mom!"

🤣still cant stop laughing on that one!!!

Ouch...what was that you ask??nothing i just got pricked by some sparks!!that was something at the table!!

Awww...KKG has a crush on Aditya.,,he is cute ofcourse but he is note Arnav!!

The first fall and the first save...and we get to see a judgemental Arnav!!

Just loved this chapter!!cant wait for the next chapter!!

Originally posted by: shraddska

Arnav is Jealous!!!!! Arnav is Jealous!!!!! Arnav is Jealous!!!!!

Arnav is Jealous!!!!! Arnav is Jealous!!!!! Arnav is Jealous!!!!!

Arnav is Jealous!!!!! Arnav is Jealous!!!!! Arnav is Jealous!!!!!

And I love it... The moment he caught Khushi I knew he must have seen her with Aditya...

So he couldnt keep his eyes off her in the cafe... Why the attitude then...

Yeah!!! Cause he is THE ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA...

So for him its all allowed...

Akash Payal are cute...

What's up with Aditya... all good???

Loving it... but you updated like after ages...

Originally posted by: Krani

I know I had res'd somewhere in this thread, and I am so sorry for getting back to this story so late, but I thought that instead of un-resing, I'll just post another comment. Hope you don't mind!

I can see the sparks already flying! Be it teh eye-locks they are having, the verbal lashings or the cliche falling moments! Did I mention that I am absolute sucker for cliches? :D

Seriously though, this is progressing so nicely! It's like one of those light-hearted fics you want to read because they make you feel so good! :D

I have the widest of smiles on my face after that update, and I am loving how you are describing Khushi's emotions so well, gives me a chance to be in her shoes and almost feel what she is feeling.

Lovely update!!

~K

Originally posted by: visu2028

plz

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Maybe I'm wrong but is arnav a vampire

Originally posted by: aditi07

great update!
sanjay suddenly waking up & blabbering about cake was very funny 😆😆
seems like arnav saw khushi with aditya...dats y such a outburst!
why am i feeling that aditya is not a nice guy here...he is just too sweet..something is wrong!..continue soon😊