IPKKND FF : Falling... [Chapter 5] Updtd 26th Jan

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Ask me (;

@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Well I loved the chapter.

Not only did we get loads of Khushi masala but we got bouts of Arnav and Khushi confrontations and a tad bit of the cute Aditya!

Lovely.

Continue soon :)

Quote

720865

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Update was awsum dear truely loved itt

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Niranjana R

@meniranjana00

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#143

y arnav acts like that??

Quote

pinky89

@pinky89

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Hey its really nice !!!! loved it...Update soon ...Send me PM

Quote

660889

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#145

its very nicee...

continue soon

pm me

Quote

-Devanshi-

@-Devanshi-

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Am i on your black list yet??

Nope??...phew...;)

prologue:it was so cute...three best friends...first day of college...*old memories*

loved how they knew each other so well...payal the mature one as usual, khushi the crazy one causing all the trouble and lavanya the one with all the fashion sense!!!great start!!

Quote

-Devanshi-

@-Devanshi-

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Chapter 1:

Garima ran into the room, curious to find out whether it was indeed her daughter who had spoken those words or an alien life form which had taken her place.

😆 is line really cracked me up!!!

Just finished reading the chapter and I just loved it!!!it was soo awesome!!

I especially loved how you have described Arnav...it was just perfect!!i swear!!and this whole chapter reminds of Pride and Prejudice so much!!Akash will Be Bingley, his sister is like well like...Bingley's sister(and i cant shake off the feeling that she likes Arnav), and Arnav will be Darcy ofcourse*blush*, Payal is Jane, and Khushi is Liz

Oh this is just perfect!!!

Quote

-Devanshi-

@-Devanshi-

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#148

A student of English honors writing about an English lecture...;)

"I know the cake suddenly disappeared but I swear I had nothing to do with it. Please don't cut down my allowance Mom!"

🤣still cant stop laughing on that one!!!

Ouch...what was that you ask??nothing i just got pricked by some sparks!!that was something at the table!!

Awww...KKG has a crush on Aditya.,,he is cute ofcourse but he is note Arnav!!

The first fall and the first save...and we get to see a judgemental Arnav!!

Just loved this chapter!!cant wait for the next chapter!!

Quote

fatima2603

@fatima2603

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Enjoyed the update. i think arnav must have overheard aditya and khushi so he said what he said.

hmmm sanjays payback? A bit apprehensive about that!

Quote

Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#150

I know I had res'd somewhere in this thread, and I am so sorry for getting back to this story so late, but I thought that instead of un-resing, I'll just post another comment. Hope you don't mind!

I can see the sparks already flying! Be it teh eye-locks they are having, the verbal lashings or the cliche falling moments! Did I mention that I am absolute sucker for cliches? :D

Seriously though, this is progressing so nicely! It's like one of those light-hearted fics you want to read because they make you feel so good! :D

I have the widest of smiles on my face after that update, and I am loving how you are describing Khushi's emotions so well, gives me a chance to be in her shoes and almost feel what she is feeling.

Lovely update!!