The Lost One . . . *Kriyaansh SS*

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Nice concept...
Awesome...😊

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Chapter 1

The boy left with the girl. He went to some counter.

Boy - im buying her...!!!

Counter girl - come again...!!!

Boy - arh yahan kya kisi ko ek baar mein baat samajh nahi aati. main ise kharid raha hun happy...???

CG - but sir...

Boy - will give any amount..!!!!

CG - i will talk to the manager.

The counter girl talked to the manager (kkk we cutting all d unnecesarry part seedha boy's house)

P.s. - at present he lives alone..!!

Girl - ye tumhaara ghar hai

she said totally not believing her eyes..!

Boy- haan. kaka..!!

the boy called. an old man came down.

Kaka - haan beta..?

Boy - kaka ise iska room dikha do. mere room ke next waala.

Kaka - theek hai beta..!! beta ye kaun hai..?

Boy - wohi jise mom yahan is ghar mein chahti thi..!!!

the girl was confused but the old man smiled wide.

Kaka - theek hai beta main ise leke jaata hun. chalo beta.

Boy - kaka..

Kaka - haan rey beta..

Rey - kaka iska samman bhi lejaane ko kehdiye suraj se aur mom ko abhi mat bataana.

Kaka - theek hai beta..,

the man took the girl with him.

Rey thought soo sorry kriya. you have to face a lot now..!!! how dare u leave when i was there..!!! huh...now pay for it babes...!!!

He even left to his room

Kriya in her room

Rey..!!! rey yahan...!!! no he...he isnt rey...he isnt my rey..!!!! he can never be..!!!! my rey is a soft spoken person and he is soo rude.. no way he is my rey...!!!!

Kriya drifted to sleep thinking all this.

*Next Day*

A lady in white designer saare in standing infront of rey's room

Lady - rey baccha wake up..!!!

Rey - mom lemme sleep na..!!!

He covered his ears with a pillow.

Lady - rey wake up now..!!!!

Rey - ...

Lady - rey did u forgot that today is a special day..!!!

inside the room rey sat up straight..!!!

oh gosh kits birthday..!!!!

Rey - mom im up..!!!

Lady - kk come down fast..

Rey freshened up fast and came down..!!!

Rey - heyaa mom..

he hugged her mm sidewards.

Lady - kaisa hai..?

Rey - fit n fyn.

aapke liye ek surprise hai

Lady - umm whats it..???

Rey - chaliye

rey took her to kriya;s room and opened the door.

Lady - kits..!!!

Kriya sat up straight..

The lady ran and hugged her as tight as she could...

Kriya - priya aunty

Priya - kahan chali gayi thi haan...? mom dad ki death ho gayi dat doesnt mean hum bhi mar gaye..!!!

Kriya - sorry aunt

Priya - aunt nahi hun main..!!!

Kriya - sorry mumma..!!

Priya - its kk. kahan thi ye...??

Rey - bar mein.!!!

he said mockingly..!!!

Priya - what..!!!

Kriya - sorry aunt..!!

she said making a cute baby face..

Priya - its kk. jaldi se taiyaar hoke neeche aa

Priya went down

Kriya - reyaaansh...

Rey - dont call me dat..!!!

he was super duper angry..!!!

Kriya - sorry rey...!!!

Rey - huh..!!!

and he turned his face in other direction

Kriya went infront of him and started doing sit ups saying sorry

Rey smiled and hugged her tight...

kk guys finally finished

well a note

our SS is officially renamed as "The Lost One"

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Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago

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Purplevalley

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Res
unres

hah rey usse janta tha...

Kriya Priya ko mumma bulati hai...parents died...oh gosh ek update mein itni saari story...

Hehe kria doing situps was so cute

lovd it
Amazing update...

Edited by --Kinjal-- - 13 years ago

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Purplevalley

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha
Res

ahh mumma ye mujse pehle agai
unwaah

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: --Kinjal--
ahh mumma ye mujse pehle agai
unwaah

aww chal oi nai

till...we both shall live pe toh tu hi first hai na

and ise bhi padh liyo

Love and Trust *KR SS* ch5 + epilogue pg83

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

mast hai...

main toh kuch aur hi expect kar rhi thi...

loved it vaise...

and epilogue bhi pdh liya maine..

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: kriyansh24
mast hai...

main toh kuch aur hi expect kar rhi thi...

loved it vaise...

and epilogue bhi pdh liya maine..

epilogue?? 😕

tum love and trust ki baat kar rahi ho kya???

marriage waale thread par aao yaar

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chetna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

its nice start

loved it

plz explain the story why kria was in bar...??

in coming chapters

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

awesome part...

rey know kria.. nd kria too

kria call rey's mother as mamma..

and kria's parents died... *sad*

nd kria is doing situps to manofy rey.. aww shoo cutteee

update soon

thnx for pm