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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran




Geet has chosen a very hard route to get back Maan...

I am worried he can take more dangerous ways to show her his anger and get her jealous...because for him she is doing drama to trap him for his money and he can take many ways to get her real motive out...

I think from the beginning of this FF that Geet is not what she is showing...

there is something I feel missing when u try to portray her as a very changed person into loving and caring...she is forcing too much to get into life of Maan...

u said that she started loving him after they get separated...so why she didn't return early to his home...now she is trying to enter his home and office and trying to buttering his parents...if she was really changed then she can return before Maan return India and she can try to live with his parents...pacify them...husband is not the only thing in this world family is also important...

suddenly she appear from nowhere and showing her SATI SAVITRI side...trying to be very polite and respectful towards his parents suddenly...I am not able to digest that she is changed...

a wife who disrespected his parents, his feelings, his status, his way of living, make mockery of his love, made fun of him in front of her friends then how can a person react and feel when out of nowhere suddenly she is showing that she is changed...

here in office also...she got angry that Adi is talking with her like she is his junior...so somewhere that egoistic trait is still there...if she is changed then she should know that Adi is Maan's friend not any other employee...
she herself changed his office setup not caring how he will react...this is not showing a love...this is done to irritate him...why...

I really don't understand Geet's character and somewhere I feel that she is not changed...there is some other hidden agenda...

and if she is really changed then I think u are not able to portray her character well enough to give us confirmation that she is really a changed person now...

sorry for so long comments...but I wanted to write it from the beginning of this FF...but I waited for some more parts thinking may be I am jumping into conclusion very fast...but after to day's update I am disappointed...

thanx for pm...

Hi Dear...
Thanks for such a detail analysis for the new FF...
As for Geet's sudden appearence and why not reappearing in his life earlier ... it has a very strong reason.
Reason for which Maan asked for seperation and she agreed...
I did not want to reveal now.. but reader's satisfation is first...
Only when the reason for the seperation has been fulfilled, Geet is coming back in his life... It was only for Maan and his family that Geet did not try to come back to his life before...
BUT Maan is going to think exactly as you are thinking as he can never beleive that GEEt can be so thoughtful.
Now do not let me reveal more...
Also I just wanted to let you know that I have not revealed even one percent of past... let the past be unfoalded, update by update...
Remember - it was Maan who asked for seperation and not GEET... past has its own story...
Maan a very traditional person, who in no case can think of divorce even if relation is bad was the one to ask for seperation...
let the story unfold and you will know...
As for Geet's behaviour towards ADi-- yes there is still a void between Geet and Mishty and I purposly showed that line to reflect this... she is still with ppl who butters her then how can arrogance go completely... she is all lost in just turning to Mishty for Maan... but slowly as she works under him as secretary and face tough time... she will realize many things of life in different view...
Learning practiacally will change her in real, though she is trying had for Maan.
Also how will she know Adi is Maan's friend too... imagine, she is head of her company , a boss and then employee of other company orders her... it hurts her ego for a while... but she recoveres back... this is where she is putting effort and all this for Maan.
Still if I am not able to satisfy you dear, i apologise.Please consider I am just a FF writer on IF and not a professional writer. Hope you get my POV.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing...Superb update
Loved it very much
poor Geet...lost in maan
but this time he will make her life hell
waiting for next...continue super soon
Thankx for the pm



Edited by Gcs-girl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesme update
seems geet hurted maan so badly..pata nahi kese apne rute piya ko manayegi geet..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

Hi Dear...

Thanks for such a detail analysis for the new FF...
As for Geet's sudden appearence and why not reappearing in his life earlier ... it has a very strong reason.
Reason for which Maan asked for seperation and she agreed...
I did not want to reveal now.. but reader's satisfation is first...
Only when the reason for the seperation has been fulfilled, Geet is coming back in his life... It was only for Maan and his family that Geet did not try to come back to his life before...
BUT Maan is going to think exactly as you are thinking as he can never beleive that GEEt can be so thoughtful.
Now do not let me reveal more...
Also I just wanted to let you know that I have not revealed even one percent of past... let the past be unfoalded, update by update...
Remember - it was Maan who asked for seperation and not GEET... past has its own story...
Maan a very traditional person, who in no case can think of divorce even if relation is bad was the one to ask for seperation...
let the story unfold and you will know...
As for Geet's behaviour towards ADi-- yes there is still a void between Geet and Mishty and I purposly showed that line to reflect this... she is still with ppl who butters her then how can arrogance go completely... she is all lost in just turning to Mishty for Maan... but slowly as she works under him as secretary and face tough time... she will realize many things of life in different view...
Learning practiacally will change her in real, though she is trying had for Maan.
Also how will she know Adi is Maan's friend too... imagine, she is head of her company , a boss and then employee of other company orders her... it hurts her ego for a while... but she recoveres back... this is where she is putting effort and all this for Maan.
Still if I am not able to satisfy you dear, i apologise.Please consider I am just a FF writer on IF and not a professional writer. Hope you get my POV.


thanx for replying my post...

that was what I was worried that Geet is still not changed fully...

she is still forcing herself on Maan and it irritates a person rather than pacifying...

but as a writer I have full faith in u because u have written such a beautiful FFs before...

that is why I was in confusion that whether Geet is really changed or u are also trying to portray that she is not changed fully...

but now I am clear...first she is not changed completely...there is that ego and superiority complex is still there and she will completely change into an loving and innocent person when she will work with Maan and face difficulties...then she will understand that common people face more difficulties in life than rich people...how they have to cope up with everyday challenge and keep their dignity intact and she was utterly wrong in judging Maan before and insulting him and his parents...

and this only u also wants to portray...am I right now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Excellent part
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Ayeo!!! Wonder Aab kya hoga😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love it graphics...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb part.
Maan ko secretary ko dekh kar 1000 volt ka shock laga. Lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...

now new secretery will change everything.. MSK's official & personal life..

maza aayega.. update soon..

thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum updte
nw two strong oposite poles r cmg closure so dey attract each other fr sure
as we noe unlike attract
waiting fr nxt

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