Destiny, Fate & Love Thread 2. Chapter 43 - 54 (B). - Page 20

Originally posted by: chavvi16

man was that dfantastic as usual
and i dont know why you are worried about the scene where geet was reading maans diary it came out well not really well but mindblowingly well
wow so many things happened
arnie almost got caught out by his di and khushi
maan got geet ready for college and gave her a job in KC
a lot happened in this update as is usual
man that was funny chotte hiding so he dont get caught
geet still being unsure if she loves maan or not of course you do dear
and khushi and arnie enjoying the bhutta
loved it how khushi makes him do things he wouldnt normally do
and what he said about getting white hair before they got married
dont worry maan will be having the same problem too
man was i counting the days to this update and now its here loved it
so we will see ya soon then
cheers for pm
and keep giving us such fantastic updates dear

Thanks for the awesome review! And also thanks for all your compliments!

About the Geet reading Maan's diary scene, really thanks that you liked my work. I was really not sure about it. When I thought about writing the scene the idea seemed fantastic but when I actually wrote it, it seemed kind of silly. Happy that you don't think so.

About Arnie almost caught by his Di, I think there will be another scene like this in next few chapters as I seriously love the whole idea where the guy hides his identity and then later on suffers while trying to keep it hidden. Seems really funny.

I read your whole review and I am really happy that you loved all the scenes.

You were counting the days to the update!!! Wow! I did not know my work was that good!

Maybe I should try becoming a writer! What do you say!

Thanks once again for the review! Actually the reason I am updating so soon is all thanks to the fantastic reviews you and others give me! Thanks a lot for that!

Take care

Kalpana!

Originally posted by: flowers4u

loved it...very beautiful , sweet and cute update

Thanks for the review!

Originally posted by: love2_soma

wow...maan ne apna dil k baat kitne achche tarikese bayan kiye hai...hum toh maan par fida h gaye...

aur yahan arnav bechara apne afreen se chhupta phir raha hai...kya karen...hiii re...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Thanks for the review!

Originally posted by: nazibah

Geet is one lucky girl to have a guy like Maan in her life! And I wonder how much longer Arnav's quick thinking will be helpful...Loved the update!! Thanks for the PM!!

Thanks for the review! And yes, Geet is really lucky! I wish there was a Maan in my life too! Haaye!!! (Drooling write now)

Originally posted by: Zindagirocks_21

I didn't like the udpate I LOVED it!!
Especially the Hewlett shopping I knew Arnav would do something , lol pranking someone can in childhood can help you in your future alot aha ! Lol I loved how he was so nervous about seeing di and khushi findin out the truth , he's like think Arnav think . But have to say the funniest part that I laughed on it was when he hid behind the pillar hiding dfrom khushi and Anjali looking for him and doesn't find him and when she turns again he is there , ahah If I was there I would not respond for 3 seconds or so and than scream , te loudest scream ever .
What an excuse , jijaji ki birthday , Arnav Singh raizadas brain is full of ideas lol. Awe geet scene was awesome , though misse maan. But serioulsy the songs that you wrote clearly described what maan was going through and all , though some were emotional but over all loved it ( now geet should sag I love you to him as well) . I can just imagine maan's expressions (:
arnav and khushi eating bhutta ! Awe purane din yaad aa gaye ! But really cute scene and how he took some for his family as well and everyone is like having a WHAT THE moment , ahah and Anjali just ignoring that doubled it.
By the last bit of update I started remembering my childhood , getting money from mom and running on the streets to get bhutta and making it a spicy one a well. I miss those days I wish I could go back and do it again. I actually live in Calgary so I'm moving to a new house , it's in new Brighton community ,lol it's opposite over here , it's my da who works and is also being lazy , he's like shouting guys pack and my mom is like your dad will keep screaming to us to pack where as he is being lazy has not even packed a single thing , I couldn't stop laughing the way mom said that in punjabi , I was go mom .
Oh okie , Im glad it didn't offend you anyway . My real name is Rafia (: thanks for an awesome udpate. And for sure can't wait for the next part.
Thanks for the pm <3

Dear Rafia, Thanks for the fantastic review!

You loved it!! Wow! I think it is my luckiest month for getting so awesome reviews! Or maybe my work is actually improving!

I am happy that you loved the Jewelry shopping scene! I was not sure whether you guys would understand it or not! I am good at making plots but I suck at writing things down so I was nervous about it! I am not good at interpreting scenes into my own words! So Thanks a bunch for loving it! Made my day when I read it!

About Arnav hiding till Khushi goes away, even I was laughing while writing it. Especially Anjali getting scared when he comes back. I am still laughing as I think of that scene. Oh how I wish I was as good at writing as I am at imagining! That scene would have been more hilarious! But I am happy that even the way I have written was funny for you!

About Armav's bluffing about Jijaji's birthday, he is a businessman. If he can't think of one good excuse then he is not a good businessman.

Wow!! You liked the Maaneet diary scene. That made me really happy! I was not that happy about that scene! It seemed a bit silly! I mean it was good when I imagined it! But my writing could not justify my imagination! What I thought and what I wrote seemed a bit different for me! Wish I improve!

About Arnav and Khushi bhutta scene, Dad bought me a bhutta as I loved them and that's where I got the idea. I had planned some other scene there which was not that good. But when I was eating while taking a break from studies I got this idea and wrote it down. Happy that I did not have the other scene I had thought earlier. It was not that good!

Double 'What the' Scene! Maybe I should write a one shot later where the whole family wonders behind the weird reaction of Arnav and Anjali! It could be a fun little shot with lots of hilarious reasons for their behavior from Mami! He he he!

About your moving, I am not well versed with geography because of my forgetfulness so forgive me if you think What I am asking is stupid but Are you moving from One state to other or are you just moving in the same area? Just wanted to get a clarification!

So it is opposite there! Mummy - the packing expert!!!! Here Dad does the packing.

So you are Punjabi? If you are, can you tell me some words like Punjabi swear words or words generally your mom uses like 'Hogaya Siyappa' or 'Phitte Mooh Tera' etc. I want some standard lines Punjabis use while talking in Hindi. You know sometimes our tongue slips and we use our mother tongue while talking in Hindi or English! I would like to know them! It might help later on when Geet's family enter or when Geet speaks Punjabi!

Ok! So no one was offended! That's cool! Nice name you have got! What it means though? Just curious! I like learning new things like lines in different languages or meaning of various names!

Thanks once again for such an awesome review! Loved it!

Take care

Kalpana

Originally posted by: Sana_malik

love it 😃

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Thank you!

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Lovely part dear :D
Awww Maan understood geet's unspoken words. He brought her the brochure to complete her studies. And he even gave her an appointment letter. Too good. He got rewarded by a kiss and a hug awww.
Loved the songs u wrote in maan's diary. U even added his thoughts after each verses. Brilliant.
Cant wait for more ;)

Thanks for the review! And wasnt Maan superb that he understood her so well! I am happy that you liked the chappy so much!

Originally posted by: rest.rest

beautiful update 👏

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Deelight

i likd Geet gng thrgh the pics... bt found tat song part a bit boring... Overal luvd it... waitin fa d engagement part
nxt update on 22nd 😲OMG! hv 2 wait tat long😒

Thanks for the review!

Originally posted by: spvd

part 45
awesome part dear...

Maan Geet
wow that was lovely...
Maan has arranged for Geet's admission...
and also after college she can join KC...
would love to see Geet seeing Maan's dusht danav avatar at Office...
shes so cute with her doings...

Arnav Anjali
oh ho Arnav is gonna land in trouble...
but i will enjoy that...
Anjali hope she will get to see her Chotey's doings at least one day...

Arnav Khushi
wow that was too good...
only Khushi can talk like that to Arnav and he keeping quiet...
that was too good...
but damn he didnt get caught...
but i would like to see how Arnav and Khuhsi would react when khushi comes to know who chotey is and what she had thought of the lil' kid and telling that to Arnav at his face and Arnav's face would be worth seeing...
hes really a good business man, know how to escape at the time of trouble...

Butta is corn?
that was nice...
the family's reaction was too funny...
in 2 ways they were shocked...
one seeing Arnav and other seeing Anjali...
poor family the bro sis duo are unique...

Geet
that was nice...
the photo part was so cute...
hope Geet will realize her feelings soon...
cont soon dear...

the precap is really too good...

Hi Deepa,

Just read both the review and your reply. Thanks a bunch for both of them!

First of all, I am really happy that I can make you blush! You make me blush everytime you praise me in your review so atleast once I am able to make you blush!

Second of all, thanks a bunch for liking each and every scene! That is the best thing I have heard ever. I used to have really low confidence level but your review makes me believe in my writing abilities. You make me realize that I am good at what I do! Thanks once again for that!

Maan and Arnav scene - I am not saying that it was not good. It is just that I am not used to seeing them interact. Imagining Geet and Khushi interacting is easy because I am a chatterbox and all I have to do is remember mine and another chatterbox friend's convo. But I have never met Maan or Arnav type guys so don't know their talking style when guys like them who are also friends meet or talk. It is a bit weird. Plus we have scene DD and Sanaya being good friends so it is easy to imagine them but I have never seen Gurmeet and Barun together so that also gives me more trouble. But maybe after I write few more scenes I will be alright.

About the band baaja scene, Jewelry has been chosen but dresses are left and if Maaneet can have a dress choosing scene dont you think Arnav should get atleast one chance to choose Khushi's dresses. That's all I will say about that scene.

Arre! You tamil too!!!! Me too!!! Do you hear tamil songs? I used to watch tamil movies and songs when I was kid and went to granny's house during vacations. But now I don't watch much! And I know nothing about the latest songs! I remember only before 2000 songs like from the movie Jeans or Kandukondien Kandukondein. What about you?

About your review for chapter 45:

About Geet seeing DD avatar from Maan, be ready for it because once the twist happens, you will Maan's Angry young Man avatar again. Infact some scenes will be close to show scenes. But not the same.

About your comment of Anjali knowing about Arnav's antics, that will not happen till the story ends. Because if that happened the story will end. If I say more mera bhaanda phutega!

About Khushi realizing who is Chotey, that will not be significant in this story when the twist happens!

Arnav knowing Khushi thinks of him as a kid, you are the second person who wants to see that! Have to do something to put a scene like that there!

Ya, Bhutta is corn!

Poor family, what a shock they got when Arnav and Anjali acted weird! Should write a scene as a one shot on their reactions! I will make it funny!

Haaye! You loved the photo and song scenes of Maaneet! Really glad to hear that!

Wow! What a long reply I wrote! Phew! I think I have bored you enough!

Thanks once again for such superb reviews!

Take care

Kalpana