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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

gayi bhaans paani mein really man you are funny😆

okay here goes she was feeling ticklish when he was doing that and he thought he was having an effect but the truth was something else huh

so now we know red is her fav colour dude remember that okay

aww so cute they are back to taking out clothes for each other about time too man😉

man was the maan and arnav convo hilarious or what

maan was telling arnav that khushi now has 2 powerful bros in the form of him and dev and that he better be careful as not to hurt her or else he will be in trouble with MSK

arnie dear of course you are dating your afreen what else woulld you call it huh

maan you are worried of his love story and asking babaji to save him phele apni love story ke baare mein toh sochiye ji phir unki chinta karna

so our arnie still dont know about soni's real nbame huh well as you said that wont be revealed before the engagement right which i hope will be soon man

arrey anji of course he is happy and smiling aur khush kaise nahin dikhenge after all apni khushi se joh baat karr rahein the and already started calling her sweetheart huh

so he called her up and told her about their date huh cool very good about time we started being romantic in the open with her

khushi dear enjoy this side arnav you never know when he will be back to being his usual rakshash LG self again from being your ranjah

man this date would have been so much fun had it happens that is which it didnt

so khushi and anji met @ KC huh and now even anji knows that she works for maan good

funny naa when maan called her chutke chotte and hubby as her BG well it seems thats what they are and what she said about them is also true naa

maan and anji convo was beautiful

i love it when anji teased M for still being a bachelor as akaash who is younger than him is getting engaged and he isnt

but then maan finally told him that he too is getting married to a girl he loves and at first she couldnt believe it but she was happy for him and now they will meet in the engagement of payash

khushi dear you are so right about arnie being laal and peela in anger and becoming the ASR rakshash self if you make him wait but then he stands you up

anji saw her chote and obviously she assumed that he really is here to check up on her how is she to know he was here for his date with khushi right

and she started scolding him for following her which in turn back fires on her unfortunately
the person he originally he came to see is very very mad at him and you cant really blame her can ya now when she wouldnt find him where he said he would meet her

lucky for him she didnt come out after anji or she would have known about him and that wouldnt have been good for him as both his di and khushi wouldnt be happy with him

and our KKG sure went into her spitfire mode on ASR who like a silly person forgot to let her know he cant come and byy the time he did inform her she was very mad at him

she is right he could have texted her to at least let her know but that wasnt meant to be right
and once again he has made his afreen mad dude what do we do with ya

but he remedies that and sends her jalebis which was a clever move by him

man khushi couldnt get his handwriting as it was bad and she even teased him about that aww

khushi arnie toh sirf phek rahe the he wont come to your house how can he agar pakade gaye naa apki family ke haathon toh aap pata bahin kya karengi inka

wow the ending was so cool with NT and her teasings

man now this is much better way to feed each other romance badhta hai aur inki lap mein bath karr toh double dhmaal yaar

its about time he is romantic towards his soni right

cheers for pm and hope to see ya soon

hope this doesnt make ya fall asleep


Wow! What a long review!

Padhte padhte thak gayi! Just kidding! Was so delighted to read such a long one!

Thanks a bunch!

About your review:

Isnt it hilarious that Maan is trying to be flirty but Geet feels ticklish? When I imagined it I was laughing for atleast two minutes. Poor Maan! Must have felt so frustrated.

About Geet's fav colour, we know about the other three, so I thought we should Geet's fav too.

I am happy that you found Arnav and Maan's convo comic, I was not sure of that scene. Seems out of character. Of course it will seem weird because we have never seen Maan and Arnav interact before. But still I was not sure whether it was ok or not. Thanks for clearing my doubt. Now I got an idea on how to write their convo next time.

About Arnav knowing Soni's real name, you are right. It will come out only during the engagement. So till then whenever Maan is about to mention Soni's real name something will interrupt him.

Poor Anjali! She seemed so confused. Kya hua mere chote ko? Who khush kyun hai?

About your comment regarding Arnav turning back into Rakshas mode, that is going to happen when the twist will happen. So enjoy Arnav's Raanjha side till you can.

I know I should have let Arnav and Khushi have their date but I had promised you guys that there will be scenes where Arnav will almost be caught. And I had also promised full on comedy in those scenes, so had to cancel the date. But don't worry there are many romantic scenes and dates coming up.

I don't know why but whenever I think of Anjali, her brothers and Shyam I always see Anjali standing surrounded by the guys wearing bodyguard uniform with guns in their hand posing in James Bond style. Especially when Arnav's regular dressing style is so similar to what bodyguards wear. (Three piece suit and goggles) So decided to put it there.

I am happy that you liked Anjali and Maan's convo. That was another scene I was nervous about. They were best friends but I had to make sure that their natural personalities are not sidelined. I mean Anjali can get angry playfully but she is not the type to hold grudge so I had to write the rootna manaana scene carefully. I am happy that it came out properly.

Wasn't Anjali cute when she scolded Arnav for following only to have it backfired? I wish they had shown Anjali a bit more spunky than what she is in the show. Don't take it wrong, I love Anjali but her mischievous side is shown so rarely. I wish they show that side of her more.

About Khushi following Anjali, if that had happened and both had come across Arnav, meri story to interval ke pehle khatam ho jaati!

I am happy that you liked Khushi's spitfire style.

Thank God, Arnav was smart enough to pataao Khushi with Jalebis or else God knows till when they would have fought.

About the ending Geet Maan Scene, I thought NT needed some masti as I was missing her so the scene which I first wrote as romantic turned into fun with the entrance of NT.

Phew! Kitna bada review tha! But totally enjoyed reading and replying to it.

Once Again, Thanks for such an awesome review!


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fffan123

Wow!!! What a sweet and lovely update. Waiting eagerly for the next part.

Thanks for the review!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TheDarkKnight

Lols this was a hilarious update...Maan trying to be romantic but Geet was getting tickled 🤣🤣

And that scene towards the end was so cuteee...Maaneet feeding each other and then Geet on Maan's lap 😳

Thanks for the review!
I am happy that you liked all Maaneet scenes!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lively-piia

lovely update...

anji is so sweet...
maan n arnav talks were gud...
maaneet were awsome...
but i lv nt d most..though her scene was small...
cont

Thanks for the review!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanam1234u

reali nice and sweet..😳

Thank you!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 44
awesome part dear...
loved it...

Maan Geet
OMG that was so lovely...
but trust Geet to laugh like that...
bechara Maan...
has to think some romantic ideas...
so cute...

the dinner scene was so so so lovely...
haye...
naughty NT but that was nice...
so cute and Maan is realizing this is what is marriage life and having some one for urself...

Maan Arnav
that was so nice...
Arnav asking permission...
and Maan dhamkaying Arnav to take care of Khushi...
the convo was so nice and funny and entertaining...

Arnav Anjali
for the first time Anjali is seeing Arnav laugh so much from the heart...
she has too see Arnav with Khushi then she will for sure faint...

Khushi
poor Khushi shes all so flustered...
cant blame her when the Rakshaks is so lovey dovey...

Maan Anjali
that was awesome dear...
thanks Madhu dear for this request...
so sweet the rapport Maan and Anjali share...
but Maan didnt reveal this to Anjali well that was good in many reasons...
that was too cool iss waiting ka kya naam doon...
they all are not less than bodyguards...
so protective of Anjali and given a chance even Maan would also be like that...
so Khuhsi is also gonna join the shopping hmmm this is gonna be interesting to see Arnav making bahanas and fearing...

Arnav
ha ha ha...
poor Arnav the guy is so scared...
Anjali telling him was too funny but Arnav has come back to his protective mode...
sigh bechari Anjali...
wasnt Arnav enough that he has called up Shyam and Aakash too...
OMG u idiot u forgot ur FIRST DATE?
how could u Arnav?
Khushi dont leave him easily this time...
satao khoob satao him...
gadha kahin ka...

Arnav Khushi
sigh she forgave him so soon...
sigh he knows how to pacify her...
no wonder hes a successful business man...
Khushi u have to take class for Arnav at least once...
why is that he has the upper hand all the time?

on the whole loved it so much...
cont soon dear...

precap
interesting...
Arnav should be put in spot for at least once...
i dunno why but i enjoy him being irritated or taken over...

PS - thanks for the scene dear...


Hi Deepa! Thanks for the awesome review!

Did I ever mention how much I love your reviews! I read it atleast three times. That's why it takes me so much time to reply.

Well, onto the review:

About the Maaneet tie romance, I am so happy that you found it lovely. I wanted to know whether it was upto your expectation. You are right. Poor Maan! He goes romantic, she finds it funny. Pata nahi romance ke liye aur kya kya karna padega use!

But he saved the day by making a simple dinner romantic by hand feeding her. Trust NT to give us some funny moments! Was missing NT so put her there. Ab popcorn scenes nahi toh yahi sahi!

About Maan and Arnav, thank God, you liked that scene. I felt it seemed out of character. May be I felt that because Arnav and Maan have never conversed in the show. But still something was not right. No problem, atleast you liked it. I will make sure that next convo of theirs is upto my satisfaction.

About Anjali, if Anjali ever saw how Arnav behaves with Khushi she will actually take him to Doctor. I mean her Chote acting romantic! Hey Devi Maiyya!

About Maan and Anjali scene, That was another scene I was nervous about. I was not sure whether Madhu is happy with it or not. Only her review will tell me whether it is upto her level.

You may not believe this but Arnav's dressing style always reminds of some high class bodyguard. I mean his dressing style plus his expressionless face. That is where the idea of bodyguard came from.

As I am replying after I posted the next chapter, I hope you enjoyed how I handled the Jewelery shop scene. Remember in one of my reviews I had said that let the shopping start, phir Arnav ki badn bajegi, this was one of that. I think as per my plans there is another Arnav's band baja scene upcoming in Chapter 49. That is more interesting than this one.

Yes, Anjali scolding Anrav was too funny but Arnav is also smart. He called up the rest of bodyguards aur poore family ko daant khilaaya.

Arre! Arnav ko idiot mat bol yaar! Bichaara behen ko daante ki first date yaad rakhe! He he he!

About Khushi forgiving Arnav soon, Arre! Kya karein? Khushi aur naaraaz rahi toh mere story ka satyanaash ho jaata! Isliye Khushi forgave him soon. But do notice that he gave her lots of Jalebis! I think that was worth forgiving as per Khushi's standards. He he he!

About your last comment, yes, even I love jab Arnav ki band bajti hai! I just love those scenes!

Out of the context question Madhu mentioned in her review that you are tamil, are you? Just curious!


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dorindakate

Thanks for the pm...

Arnav, Arnav...you gotta improve those boy-girl skills...
Love the tender romantic scenes between Maan and Geet...
Can't wait to see what happens both when Khushi gets dropped at the jewelers and when she finally finds out that her Arnav is going to be Payal's brother-in-law...

Thanks for the review!
To know what will happen you will have to keep reading!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mina420

👏 Hey Kalpana 👏

After so long I am finally finding time to comment... the last few chapters were a delight to read 😳. Slowly slowy the people are coming together. I wonder what Khushi's reaction will be when she realises that Arnav is her jiji's soon to be jeth 😕. And how will the Raizada's react when the find out that Arnav has found himself his Afreen 😲.
That was considerate of Maan not to tell Anjali about Khushi and Arnav. At least he had the sense to give his friend some time with his lady love. I particularly liked how Maan was so protective of Khushi. I mean, he knows Arnav so much longer than he knows Khushi and yet he felt the need to protect her. Not that I ma implying Maan doesn't trust him but still. that was too sweet.
Then there was Arnav sending jalebies. On one hand it is so easy to get Khushi to forgive him 😛 but I bet if he does that a few times to often 😡, she might make him try harder .
I agree with Khushi on the hadwriting thing. I see it myself how the brainier students all have handwriting that sometimes they themselves can't read 😆.
Waiting for what is coming up next. I hope the jewellery shop will not be the place the truth comes out...
When I read that Geet is going to find something I thought about something connected to Maan's past 🤢 but then another thought struck me... Imagine Geet getting hold of Maan's childhood/baby fotos...🤪 I am sure she will tease him but not as much as Khushi would tease Arnav if that ever happened. The wayAnjali is in this FF, I wouldn't wonder if she has kept Arnav's albums and would show them to his futur wife...Imagine Aranv in dipers or taking a baby bath... what a disaster 🤣
Thanks for the long long update. It was so long that I had to break it down and read. But that doesn't mean I wouldn't mind another such long update. Good luck for ur exams ⭐️. I hope ur lappy gets repaired soon and how is ur nani? I hope she is doing much better than before.
Bye Bye & Love
Mina


Mina Dear! I missed your reviews! Thanks for reviewing! Not only you reviewed but you also gave a awesome idea for Geet's special book scene! Thanks yaar! You are simply superb!

Towards your review:

Yes, slowly slowly the scenes are coming together, I am tying up loose ends before the twist happens. And dhamaka! (Gives an evil laugh)

About your question of how raizadas will react when they will find out about Arnav Khushi I have a sentence for you. Who said anything about family knowing? Mera twist aisa hai that family ko kuch pata nahi chalega aur story ki angle hi poori tarah se badal jaayegi! It is a twist none of you could have guessed till now. But I am sure that once we near the engagement some of you will have the idea of the twist.

About Maan being considerate for not telling Anjali about Arhi, Maan knows Anjali's tendency of interfering into others matters. But frankly, I wish he had told her. Atleast aage aane waala twist toh nahi hota! I won't reveal more!

About Maan being protective of Khushi, I knew I was missing something. Kuch toh likhna reh gaya tha! Now I realized, I never put any Khushi Maan bonding moments! No problem! I will put some bonding moments soon.

About your comment regarding Arnav trying harder next time, I will remember that and next time if there is any fight, I will make sure ki Arnav does more mehnat to pataao Khushi!

About the handwriting comment, you are right! I used to be topper of my class and my handwriting used to be so scary that even I could not read them sometimes. (Now I have improved) That is one of the reasons I never tried story writing in college even when I had lots of spare time. And now when I realized that there exists a thing called computer and my typing spees is lot better than my writing speed, I am not getting time to write them. Sigh! Talk about Irony!

A special thanks for suggesting Geet going through Maan's childhood pics. I know you wanted a funny scene but with Maan Geet I think emotional scene was much more suiting! And you are right! Agar Khushi ke haath mein Arnav ki childhood pics lagi toh bechaara Arnav! Uska toh tamasha ho jaayega! But Geet is not like that! (Atleast that's what I think!) So, a sentimental scene with a dash romance in the end with the song verses!

About Anjali keeping Arnav's childhood pics and showing it to Khushi, what an idea! Will add it in the epilogue of the story or make a one shot out of it! I am sure you will love it!

Phew! Had to read two times to give proper reply! That's why it took so much time to reply! Still thanks for the awesome review! Loved it totally!

Naani is fine! She is back to normal (as normal as old lady can be) and laptop is still in repair. But luckily my mom gave me her office laptop for my studies and I am sneaking in some scenes when I take breaks! Mom knows it but as long as I get back to studying, she does not mind it!

I think that is enough for this time. I will write more when you review next! ;)

Take care

Kalpana!


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pantrossy

Omg Arnav sent box of jalebies to pacify khushi 😆

I know. Sweet, isnt it?
Thanks for the review!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: flowers4u

man love your story...mindblowingly awesome...loved it ...keep it up

Thanks for the review!

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