ARHI FF: Master Class: Thread 2...part 32 thread 3

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sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#701

Naina, I am so glad Khushi and Arnav had this conversation.

It cleared the air and they both now know where they stand with each other.

And I absolutely love that Arnav loves his infuriated tigress, it takes a real man to admire and love a woman when she is at her furious best.

And now its time to face the family!

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#702

btw thanks fw da pm ...

continue soon : )

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ARSHI_FAN11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#703

Awesome !!!! Arnav is mind blowing - no wonder he is such a successful business man (how I wish I could find one in real life )

I have badly fallen for your story and the level of maturity that you showcase in your writing 👏👏👏👏👏👏

Yes there are problems and issues in Khushi's life, Arnav's life and Khushi-Arnav's life but the way both are dealing with it is commendable !!! ⭐️

The idea of Arnav asking her to be part of the new project and the reasons -very practical... I am looking forward to Arnav's intro to Khushi's family and vice versa and of course lot more romance and intimacy between Arnav-Khushi ☺️

And of course its your imagination and writing thats adding life to it all 👍🏼

Thanks for sharing it with us all and keep up the good work!!!

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Venicestar88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#704

Meeting the parents... now THAT would be interesting :)...esp buaji!!

thank for th ePM... i really enjoy reading this FF...its so different... and shall we say more cheerfull! keep it up

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Mariam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#705

Awesome update, i like how ASR is really putting his best to make it work between them

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733619

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Posted: 13 years ago

#706

Loved it. Looking forward to Arnav meeting the family.

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naina

@warriorprincess

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Posted: 13 years ago

#707

Originally posted by: SansShyam
hi naina, well i like this part.it is a realistic update...You have done a great job so far and i know that you would take us in an amazing ride ahead with this ff...👏👏

your concept is unique and up to now you have maintained our interest very well by finishing with cliff hangers and intense scenes.😊 i have just one drawback to comment on.i feel that there should have been more lessons so that the story fits its name masters class. but unfortunately the teacher is revealed killing the suspense and therefore nothing can be done with it now.😕 its as if a golden opportunity is missed..

anyway it does not stop me from reading this since it is very interesting and entertaining to read.I love Arnav and I adore Kushi. Arnav is a bit mechanical in the recent updates but i'm sure he would get over that and let us see some fireworks between them..😆

Thank you for your feedback... Masterclass is as much a rollercoaster for me to write as it is for you to read...😳

I love critical feedback... And I love defending my work even more so here we go...You raise valid points. What I will say is that I don't believe in deception, so it was imperative for me that Arnav reveals the truth to Khushi about his role so far as quickly as possible. To continue the anonymous master classes would have been a very bad move for Arnav as Khushi does not tolerate liars. In other words, this relationship would have been over even before it had begun. Like I said in my note, just because the revelation has happened... Doesn't mean the master classes are over... Secondly, in relation to Arnav being mechanical... I think I would have been really concerned if he was all over her... The words 'sleazy boss' come to mind and this something that Arnav will NEVER be.

Please keep sharing your thoughts with me... Loving it!😃

Naina

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samarablog

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Posted: 13 years ago

#708

I loved the way Arnav put his ideas forward!
Its time to meet you family! haha
funny!
Nice update!

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#709

That was an awesome update! Just loved it!

I am really glad that Arnav has given her the space she wanted and also he respects her goals.I just loved that. This couple is really matured.Especially Khushi is very matured in this.I like that!

And during their relationship i want her to be a kid too.You know i want the kiddish side of khushi to be shown only to Arnav at least! :)

And Arnav is gonna meet her parents? Will he introduce himself as her boss or Boyfriend? Ahh waiting for the next update! :)

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aadyakali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#710

great update...if i had to go out with ASR i would be so stressedout i would snap in two!!!!! God he is worse than the weather forcast... romantic, businesslike, soft, caring , ruthless...ufff.But our Khushi will pull it off as usual. thank you.